So I have the colored version and the regular manga version and I took more into account.

( *disclaimer – I meant to say car but it came off as cars so I apologize T^T )

1. Adding so many effects isn't necessary because that's what the screen tones are for. Some stuff effects can be used like giving effects to a drawing of the sun shining but some scenes work without effects. Also I kinda forgot to add the effects of the street lights so whoopsies

I know mistakes like this shouldn't be acceptable in the work field but I made these for fun and I'm experimenting with different things. I bought some manga recently to look at what they used and the different screen tones and shading and panels.

2. I realized I did the panels wrong in the last comic because your supposed to read manga from right to left and that includes the panels. I was struggling to read Demon Slayer because of that so I am gonna try to remember to make my panels from right to left.

3. Mistakes are gonna happen. There's some major ones I should've never made but I merged all the layers down and saved it so I can't go back to change it. I can't keep making mindless mistakes like this and I am willing it admit I rushed through this one. The last page took 3 days and this one took a day and a half.

I'm gonna continue to pump out more comic panels from books or ideas I've done here on wattpad and see what improvements I could do and maybe even complete a chapter of 50 pages. I think I'll set that as my goal.

Every comic panel for every 1-3 days. I can't wait to make more pages 💕