Character belongs to Benniiboy

fandom ; original. a cliche high school love story, based on tropes and cliches from the 80s and 90s but set in modern day.

Great! I love Cliche love stories!

name ; juno alexander halperin

Nice name! (I was just watching Danganronpa, so I misread Juno as Junko at first)

age ; 16

Ok

gender ; malepronouns ; he/him

Ok

backstory ; juno's father was out of the picture by the time he was born, so it was only him and his mom while he was growing up. she worked (and continues to work) as an international aid worker. the nature of this job means she has to travel a lot, so juno moved schools a lot more often than most kids would. this made it hard to maintain friends.it was this year, when the book starts, that he decided that he was tired of moving everywhere. it was exhausting and he was sick of not having any friends. so his mom let him live with his aunt ami. he's been living there for about three weeks. he and his mom talk as much as they can, but thay really isn't a lot. his mom works a lot and he has school.

Ok, so this whole backstory sounds like something from a Disney Channel show, and I like it. It's something that's cliche but hasn't lost it's charm, so it works well and is quite realistic as well.

appearance ;juno is very small for his age. he stands at about five-foot-three and, considering he hasn't gotten any taller than the sixth grade, it's safe to say he'll be stuck at that height for the rest of his life. despite being short, he's very lanky — he's unpleasantly skinny and has very long, thin limbs that make him feel very awkward and clumsy. his skin as so pale that it's almost translucent. reddish-brown freckles dot his entire face and body. it's practically impossible to find a part of him that isn't completely covered in freckles. he has a mess of fluffy, wavy dark brown hair that constantly falls into his face. he's always tucking it behind his ear. it's sort of long, too, curling at the nape of his neck.his eyes are definitely his most unique feature. they're doe-like, framed by naturally long and dark lashes that make them seem even bigger. his eyes aren't one specific color. rather, it looks like he'd pooled a ton of paints together to get it; part green and part gray and part blue, all muddled together in a mess that somehow manages to look really pretty.

Wow, you went into a lot of detail here, and I can picture it in my head very well, and it's an overall good design. Not too over the top but not too plain either.

weaknesses ;overly self-sacrificing, insecure, stubborn, buries feelings, distrusting, reckless, impulsive, lashes out because he can't deal with his emotions, hostile, closed off, easily annoyed

Lots of weaknesses, ok. It's gonna be hard to say something about all of them, but these are all weaknesses that at least someone can relate to. This makes your character believable and realistic.

any crushes ; markus rodriguezexplanation of relationship ; markus and juno are polar opposites. they don't really get along, mainly because juno's kind of a douche. they start developing a close friendship due to a reason i'm still trying to figure out and catch feelings.(Firstly, sorry for changing one of the words, I don't like putting rude language in my books)

Anyway, it really is cliche, I can see what you mean by the whole thing being a cliche love story, but for me that's cool. I really love cliches, I mean they're used for a reason, people wouldn't use them all the time if they weren't good. And I can see this relationship being interesting as it develops.

other ;• juno is both ethnically and religiously jewish. ashkenazi, to be more specific.

I don't know too much about the aforementioned religions, however, a character's religion can tell you a lot about the character so it's good that you put that.

• he has asthma, which has earned him the unfortunate nickname of 'wheezy'

Ah, being nicknamed that seems like bullying which would explain why one of his weaknesses is distrust.

• he's also autistic and has adhd. he's supposed to take medication for his adhd, but he's prone to forgetting.

This information can also tell us a lot about your character.

Overall, you have a really interesting character! I can't really find any faults.