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Manik's P.O.V.

Today for the first time i m feeling good. As my angel share her pain with me. Now i m driving the car and she is sitting beside me.  She is not crying now happy me. She is just looking outside the window. Her face is glowing a little. Dam she is so beautiful from inside  and from outside too.

Finally we reach at nandini's home. I stop the car and she come out of car and i also immediately come out . Then she give me a shock of my life. And make my day.

"Thank u.. for giving me a new life.. manik "she said only few words after hugging me. But i find these words also so magical. For a movement i was taken a back but then i also hug her back. Wao i feel so peace whenever i hold her in my arms. I don't wanna leave her. But she break the hug poor me.

But next movement what i see it take away my heart." Oh God r u planning to kill me by shocks.. "i said to god.

As for the first time i see her smile. Wao.. so beautiful.. her smile makes her more pretty. Smile looks so perfect on her face. And she is smiling because of me . It's a great feeling when u become the reason of someone smile.

"Bye.. manik "she after waving her hand in front of me leave from there. I m just looking only at that direction from where she has left like a fool. As  her smiling face is not going from my mind. Her smile wao.. so beautiful.

Priya's P.O.V.

I am preparing lunch for my baby nandini. It's hurt a lot seeing my daughter in deep pain but I always try to cheer her up. But i know her pain is not living her. It is not easy for her to live happily. But i m like a support system  of her who will always be with her.

Then the bell of my house ring . I get up and goes to open the door. Opening the door i get a most beautiful and precious gift my life. Which is my nandini's smile. I was dying to see her smile from last 3 year. Only a mother can understand my pain.

"Hi.. mommy "she said while hugging me tightly and i also hug her back. This is what she used call me  3 year back "mommy" i really craving to hear mommy from her mouth. Oh god today i m so thankful to god. He has given my daughter back.

"Mommy i m sorry i have hurted u alot.. but today i understand that our life is very precious.. we should live our life happily.. "she said holding my hand. Her words having no fakness  really she wanna live her life again. This is the only think i used to say daily to her but today she herself understand this fact. How and when she understand  this isn't matter for me but the think matters to me is that i get back my baby.

"I love u.. so much bacha i m so happy.."i just said this putting my hand on her face and a tear roll down from my eyes. No no..  i m not crying this tear is of happiness.

"Oh mommy.. now i m fine.. now don't make the atmosphere emotional.. "she said while wiping my tear and i m just smiling . Oh god I can't explain this feeling. Feeling of getting my daughter back. I know who is the person behind this.

"Now come.. inside i m so tired.. na mommy..  i tell you"she said while dragging me inside and close the door by her leg.  I m speechless now not a single  word coming out of my mind. I m so happy. I m just admiring my daughter happy face. It's like beautiful dream.

Manik P.O.V.

Oh god her smile has made me crazy. I am in love with her smile. Wao.. i never felt this much happy before. I never thought that one day a person smile would have ever effect me this much that i would become crazy after seeing her smile.

I am smiling like a fool and really ask me how much it getting difficult for me to drive the car. As her smiling face again and  again coming in front of my eyes. She think that i give her the hope of living but she don't know that she is the only reason of my smile. She is angel of my life.

Nyonika P.O.V.

Hey i m nyonika malhotra monster manik's mother. I m business women. No one knows I crave for my son happiness. He never smile. He always keep shouting on servant of house. He loves me alot and smile for me so that i don't get sad seeing him like this. I know why he is like this but I can't change our past. Why he don't understand being a monster is very dangerous for him. His anger is eating him up. God plz give some happiness to my son.

I m sitting at hall reading magazine when i see manik enter inside having a smile on his face. No no his smile is not fake. He coming toward me only and i m looking at him shocking. Is he really my son monster manik.

"Mom.. mom.. "he shout and holding my hand make me stand up. And start dancing with me. What has happened to him. He is looking so happy. I m surprised. No words is coming out from my mouth. What will be more precious for a mother like me.. that he is seeing her son smile for the first time.

"Manik.. manik r u okay.."i ask but he keep on dancing with me.. having a constant smile on his face. My son is really happy.. I can't believe.

"Mom.. i more then okay.. because i get my angel.. i m in love mom.. i m in love she is so beautiful"what m i  hearing right seriously my son fallen in love with a girl. He use to hate the word love. But jo bhi ho.. who so ever the girl is.. she bring smile on my son face. She must be a special girl. I m so much thankful to her.

"Really.. oh manik i m so much happy for u finally u find your love.."i said while hugging him happily. Servant are staring at him. And getting shock like me seeing manik behaviour. I m so happy mother.

Writer P.O.V.

Manan's mother were going through  same pain. They were craving to see their child real happiness. And today finally they see their  happiness. This movements is so precious for a mother like them. Only their smile has given them lots of happiness. They are feeling so thankful to god .

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"Manik.. " manik hear cabir's voice when he is sitting in hall and smiling like a  fool remembering about her smile. He come out from his lala land when he hear his voice.

He see fab 4 are coming toward him like that they will eat him up in next movement. What has happened to them. Manik get up seeing them.

"Manik.. yeh tu jo bhi kar rha hai na bhut galat kar rha hai.."mukti said making manik confuse.

"What.. "he ask confusingly while all look at each other.

"Revenge.. kisi ko hurt karna is not right.. "he get a shock listening this word from alia mouth.

"Manik revenge yeh toh ushai hum sab se lena chayie.. humhne ushke sath itna galat kiya.. ush bachari ne toh kabhi kuch kha hi nhi.. "abhi said as like he really feeling sorry . But what just has happened to them.

"May be there is some problem with her that's why she is like this.. we shouldn't have insulted her.. "now cabir said and  manik is feeling happy that their friends are also thinking the same what he think. Now there is not any reason left for him to hide the truth from them.

"Hahhaa... "Manik start laughing on them and they all look at each other confusingly.

"Manik.. have u gone mad.. why r u laughing.."mukti ask confusingly putting hand on his shoulder.

"Guyz.. i m not taking any revenge.. i m in love with nandini.. "he finally confess his love and they all look at him shockingly. They were not accepting this answer from him

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PRIYA'S P.O.V.

Nandini  for the first time sleeping so peacefully​ in my lap. I m so happy as i m seeing her sleeping so peacefully. I know who is the person who has helped and given her the reason of smile and living. The person is manik malhotra. First time i met him many years back when he was a small kid and he was in so pain. That day i was unaware that this kid only give  me my precious gift back. My nandu happiness back.

End of update

Hey guyz.. again chotu update.. from this update i mainly want to focus on mother happiness seeing their children happy. So how u find the update

What do u think about manik's pain ?

Few word for mother happiness in this part ?

So finally nandini smile.. how do found  manik's reaction seeing her smile ?

How do u find nyonika's character ?

What do u think what has happened with fab 5 that they changed so much in a day ?

Do u excited to know priya's and manik's story.. and think think how priya knows manik's from his childhood

And lastly i wanna say.. i wanna give few parts of happiness after that story will become hell emotional..

Love Mehak