Chapter 20 STARCALN
"Oh no Broakcnstar!" yelled StarGleam mad;y I can;t be talkin to brokenStar!" So you can't talk to Brokenstar but you can talk to Tigerstar (and Hollyleaf)? And sheran away leaving AshFurt behin her. She run and ranned and runend and then se was at StarClan!" I'm sorry, what? If she somehow managed to find the border, it probably wouldn't be that quick. If it was, that implies that the "border" was most likely visible from where Gleamstar was standing.

"Yay Im not at the dark Fort anymro1! Yeah, surprisingly you aren't. she thought happly and then she wasked across the broard and then she was in Starclan!1 But you already crossed the border in the last paragraph. Can Gleamstar turn back time?

"Welcmon to Starcaln said YellowFangn Yellowfang, you've already met Gleamstar in StarClan. she was stnding ther with LefPool, BrambleClan, BrambleClan? I see that Brambleclaw got tired of ThunderClan and decided to make a new clan. Good for him! SpottedLeaf and BakSrae.

"Blakstar yoyre not in the Dark FGort !" Gleamstar yelled hellpy, she didnt want him to be their she lovd him after all. WHY?!?!

"Of course not" BlackStar relipe. "wy would i be their I mean I luv tou after tll2!" Ooooohhhhh. So if you love Gleamstar, you instantly go to StarClan. Noted.

"well thats tru" reoidned Gleamstar. "but I can't be in StarCan! Oalready came here once I cant do it agan!" But we're STILL not halfway through this fanfiction, so you're likely gonna get revived.

"well it looks like you haf. said BlueStar and she said "but we cant send you back to the calns again, this time it locks like we'll have to REINCART YOU." Called it. She's coming back.

"Omh Reincartion!" yelled StarGam "you mean like what haopned to CinderPaw?"

"Yah" said CinderPelt comin yp to her "thast what happened t me I was reicnanrt." She Said. Cinderheart is in fact in the allegiances! So, is StarClan reincarnating Gleamstar because they can? Oh, right, it's for the "plot". Got it, got it.

"But it might be awhile" said SpottedPool Who's Spottedpool? Did Spottedleaf and Leafpool fuse together? "after all we have to figre out Ow were going do that firtsl} Considering the fact that you appear to be going by the "we did it once, we can do it again" policy, I don't see how this isn't instant. "go do somethinm elese" That's a VERY shallow excuse.

"okay" siad GleamStar and she luf. She heard her namer being called and she turnd around and saw HawkForst standing over her body. How, exactly?

"StarPaw noooooooooooooooooooooo!1111!11111!1!11!111!" je yowle. "Starcaln how ould you od this to me!" "We were about to get marti. Maybe she died because cats just sort of become mates instead of having a ceremony.

"Im sorry Hawk Frost" said StarGleam "I'll be back soon I think"!

"Wat whose there?" HawkFrost looked around but hed idnt sieantyhing. How did he hear her? She's in another REALM!

"Its me GleamStar" said GleamStra looking at him.

"I cant see yo" he said and he buped into a tree. Then he fele down. HAHAHAHA. Good riddance.

"bye HawkForst!" said StarGleam Wow, she just left him behind? Rude, much? and she left cius she didn' want to see what would haben when her belocd HawkyForest wock up so she luf. Wait, he wasn't awake during that whole segment? Does she have the ability to walk in dreams like her dad does?

"hi their StarGlema" said a voice and GlemaGleam looked around. "Whose there!1!11!" she eked and it was... Falled leaf!1!111111!1!11111 Fallen Leaves, if you fall in love with Gleamstar, I'm going to throw my phone into the wall.