Chapter 23 The Vist
SatrPaw rnan away she aws tears weire sterawming down her nick. Down her neck? Why not her face...? WHY WAS HERE LEAF SO BADD?1!1?111/?12 Everyone ated her1! One cat isn't "everyone". all ehr family nad frineds were DEED!1!1 Are you sure about that? shed gone throu so much and now not even JAXPAW her BSET FIREND would hepl here!11? I thought you loved her...? Now you're saying "best friend"? Make up your mind!

She flet her kits move in side her. she alreayd loved them s o much. But it was hard becuase she loved JazzStae! News flash! You can love multiple things. Her life was so TREIBL RITE NOW. Are you sure about that? Sudenly a starlcna cat came down from the sjy. How convenient... It was..... SLIVERSTREAM!1 "dont worry GleamStap" Gleamstap? said the silverstream! Itwall all be ok in the nd youll sef.

"i dnot know how it can be." she said. This story just flips between being angst and fluff like some sort of cursed yo-yo. "it will." Epxlinad Silberstream. What exactly is Silverstream "explaining" here? Sure, she's STATING something, but she isn't really EXPLAINING it.

"I HAVE KITS SILVERSDREAM! IKTS!11!1" SPARKLED STARGLEAM. A lot of other cats have kits too. You aren't the first cat to have kits, you aren't special.

O know said StaSilverStream. "but ive ben in yoru place before iknown what it fells like,' Basically what I said in my previous comment. she liked StarkIts fourhead. It was a nice forehead. then she luf.

StarTit snifed. She had 2 get better. For her KTIS. SHHE START wwalking awy into the forest.

I DONT KNOW IF I BEABLE TO UDATE MCUH RIHTE NWO IM SO SADDDDDDDDDDDD T-T