This Oc belongs to AwkwardWritingPotato

Fandom: Creepypasta

Ok, I like learning about people's creepypatsa OC's so this'll be fun!

Name: Madeline Reign (Medi)

Nice name!

Age: Died at age 18

Ok, so we know they're dead. Cool.

Gender: FemalePronouns: She/her
OkBackstory: In my OC book bc it's really long

I've read your OC's backstory before, but I'll put my opinion on it here.

Firstly, having an average childhood makes the story believable. A lot of OC's have tragic backstories starting all the way from childhood, where as this one doesn't and it genuinely makes it more interesting.

Secondly, it's interesting how she thinks emotions are stupid. Maybe to make her backstory a bit better, add a reason for this, you don't have to though, because even without a reason for it, she still has an interesting backstory.

You explain how she died, which is good. Sure it's a bit random to have someone just kill her without a reason, but it's still understandable as she obviously wouldn't know why she was killed, meaning a reason technically isn't necessary. Also, it's interesting how she killed the teens that were in the woods rather than getting their hopes up, it makes it sound like she only did because she didn't want to disappoint them once they found out she didn't know where she was going. Plus letting one go free, but only after neutralizing their emotions is good, and the fact that it means even after death she can carry on with the plan she wanted to enact.

Overall, it's a really good backstory!

Appearence: Long black hair fading to dark green, olive skin tone, gray eyes, an eyepatch over her left eye, gray beannie, a gray blouse, red skirt, and black shoes

Ok, the outfit kind of sounds like a school uniform, which makes sense seeing as she died on her way home from school. And the grey beanie is a nice addition. I don't have much to say about her appearance, but I like it, it's not too overcomplicated, but it's also quite creative.

Weaknesses: Overprotective of Jonah, not very fast, can't do anything on impulse, will freeze up if she doesn't have a plan, needs to rest if she uses her power too often

A nice amount of weaknesses. Being overprotective of someone, in my opinion, is a very relatable weakness that a lot of people have, myself included, which shows that the character is believable because she has such a relatable weakness. Not being fast is another weakness that I think a good amount of people could relate to. It's good to see someone who can't do something on impulse, seeing as most OC's seem to react on an impulse and in all honesty, characters that know what to do instantly are boring. Freezing up if she doesn't have a plan is also understandable, in some situations where a person doesn't know what to do they freeze up, so it's a weakness that makes her an even more believable character. And the fact that she needs to rest if she uses her power too much makes her power decent and not too overpowered.

Crush: Jonah, my other OCExplanation of relationship: Jonah is a yandere for her, and while she doesn't like them in the same way when she first meets them, they slowly get closer and she falls for them. Their dynamic is quiet and calm X loud and childish.

It's cool to see an OC shipped with another OC! And having one of them be a yandere is always fun to imagine. Plus, having them not both instantly fall in love makes it more realistic! And the whole loud and childish x calm and quiet is cool, I always enjoy seeing ships involving two characters with completely contrasting personalities!

Other: Her eyepatch covers a huge wound where her eye would be, and it's her weakest spot, so she will crumble up into a ball in pain if she gets hit there.

So that means people can defend themselves against her if they are aware of her weak spot, that's good.

Do they kill: Yes, but she doesn't like toHow: She will find a group of people who are lost in the woods, and pretend to lead them out. Slowly, she will split them off and shoot them in head bc it's the fastest and painless way. Finally, when there's only one person left, she will lead out of the woods and neautralize them, so they can live with emotions.

Firstly, splitting them off and killing them one by one sounds like something from a horror movie and it is really interesting. And the fact she kills them in a way that is fast and painless makes it seem like she doesn't want them to suffer. Plus, letting one of them survive is good because it fits with her backstory and how she wants to still neautralize the world.

Powers: Neautralizing (She can look into someone's eyes and take or give their emotions. For example, she could make someone feel really happy when she concentrates on their eyes, or she could make them feel terrified. A lot of times, if she can't kill someone effectively, she will give them a horrible mood swing and get them to use her gun on themselves. She mostly uses the power to take all emotions from someone, bc she believes emotions just get in the way.)

A really cool and creative power!

CP Name: Medi Worry

Don't know why, but I ove her creepypasta name.

Reason: To fulfill her philosophy of emotions being in the way. She wants the one person who's left standing to keep going, while the others don't have to deal with the cruel world we live in now.

This makes it seem like she wants to stop everyone from suffering, whether it be from no longer feeling emotions or from killing them.

Species: Ghost
Awesome, I honestly think ghosts are really cool!

Overall, this is a great OC, the only improvements I could think of are possibly putting a reason for her disliking emotions and for why someone killed her. Other than that she seems really interesting!