Okay so... I gave one of the fan fictions that I'm writing to my creative writing teacher and... He loved it!!!! He left a note ,see?

He said:

Kailyn: One of the best parts of writing a story is you can choose how it begins. As long as you tie your story in the conflict and have a goal plot sequence it is really up to you. What you have so far I think is fine - for a first draft that is - just keep in mind where your taking the story.

           Side note: I am a fan of fantasy fiction myself.

Any other questions feel free to ask.
                                      -Mr. Manderson

I'm so happy!! In case you were wondering, it's the story that I was talking about in 'I NEED NAMES!!!!' Chapter. The one with Steeljaw going straight forward about wanting to be an Autobot. 😊😊😄😄😊😊😄😄🙃🙃🙃