Okay, so basically this story sucked. Bad plot, unrealistic reactions from the characters, and stuff like that. I tried to base it off of my irl friends, and still try to get the story I had in mind to work, but it didn't work out and I portrayed my irl friends really badly. They weren't anything like they are in real life. So sorry, anyone from the 7 who might be reading this. I just can't write about people...