Fourth review!

Let's start!

Title: MannanSS- An Ignored Love

Author: MarvellousCreationsx

Judge/ Reviewer: MidnightAls07

Chapters Read: 1

Genre: Short Story

Awe, after this review, you'll probably hate me. Well, as you can see, I only read one chapter. It was because I would really recommend you to improve your punctuation. I mean, when a character is saying something, at least put quotation marks to separate them. But the first chapter itself is interesting. I had a gut feeling that your book will be super interesting and awesome but the grammar just stopped me from continuing.

ratings time!

Title: 3/5
It's an okay title, and sorry for being dumb but what does MannanSS stand for? Or what does it mean? Oh, and An Ignored Love sounds eye-catching!

Cover: 3/5
I get that your book is a dark love story but I just think a little more of a 'bright' cover would make it more attractive. But hey, it looks beautiful enough, honestly.

Description: 3/5
And again with the quotation issue, I just really recommend for you to add quotation marks. Even in the description, readers might not think that it's a direct address. I just realized that the characters were saying it when it read '... said (character)' or '... (character) shouted.'

But it's an okay description.

Grammar: 2.5/5
Please improve your:
-grammar
Just fix it a little.

-punctuation
Add periods when needed.

-quotation
This is a must.

-capitalization
You don't have to capitalize unnecessary words.

I know, I sound like a grammar police but it's just me, I just prefer reading books with great grammar.

questions time!

if there will be a sequel, would you read it?
Considering I haven't read the book yet, probably not.

do you find the story itself interesting?
I think it is interesting.

does it contain the characters you'd usually like?
Well, some of them in the first chapter.

what are your overall thoughts about this book?
Improve zee grammar and I'll come back to read it!

any suggestions or changes you'd recommend?
All I can say is, grammar. I've said this a lot of times in this review but I believe that once it's improved, you'll get more reads, trust me.

End of book review.

Reviewed by MidnightAls07 .

Baiii, you guys!