Chapter 44  A SUPRIRSE Oh, goody.

StarGleam ran throug the forest as her paws skimed the ground liek she was flyying. Al of the cats of TigerStar's gong ran behin her.

"Faster GleaStar!" Tigerstra hissed. "We need to get there befor the sun goes down." Why? Wouldn't it be better to attack under cover of darkness?

"Why" asked Glamestar. She was confused why would tey need to go so fats! "Because well have to spend the nite if we dont. No, you won't. saud TigerStar "and we wouldt want that to hapen?

StarJelam nofded. She ran fatser. Tehn................THEY WERE AT THE TUNDERLAN CAMP! So we're just gonna yada-yada all the information on how they got to the camp so quickly?

"NOOO!" YELLED JAZSONG SWHO WAS GARDING THE ENTRANSE. "QUICK EVEROEN GET OUT HER AND HELP ME FITE!"

All of Thundercaln came out for the batle Even the kits? You said ALL of ThunderClan... 1 there was JazzSong and RedPelt and LinoBlaz and JayFether and DawnSparkle and GrayStrip and everyone! Byt Stainclan was bigger they had TigerStar and RainStar and FeatherPaw and LakePool and TigerKit and mos important G;EAMSTAR! Most importantly? Really?

And so they atacked the camp! It was a realy long bat;e but StarPaw was'nt getting hurt because she was STARGLEAM. No shit, Sherlock. But sudenly.........

THE TRIBE OF WATER!!!!!!!!!!11111!!!1! What? They've only just arrived for this portion of the fanfic and didn't even get a MENTION before this. It's almost as if the author was pulling random clans and characters out of a hat...

"Oh1 She who runs with leaves!" Who? RainStar and LakePolo gasped. Tehy both recognized the shecat at the head of the group she was one of there friends. "Help us figth!" they beged her.

AND SO THE ENTIRE TRIBE JOINED THE BATTLE! There was nothing that showed the tribe agreeing to this. The leader didn't say anything.