Hai guys! So in this chapter, I'm gonna be doing a review for a book! Yay! lol.

Let's start!

Title: The First Sight

Author: myaura

Judge, Reviewer: MidnightAls07

Chapters Read: 1

Genre: Short Story

Okay, so this is what I feel about the book. Actually, I like it, it has descriptive paragraphs, and an interesting scene happening just in chapter one. And it really is a short story! And both Kale and Ivana are cute af, like legit. The way you described stuff in your story is just relaxing to read for me and I definitely suggest you guys to read it!

ratings time!

Title: 4.5/5
It fits so much with the story, great decision!

Cover: 3/5
I would recommend you to make a better and more eye catching cover for your book, it's surely attract more readers! And to make sure that the words 'The First Sight' fit on the cover itself.

Description: 3.5/5
The summary is about the girl, yeah, and I like how you decided to write something like that instead of the common 'scene' where they meet. Really unique!

Grammar: 4/5
Although I do recommend you to kind of improve your grammar, specifically punctuations and some spelling errors. Ugh, why do I sound like a grammar police?

questions time!

if there would be a sequel, would you read it?

...

hell yeah.

do you find the story itself interesting?

Uh huh, yeah! The cute 'love at first sight' scene and it being explained in a way where you can actually read and understand how one person feels when they have the love at first sight syndrome. lol, that's obviously made up but it totally is interesting!

does it contain the type of characters you'd usually like?

Yeah! Kale and Ivana, have a noticeable chemistry and I like it. :)

what are your overall thoughts about this book?

And I just think that Kale and Ivana moved pretty fast, like Kale confessed to her and they kissed on the same day. Nope, I don't have complaints but they just, seem rushed? I just thought of it now but however, it doesn't change the fact that I like your story a lot!

I think this book deserves more reads than the amount it already has, because.

Because I said because!

lol, just because it's a cute af story. Ye.

any suggestions or changes you'd recommend?

Hopefully you'll have time to improve your book cover and just fix some spelling and grammar errors, plus punctuations. I just think that people would like to read a book with great grammar, I guess? Yeah, I'm this unsure lol.

End of book review.

Reviewed by MidnightAls07 .

Baiii, you guys!