Heya everyone!!! how are you all?
Must be waiting for reuslts to come out *hehe* but you have to wait few more hours for it but till then you can read the reviews below..... Must say you all done a very very good job while writing.

Reviews:

1 - You Live In My Soul - The starting was very interesting, you put us into a thought, such as thinking it could it be Veer who betrayed her, but as you processed with the story, you cleared it out. Then it took a cliché turn, which developed into a small funny argument. We were also given a hint that the saviour is Veer, so there wasn't anything to think about. I enjoyed reading their small argument, especially when you stated about polluting the Ganga River. I love the way you portrayed Veer's character, he's not too serious but a person who would make you laugh on serious situations. Too many familiar elements were noticed by me, such as meeting a drunkard on the road but the dialogues at that situation were a little different which I liked, especially the part where he will teach her how to successfully commit suicide and that was something hatke. , ahead, their arguments are cute but I seriously love the way you portrayed Veer's character. He's encouraging her to end her life but at the same time is stopping her, those scenes where he slowly described how it will kill her was amazing, it gave us a hint that he doesn't want her to die and is faking to support her. The way you created that illusion, was good, for a moment I actually thought Ragini would die but that cliché turn came again and gave us a new hint that Veer is in love with Ragini. There was also a hint given that Veer isn't fine and is suffering from something but they way you gave an end to the story was something I liked, it wasn't too emotional but instead was a sad ending on a happy note.

I enjoyed reading this OS and the way you presented this used concept was good.

2 - 6 Days 6 Dates - The title is very interesting, it's something that would bring attention of people, like we say, eye catching. Moving onto the story, I liked the way you started it, it's something different and the way Sanskar introduced himself was hatke. The story itself was getting interesting, the words used were amazing, I liked the way Sanskar described his family, including the animals. It was a good way of Sanskar describing his emotions in his point of view. The flashbacks were hinted out very well, I enjoyed reading that small argument between Ragini and Sanskar in the first flashback. I like the way you portrayed Ragini's character. The way you described was good and the flashbacks that you presented were a mixture of elements. I love the way you add funny elements to spice of the story, such as the name of the dog, Arjun Singh. There were also cliché turns made in the story but the way you presented it was amazing. The funny moments continued to entertain throughout the story but the proposal was cute and I loved the way he said I want you to be my wife, it's something hatke to say and the ending was good.

I enjoyed reading this OS and the concept was presented very well.

3 - RagSan - Reuniting With You - The starting was very good, I liked the way you presented Ragini and Swara's talk, the most likeable thing was Ragini explaining Swara about how every small thing matters, it also hinted out that something happened with Ragini. The dialogues which ragini used explaining about love truly touched my heart, it was something deep and understanding even it gives me goosebumps.The way the truth came out was good, for a moment I thought Sanskaar will marry her. I suspected Ragini being dead but was waiting because it was confusing me but the way you described their emotions were amazing, especially Sanskar regretting. The way you presented i really appreciate it.  It was something different. You gave a sad ending on a small happy note. Even my water tap started because of the song and lyrics you choose and wrote at the end part when ragini is singing and sanky realises it to be her and then she was fading in the sky and sanky wants to hold her it takes my heart away. It was something touchy and beautifully written. Weldone.

I enjoyed reading this OS and I liked the way you presented this used concept with your own spice.

4 - My Butler - The title is something very interesting and the starting was also interesting. There was an unexpected turn to the story which was cliché but the way you wrote it made it a little different. This whole concept was unique, Sanskaar being a butler and Ragini being his angel, I liked the way the servant's snapped back at her. You also know when to make it entertaining along with funny. I loved the way you added that small twist with Sanskaar, his dialogues were funny and it was a small shock stop for me, I thought Sanskaar will support her but I loved the way you broke that illusion. And the continuation of the story after the leap was also something different, it was Hatke. Even after being ragini boss he still treats her like the way he used to before was amazing. When shehkar comes and asked ragini to marry someone i thought that she will completely deny but you took it very well that she agrees for her father's will but at the end of the moment she realize what's best for her and goes to sanky that's something great.There were loads of elements which impressed me in this story, the ending was also made on a happy note. It also gave us a small teaching.It was one of the best love stories. I forget to add the bigg boss scene😂😂it was amazing one and i love someone ehmm ehmmm part which u shows in bb wala part.

And I enjoyed reading this OS, you presented this concept hatke which I liked.

5 -  Criticized - Today, I was given a chance to give a review about an os namely 'Criticized'.
To initiate, I liked the concept and the main view of the story. As the title is, it gave full justice to the title 'Criticized' .A story of a woman, stuck in a situation which changed all her life equations. It somehow enlightened the whole racket stuff, much more focusing on the life after one is suffered.
Sanskar as a lawyer did a quite good work, I admired the first glimpse of him, which really compelled me in thinking of a quite honest and dedicated he is to the constitution.
Ragini, the protagonist; who is held in a web of deceit by her friend Sakshi and Aditya, who are secretly handling a racket of selling girls.
The story continues on how Ragini ends up falling prey to their plan to how she fights over the allegations on her with the help of Sanskar.

The title of this story is very interesting and eye catching, it gives us many thoughts about the story beforehand, which is good as it would get more attention. A cliché turn was made, revealing that person to be Ragini. The dialogues used in the police station were also shocking, this forces us to think what must've happened and why Ragini got arrested and it also creates an image in mind. Ragini's dialogues also seem strong, there is a image building time in between which gives us a hint of what may happen next. Some unexpected turns came which I wasn't expecting and this was a plot twisting story, I loved the way Sanskaar stood for Ragini. It had a very cute ending.

To be honest, the story was different from what I usually read and I did like it somehow.
One thing which made me smile over was Sanskar and his character, specially the scene where he makes her laugh with his lame love story!

It had been a pretty good OS! I'm glad I've reviewed one! And I enjoyed reading this OS and you have very well written this used concept with your own charm.

6 - A Indescribable Love Story - The starting was very interesting, all the praises that were said gave me a hint of some actor like SRK, but it was a surprise turn when Lakshya's name came forth, I was kind of surprised and more interested in what will happen next. That sudden revelation of him loving Ragini was another surprise for me, Ragini's emotions were also described well. It leads to a mystery of what must've happened. Those moments in the past were cute and different. The way you describe both of their povs was amazing it makes us understand them and their sides very well.Those letters sent by Ragini to him were a hatke idea. God the end was twisting. I thought that ragini died by drinking poison but Thank God laksh saves him. It was the part where i was scrolling fast to know the end but hushhh it was lovely one.This whole story was good, there were some elements which stood out and it ended on a happy note, which was cute.

I enjoyed reading this Os and liked the way you added your own spice into this very used concept.

7 - Friends - The start was interesting, it gave us the hint of the story and as accepted, they fall in love with each other but like everyone else thought, I also thought Lakshya loved Ragini and the way the twist came, hufff! That was a plot twisting twisttt!toIt was nothing we expected, hats off for this unique plot twisting scene. I enjoyed reading this OS and I loved the way you added your own spice into this used concept.

It was one of the unique concept you write on and the way you presented it hats off girl. I was hooked to it while reading it. The way you show their friendship jealousy love was unique. You can wrote a whole story on this os. The twist was amazing it was something that we never expected. The way the truth comes out and then sanskar behaves was truly seems a real one. I thought it was ragsan wedding in the end but it end up being kavsan and the part where ragini makes laksh meets a boy was hilarious i was laughing imagining the scene over n over. Well done it was unique and hatke one i loved. You wrote every emotions very well.

I loved the OS and the hatke concept you take up. It was awesome one.

8 - Confused - Very interesting title, it was a confusing start but cleared during the story. I liked the way Ragini's character was portrayed, it was something different. There were some element's which stood out in this story, like bond of SwaRagini and SanLak.

It was different, i like the way you take up this story. Love at first sight but then realising it to be their friends love then feeling sad for their fate. I loved the office part when ragini blames when lakshh enters and laksh father reaction over it i laugh at that part and the way she planned with sanskar heheh naughty ragu. I loved her character and the way she beats the person. I loved it.

I like the way you set up your own version with this used concept and I enjoyed reading it.

9 - Monsoon Rain - The starting was very descriptive and well described of the situation, but it changed all of a sudden without telling, like from a POV to third person and yet again, it was described well. That whole concept of love at first sight was good in this story, it had been beautifully stood out with some basic elements.

The way it starts i thought it will be some filmy types that he will find him the other day like a lover but you took it great with a leap. I love the lines you written in between it was indeed beautiful. I also like how he changes himself after her arrival and wait for chances to talk to her. The way you presented it was lovely. I loved this story. It was entertaining one.

I enjoyed reading this OS and I liked the way you added your own version to this very used concept, the title of this story was also very different. The ending was written beautifully.

10 - Kisses For Life - The start kept me hooked and those basic cute moments stood out, then it took a small turn which gave us, the readers few hints of what maybe upcoming next. The whole story was written very descriptively as well as amazingly, the way you wrote this story made few cliché moments stand out. It was a love story filled with sweetness i truly loved it. Both read eo dairies remembring there moments was kinda sweeeet. The way ragini supports him was "hayeeeee*😍 moment. The way they both admires eo secretly was cute. I love the bond they share in this story it was something unbreakable. Loved the scene when he cries keeping his head  over her lap because he feels so. It was one of the sweeet love story of our RAGSAN i loved.

I enjoyed this OS and I liked the way you presented it with your own spice.

11 - You Will Never Choose Me - A beautiful start to a beautiful ending, the way you described emotions in this story was amazing, I loved the way you picked up on those little details and gave it a standing out moment. While reading every line i thought that they will end up being together but it was touchy the way he ends up his life remembering her gosssh i felt like drowning too, when it shows that she goes to check up on him i was like go faster lady he is dieing but he dies was unexpected and after living in his memories she also dies. It was an emotional and heartbreaking love story. I truly loved it, the way you take it and describe great job.

I really enjoyed this OS, it was something very different.

12 - Tujhko Jo Paya - Something truly different, like really, I have no words to say. It started off interestingly and ended interestingly too, I'm sorry, I'm speechless. I have no words left to express. In starting i thought that ragsan were dating each other but you showed it different. Both were players and dated girls n boys, even they celebrate their breakup party too wohooo. I thought after making love they will confess but again a twist came up and ragini started ignoring him. Felt bad for him that time, i thought he will confess his feelings but again a twist that they hax argument and he left but finally a sweet moment came up when she tells him about being father and his reaction was kinda cute overall it was a romantic one.

I enjoyed reading this OS and liked the way you added your own spice into this story, a very well done.

13 - Together Lonely Night - A very interesting story as well as start, kuch hatke tha iss story mein, the whole concept and settings were standing out, few cute moments were pointed out and the way you portrayed everyone's character in this story seemed to be matching, very well done for that. We also received few hints from which we could possibly have guessed what was happening, their confession part was very cute. I love it from starting i thought that ragini will say yes when everyone asked the person being his bf to jealous sanky but she denied and then next she shows someone pictures and the way he reacts was funny and then the way he purposely makes a plan to spend sometime with her without anyone knowledge was cute. Aww i love this sanky and ragini in this one. The talk about sanam re dialogues and small nok jhok was cute too. Infact the whole story was cute. The last part where laksh n harman were teasing him was hilarious poor sanky i thought that ab toh dono gaye but it was amazing one really enjoyed.

I enjoyed reading this OS and loved the way you added your own charm as well as ideas into this used concept.

It was an absolutely pleasure reading all these stories, thank you very much for entertaining us with your wonderful One Shot's. You all did a very great job and once again, hats off to all of you. It was tough to choose between all these amazing stories but what to do we have to poor us *giggles*.

All the very best for the upcoming results which will be out any time :)

Until then be crazy be mental and be hatke :p

-mental sister's