NOTE! NOTE! NOTE!

Sorry it took so long for me to write this chapter! This is one where the story really gets exciting and stuff! REMEMBER! I DO NOT LIKE FLAMERS SO DO NOT FLAME MY STORY! I'm pretty sure no one likes their stuff being criticized.

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Moonshimmer licked her paws delicately, sunlight bouncing off her coat, instead of her looking white like she usually did, she looked a beautiful silver! That's not how that works. The shadows that fell on to her seemed to form perfect black stripes on her coat That's also not how that works. and she stumbled away from camp! She has woken up early at dawn and she went into the forest because the leader had told her to do this because the leader wanted to let her hunt! Really? I'm pretty sure Moonshimmer can do whatever the fuck she wants since she's all powerful... She felt very guilty and her belly did a flop as she wanted to be truthful to her leader and tell him about the other cats who wanted to rule the forest, but she could not.

As soon as the beautiful warrior set off into the forest, she began to cry salty tears. Mmm, ocean tears... tasty. She ran away into the forest, saddened of guilt!

She saw a tom-cat almost immediately, he was quite breathtaking. He had a glorious golden-brown coat with tiny golden spots on his pelt, making him look almost like a cheetah, wild and free! She went to him, hypnotized by beauty. Oh god, not another potential mate for Moonshimmer!

"G...g...Greetings!" Moonshimmer burst out, wanting to just lay next to the rogue, carefree and fine.

"Who are you?" This is actually an appropriate reaction! I'm surprised he didn't just fall in love immediately... The tom-cat meowed with music in his voice.

"I am...I am..."Moonshimmer stammered, she did not want him to know that she was a clan cat, even if she was loyal to her clan, so she choked out. "I'm Moony!" What about scent? I guess no one cares about scent in this fanfic...

"Oh...Hello, do you live around here?" He asked hastily.

"N...no." Moonshimmer lied, almost joyful that he was talking to her. Wouldn't it be obvious in her voice she was lying?

"Oh..." The rogue meowed, mischief in his voice. Goddammit, they're gonna fall in love, aren't they? "Let me show you around..."

He took his tail and twined it with the Moonshimmer's and licked her muzzle. Called it. They took a stroll through the wood quickly and by the end, Moonshimmer was charmed.

Suddenly, he and her He and her? Why not use 'they'? were sitting by an old berry bush in the sunlight. It was night now and the moon was almost full.

"I love you."Moonshimmer said.

"I do too." And there's another cliche Mary Sue fanfic thingy to check off the list... *marks sheet* Said the rogue. "My name is Phantom." Is he perhaps related to Mournfulphantom? That one cat in the allegiances?

"Pretty name." Moonshimmer said.

"Moony..."

"Yes?"

"Would you be more comfortable if I called you...Moonshimmer?" What the fu- first of all, how? Second of all, when? Third of all, why?

Moonshimmer flinched and he smiled.

"My name is really Phantomstar. I was once leader of Diamondclan and I saw you all these times I watch the forest grow and grow." Okay, but how? Moonshimmer is pretty young.

"Were you banished?"

"Yes. My clan turned against me."

He said nothing more! He licked a paw and stared at her! Finally, he said something, "I fell in love with a loner and you. Vanillastar, my brother loves you too!" WHAT THE ABSOLUTE FUCK. OH MY GOD. I think I'm going to cry-

He burst out. "He tried to kill me because he loved you and was jealous!" Of course there's a love triangle... I'm tired of this...

"Oh no!"

"But, I love you too much, Triolet will understand when I depart with her."

"Who is Triolet?"

"My mate." Okay, but how do you know Triolet will accept this and move on?

"Oh."

"But, Moonshimmer, I will love you--"

"No you do not, because I do!"

A she-cat was there, she had beautiful white fur and black eyes and brown legs and a brown face.

"I love you, Phantomstar!"

"No, I do!" Moonshimmer growled loudly.

"Moonshimmer, I love you. I do not love you, Triolet."

The tom-cat opened his jaws against Moonshimmer's open mouth and he kissed her like a twoleg did! Cats can't kiss. They are not anatomically capable of it. Also, thanks to the author for putting an impossible-to-remove image in my brain of what this would look like.

Moonshimmer battled Triolet and clawed her pelt. By only a few minute, Triolet was in shreds. I THOUGHT YOU WERE AGAINST VIOLENCE!! I have no idea what's happening here.

"I HATE YOU!" the she-cat yelled. "I will love you forever...Phantom." Told you she wouldn't take it well...

After ten moons, Moonshimmer found she was pregnant with Phantomstar's kits! You've gotta be kidding.

"No..."Moonshimmer mewed to herself. "No..."

But, nobody knew, since she was still slender as could be. So she became deputy. No no no no no no no . She smiled broadly, as she was not discovered. Only Tranquilpaw knew, Startalon didn't even notice!

But, one day, Moonshimmer did not see her mate! It was the day after she told him about the kits! Did he leave?

"Oh no!" Moonshimmer cried! She never saw the rogue again!

Soon, Moonshimmer got to camp! Nobody was there! But, someone was there.

"Hello, My Juniper Berry!" Where did that nickname even come from?

It was Vanillastar. Oh no.

"I love you!"

He charmed the naïve Moonshimmer This book does NOT write Moonshimmer as naïve. and she became his mate! I'm not even going to comment on this... She hoped Phantom felt bad now, but then she forgot about him and had her kits! They were all like phantom except one, one that looked like Vanillastar, but darker! I will hand it to the fanfic for being accurate in the sense that a litter of kittens can be gathered by more that one tom.

"That is Cheetahkit, that is Lovekit, Why did I see this name coming from a mile away...? that is Songkit, and that is...that is...Chocolatekit." Chocolatekit? First off, how do you know what that is? Second off, even if you knew what chocolate was, why would you name your child after it, considering it can severely poison or even kill a cat!
Moonshimmer decided.

Later, she saw her kits asleep and went out to hunt. She saw Phantom.

"Phantom, go away!" She hissed, under her whiskers of silver!

"No, I must take a kit!" Because that's how parenting works, I guess.

"No!"

But Phantom was stubborn. He took one kit! Chocolatekit, Vanillastar's only true kit! I'm guessing Phantom only took Chocolatekit for some cheap plot tension.

"No, Phantom!"

But he began to sing instead.
"Oh, my little-little kit,
I love you more than life,
You sing a little,
Dance a little,
With a little smile!

You sing all night, dance all night,
You do everything a little,
But you have all the beauty!
Oh!
You have little paws,
They will grow so big, you know!" I did not expect Phantom to sing.

Phantom sang beautifully and gently and Moonshimmer wanted to love him so much, but then he was gone! Perhaps for forever! But that won't happen because the plot needs to plot. Moonshimmer cried out to her mate.

"Phantom, come back!"

But he was gone!

Moonshimmer soon cried herself to sleep, feeling lost and lonely!

During her sleep, Lilypaw came back to the clan with a new name! Darkpaw!

Vanillastar did not notice! He let Lilypaw back into the clan! How? Did Lily- errr, Darkpaw dye his fur while he was gone or something?

Lilypaw laughed like a mad cat Maybe because he is a mad cat? as he stumbled into the camp! He looked around and wanted to kill Moonshimmer, his sister! He had long craved her blood, but then he thought that she could help him rule the forest! Yes, that was an idea! He would force her to! Okay, but how? The evil apprentice went to the dens and saw Moonshimmer in the nursery! How did you know Moonshimmer was in the nursery?

"Moonshimmer, I want you to join me and Screepaw and Tranquilaw and Wishpaw and Mysticalpaw! We are evil and you need to join us!" That's such a 100% great and foolproof way to convince someone to join the evil side! Darkpaw spat loudly with his claws out as far as they could so so that he could intimidate the pretty female cat. Please just say she-cat. "Except their names aren't Screepaw, TranquilPaw, Wishpaw, and Mysticalpaw anymore! They are Screech, Tranquila, Wish, and Mystic, and we are the League of the Evil Darkness!" What a great name for your super-cool villain organization!

Moonshimmer was shocked! "No I will never join you! I can not! I can not! I have kits!"

"Kits?!" Shouldn't this be obvious from the fact that she's in the nursery? Darkpaw smiled in an evilly evil way. Evilly evil?

"Yes, kits."

"Well, if you do not join me, I will be forced to get rid of your kits forever and forever!" He laughed really evily.

Moonshimmer shook her head. "No! I will join you! Do not hurt them!" Wow! Maybe she is naïve...

"I knew that would get you!" Darkpaw said. "Come on now we have to meet the others."

Moonshimmer followed him into the woods. She could see all of her old friends and her sister sitting in the distance. They looked thin and their fur was all tangled and messy and clogged with lots of dirt! Why were they thin? Wouldn't Darkpaw be hunting for them? Even if the food is questionable...?

Screepaw or Screech as he was called now walked towards her, his blue fur messy and wild. He was a lot older than he had been when she had seen him last! Impossible, considering this only happened recently.

"So you finally got her to join us did you Darkpaw?" Screech growled. "It is not a good idea I think. She will turn on us and betray us all!" She will.

"Silence Screech!" Darkpaw hissed. "I make all the decisions around here and I think she will make a very valuble addition to the League of the Evil Darkness!" Are you sure about that? You yourself called Moonshimmer a goody two-shoes!

Tranquila licked her sister on the cheek and whispered. "I am only here with Screepaw until we can overthrow Darkpaw and the others." Maybe wait until Darkpaw is out of earshot before talking about this?!

"There are others?" Yes, Darkpaw told you this when you agreed to come here. Gasped Moonshimmer!

"Yes. There are. There is a lot of them and they all live down in a hollow area down not too far away from here!" Said Wish.

Moonshimmer was shocked! How could so many evil cats get so many supporters?! This was terrible! How many where there exactly?!

"We have an evil dragon too A dragon?! This is definitely a trollfic now... and the evil dragon does everything we tell him to, too!" Darkpaw hissed. "We can take over all the clans at any moment and you our our only henderence..."

"Yes you are!" Screech said. "Now just join us!"

Tranquila nodded "Yes join us! If you are with us than no one can ever defeat us! We will be totally unstoppable!"

Moonshimmer thought about this for a moment. She really had no choice! If she did not join Darkpaw would destroy her kits Can't you use your powers to protect your kits? but if she did join that would just mean that Darkpaw would have one and evil would have taken over everything! "Fine I will join you!" She said after a long time of wondering about the whole thing.

"Good that is very good! Wait no actually that is very bad like me!" *sighs* Darkpaw cackled loudly.

Screech nodded and so did Tranquila and Wish and Mystic. "Alright now we can take over the whole entire forest! Let us go and get the dragon so that we can threaten all of the clans with it!"

Tranquila ran down to the huge dragon! It was huge and it was silver and had spikes all over it's head and neck and tail! It was the most fierce creature Moonshimmer had ever seen in her life! She felt chills down her spine! It looked directly at her and breathed a snort of fire out of it's nose!

"Where did you find this?!" She asked.

Mystic smiled. "I summoned it up with magical powers I received from that stone over there! Wish has powers too!" *cries* Why do powers keep getting handed out like candy?!

"Powers?" Growled Moonshimmer. "But if StarClan did not give them to you they are no good! They are probably stupid anyway!"

Mystic shook her head. "No they are great Moonshimmer! I can summon all sorts of fierce beasts like that dragon over there! Wish has poison in her claws and Darkpaw already had powers but we just found out what they are! He can kill anyone he wants to and he is basically invincible and immortal! But Moonshimmer will still manage to defeat him. He is also like a vampire and gets his energy and stuff from eating other cats and drinking their blood!"

"Invincible?" Moonshimmer looked horrified. No wonder Lilypaw or whatever he was called now's tail had healed so quickly after she bit the tip off of it! The tip was no longer missing! She had been so stupid for ignoring this very very obvious fact! She wanted to go and cry because everything was going wrong all of the sudden! Darkpaw was forcing her to be a bad person Why not protect yourself with your powers?! and now the whole entire forest would be taken over and everyone would be slaves to Darkpaw forever and ever!

All of the sudden Screech and Tranquila jumped into the air and landed on Darkpaw's head!

"What are you doing on my head?!" Darkpaw demanded angrily. His eyes flashed all sorts of rainbow colors! That meant he was really, really mad! Haven't we been over this already?

Tranquila realized all of the sudden and whispered to Screech. "Maybe we should wait until he actually takes over the forest! That was the plan right?!"

"You are right I had forgot." Screech looked embarrassed.

"Get off of my head!" Darkpaw spat. "Get off of it now!"

Tranquila and Screech got off of him. Maybe at least they had knocked some sense into his head or something thought Moonshimmer! Not possible.

"What were you doing you crazy stupid loonies?!" Darkpaw was hissing and spitting and bouncing around in a fury!

"Um UM!" Screech muttered. "We thought you were a mouse! Pay no attention to that it was a total accident!"

"A MOUSE?!" Lilypaw squealed. "YOU THOUGHT I WAS A MOSE?! WHY BECAUSE YOU THINK I AM SMALL!?"

"No no!" Tranquila said. "You have it all wrong! You are a marvelous and fantastically evil leader and we are just meer stupid mortal cats You're not. You have powers too. forgive us for what we have done wrong!"

Moonshimmer shook her head. "I do not want to be with your group brother but I am afraid that I have to anyway. One of these days love and peace will conquer you!" Are you sure about that?

Darkpaw spat loudly all over the place! "I can not have you saying stupid things like that so shut up! Come now let us all go and take over the whole forest!" Okay, but how, exactly...?