Moonpaw,crouched;,narrowing her eyes on a vole,she jumped and gave it a killing bite.The vole dangled from her jaw. A brown tabby she cat appeared.it was Acornpaw,Shadetail's apprentice.Acornpaw was older than her and Sandpaw.Acornpaw spotted a bird,She followed it as it landed on dark gray path with yellow marks.The small bird skipped everywhere,and chirped and twittered.Acornpaw kept eye on bird.Moonpaw and Sandpaw and Shadetail sat,watching the young apprentice sneak on prey.Then Moonpaw saw huge creature heading at her.She jumped ,relizing she had daydreamed off.Acornpaw had killed prey..but then path under her shook.Small pebbles jumped.Roar echoed.Acornpaw was standing on ..a Thunderpath!Tge monster roared and kept going.black smoke came out.Acornpaw was paralyzed.

THUD!THUD!

Shadetail eyes filled with sorrow.Acornpaw's body layed in small puddle of ruby red blood,She layed lifeless..body was limped.Her prey was squished."Acornpaw!No!"Shadetail yowled.Moonpaw sat,tears fell on Acornpaw's brown fur.Later,Shadetail carried his lifeless apprentice.Many cats gasped in horror."My Kit!No!Starclan,why?!?!"Honeyflower yowled.Sunpaw,Tigerpaw both saw their dead sister,Ran over,grieving.many cats came.cats sat and tears fell.ears were flatten.

A/N:yas!this done!now for next parts!okay..there be page called:NAME THAT APPRENTICE..one so that I have warrior names for few apprentices.plus..I have like that..that could be Abandoned!:(

-Jaycat Out