Before we begin this is only my Opinion, after all I'm not asking you to be you know be on point with the characters but like just make it make sense in a way.

I know I know it's all boring but, I have get this out cause if I don't I'm going to see hate comments

I'm not that dumb, All you Sonadow Shippers, just got so mad at me for stating my opinion, like bro it's an opinion not the end of the world.

And this isn't just for Fanfictions either its also for RPs as well, I have a lot of People that I roleplay with, and like Man...I have never wanted to throw my computer out the window so hard before.

So I just hope this Review, or rather my Complaints help you out with trying to be a better writer, and Roleplayer.

Now I'm ready to suffer, Cause oh boy I'm going to want to cry over this.