Chapter 17 Returnr
StarGleam shock her head waling up from the derm. FireStar was looking at her and his gren eys where sorrid. "GlaeStar you were takling in yuour slept are you ok?" he asked. JayFeather looked upsid to. So Jayfeather was upset that his daughter became a leader?

"Yeah yeah Im fin" StarGleam reponded gettin up. "I just had a badd dream thass all." "It's nothen." It happened at your leader ceremony, and you think it means nothing?

"If your sur." Firestar, I thought you'd be smarter! Said FireStrar and they left the MonoPool and headed back too the Thundercaln camp.

"GleamStar your back!" How do they know her new name already? I know that they know that Gleamstar became a leader, but wouldn't they just default to her leader name being 'Starstar'? they said happy, crowding all over her. LakePaw and RedPaw looked sad thou, becas GleamStarg has sad they cant be in luv. You can! All you need to do is ditch Stargleam! But GleamSar ingored them. But she new she had too do somefing more impotent. Which is...?

"LinoBlaz" she said locking for her deputy. "I nedd you to tack a patrole tothe Sadowclan boulder," "I need you ro tell BlackStar im leder know." Wouldn't he know this already? He came with an ambush patrol to try and prevent this! And he even gave in and let her become leader! she said and she turnd and walked over the keader's den evwn though everone was trying to ask her questns about the serimy. "Guysz let me to to bed" I am your new leader! And my first action as your new leader will be to sleep! she said shoeing them awy. /"Let me have a niche to myself!" As if...

They all walked away groabling. "She nevwr let's us have any fun" said BeryNoise. "Thats not kawaii at all." Why the random Japanese?

GleamStar didnlt care sge was waiting for FireStar. Then FireHert Everyone's becoming a name flip-flop again. came into her den. "I'm levving" he said and he lef. Good riddance. StarGleam followed him uyelling "WAIT!1!11 Where are you gong?"

"Well I cant be ledder so I'm just goint to leaf for a while. Maybe Ill be a rogue, or maybe I'll go join skyCaln. Who knows?" Then he luf. Don't come back. StarGamet was sad b/c that was her mentor and one of the cats she luvved leaving but it was ka since thass what he wanted to due. And he's also your great-grandfather, but I guess the author glossed over that long ago.

"Its oka StarStar" said HawkFrot appearating out of nonwhere. "I mean I love you so its all god."

"I no" Why is Gleamstar not surprised at Hawkfrost's appearance? said StarGlea prring she wrapped her tail around HawkFrosts face she dint care that he was a rogue, He is not. He's a Dark Forest cat. she loved him. And now they could be togethier!/ *deep sigh*