Chapter 2 the Rise of a Heroin Don't do drugs, kids! It's really bad for you!
ok jazzie-kun pleas dont get mad at me cause your not in it yet. You'l apear soon dont worry. I wonder, could this be the aforementioned Jazzpaw?

StarKit wock up and sunlit was in the branches. She closed her eyes againstill tired. Butter mom wouldn't let her sleep not today. BUTTER MOM! What a knee-slapper! I'll have to tell my friends this one!

"Sweety its time to get up" said Dawnsparkle; her eys shinning. "Today is important today." Redundant phrasing is redundant.

"What is it Mom" said StarKit awake right away. Then the she cat rememembered what today was.

"Ohmigosh its my serimony today!' she squelled excercisedly. So many words in that sentence were misspelled... Today was the day she was an apprentice! "Kit becomes an apprentice at the start of the fanfic cliche" *sin counter dings*

She flicked outside not even waiting for her Mom. But her Mom cot up to her quick.

"Sweety you know the clans don't except cat slike use sometimes." She said. Let me guess... Starkit "isn't like other girls?" or in this case, she "isn't like other she-cats?"

StarKit glared. She didn't lake beig told that. Just because her Mom was a usedto be Shadowclan cat and her dad was jayFeather the medicine Cat didn"t mean she ws different! Of course she's half-clan. Of course she is.

"StarPaw come here." Said FireStar from the leg. Is this leg that Firestar is on a Twoleg leg? Or is this leg of a cat? He jumped down.

"StarKit it s tome for you to become an apentice: he said. "Your a strong brave cat and because of that I will mentor with you." *displeased sigh*

Ever body gasped. StarKit did too. Se herd hear mother say "Wow!". "Wow!"?!?! Your kit is the leader's apprentice! If I were Dawnsparkle, I'd be much more excited then a simple "Wow!".

Firehert liked her shoulder. It was a nice shoulder. He whispered in her ear "youll be the best their ever was StarPaw I know ti." Ooooooooh! What kind of tea? Green tea? Herbal tea? Bubble tea?

Surpised she walked away when they were done howling for her./ Howling? I though this was Warrior Cats, not Warrior Wolves! Then she went ofer to JayFeathern and DawnSparkle who were very prod.

"Daughetr where very happy but he have to say something said Jayfeather his chest puffed ouit. "You see there is this prophcy Starcaln gave me it said that out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."

StarPaw gasped. What does it mean? I wonder...

lol I update fast dont i. REVEIW or ill hit over the head with a frying pan! XDD jk *gasps* A THREAT OF VIOLENCE! I better review fast!