Chapter Ate The Serimmony 1 So, the chapter ate the ceremony? Was it tasty?
STOP REVOFIGN BAD! but than u JASZpAW for tehh godo revewis uve ben levving

StarPaw skided into de Camp. "FIRSTAR" SHE YOWLED "I ha to tel; uo somesting?"

"nut ow StarOaw" he sadi "yuve gut to become WARRIOR!' Thank you for delaying the "confession", Firestar.

"MOGOSH REALLY creamed StarPaw.

YEAH SAID firestar "Youv been a war for onll 3.14 dayss Pi reference? Math people, where you at? butt u are the best apent ice in the cAlan. Ur perfect. We ndd you to help dfeat BlackStar and ShadowclaN. And all teh other calns. Tehy are tyring 2 attack us were in the meddle of a warr. " And how did Starpaw not know this information already?

"omgosh WE ARE?" scremmed StarPal she sus so surpissed! Considering you're (somehow) one of the clan's best fighters, shouldn't this information have gotten to you sooner?

"Ya DustPelt did while U were away in your walk Rivrclan attacked us." Said SandTrom. She locked sortaf sad she New FireStart lovved Stargleam. Darn it. But it wass ok she newt wht wus best. Why is Sandstorm just letting this happen?

"OMGoht" sid StarPaw. "Quickk mack me a warrror!"

"Oak" said Firestar. He wlaked up to StarPaw. "aLL Cats Gather Round Who Are Older To Cach There One Prey!"

"Tday we are making a new Warrior."

The calnn GASPED!

"SarkPaw! StarPaw!: Sarkpaw? Is that another apprentice we don't know about? shouted the clan. They all new infancy infancy? it was she whom was beng mad a warrior.

Starpaw was so exited! She'd never bin so hap inner life! Except for maybe the 3.14 days ago when she was made an apprentice.

"StarPaw....." said FirePaw. He was simile like shed never sent him simle behfore. "Are you ready to become a Warrior in the Name of Starcaln?:"

"Yes!" she shock3d.

"oak." Eh sad. "Then by the powers of Starclan, I gave you this narme. From now on, you will be none as StarPaw Starpaw's Warrior name is Starpaw? for your pel which sings like the starss Then shouldn't she be named "Starsong", if her pelt sings like the stars? and ur conectin 2 StarClann. We onner you'r bravvery and" " kindness." The fact that the author put the "kindness" in quotes like that makes it so much better.

"SarkPaw! There's Sarkpaw again! StarPaw!: shouted the clan. They They what?

StarGleam Oh, so that's her warrior name... girned. She wass a Warrior! At least!"

"FireScar," Firescar? Is that a Firestar imposter or something? she said, cuming over 2 him. "I wanna tell u somesing." They locked sirously at him.

"yeah wat is it?" he sad, hop shinning in his eayres. Hop? Are his pupils bouncing?

Dos he knew? StarGlema think.

"Firestar...." She brethed. She cullednt she was actually dong this after so lung.

"I....."

WINDCLAN ATTAK! Shioted a voise from obove the Camp. *deep breath of relief* Thank you, whoever that voice was, for cancelling the confession yet again.

It was....

HOLYLEAF!

I workd reall' herd on dis chapter n tired 2 spell good so plzz review NICE! ...