Holaaa 😎😎😎😎
Meri first story ki first chapter me swagat hai 🥳🥳

Meri phone ki ato correction system bohot pareshan karte hai😣😣😣 kuch bhul huye to

Mujhe karna maaf is the🙄🙄
Dill ko karna saaf is the.😁😁

Kis kis ko pata hai is line ke bareme?😏

So shuru karte hai..

In morning Khanna house,

Dekhte hai kya chal raha hai. Ek room me koi soo raha hai par kon🤔🤔 umm chalo dekhte hai .. par tabhi koi lady enter karti hai room me.

Lady:oh my gods ye ladka bhi na raat bhar case ki file me dubi rehta hai phir subha ko late hota hai🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️
Tillu uth ja

Acha to ye tillu ji matlab Neil hai😄😄

Neil:hmm 💤💤
Shweta:kya hmm?? Jaldi uth😑
Neil: 5 min or😴😴
Sh: 1 min bhi nahi abhi ki abhi uth (yar ye bilkul meri ammu jese hai )

Neil: acha thik hai me uth gaya😑😑
Sh: to shower leke aja me breakfast ready karti hu

Phir Neil shower leke ready hoke breakfast ke liye niche chala jata hai.

Neil: good morning everyone 😁
Bebe:good morning puttar
Kareena:good morning bhi...or bhi aj ap lete kyun uthe😏😏 kaya kar rahe the raat ko😏
Neil: case study karraha tha
Ka: acha ab Rhea bhabi case ban gayi😉
Neil: kya bhai abi shadi huyi nahi samjhi😒😒
K: nahi hua to kya hua hojayega 😆
Neil: jab hoga tab dekha jayega 😑 or tab tak na bhabi samjhi🤨🤨
K: kya bhi ap bhi😑😑
Neil:😬😬😬
Kareena: 😥😥🤐🤐
Neil: 😏😏
Sh: waise tillu tune Rhea se baat kiya?
Neil: mom plz ab ap bhi shuru mat hona
Sh: kya tillu matlab tum dono ki shadi hone wali hai to ek dusre ke bareme janna zaruri hai na.. tu na ek kam kar use date pe leke ja shopping karwa ,movie dekhne chal..

Neil: bus mom bus
(in mind: ek to mujhe us makeup ki dukan se shadi nahi karni😒😒 uparse mera over excited family 😑😑 bachale bhagwan 😫😫)

Sh: tilluuuu..kya soch raha hai..
Neil: kuch nahi .... mera hogaya mera hogaya me police station chalta hu..

Phir wo police station ke liye nikaljata hai..

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Delhi

Ek lady was preparing breakfast. She was wearing a navy blue sari with sleeveless blouse..
Tabhi waha ek lardka ata hai.

Boy: good morning Neela ma ( yes she is our Neela ma 😚😚😚)
Neela: good morning Aman.
Aman: Ma where is dii ?
Neela: pata nahi kaha chaligayi subha subha😑😑
Aman: app ko nahi pata?
Neela: mujhe batake kaha jati hai sirf apni manmani karni ati hai use😒

Voice: lagta hai koi subha subha mijhse bohot naraz hai..

A girl was standing at the door

Neela: ab subha subha bina batake chali jane se gussa to ati hi hai na..

Girl: ab me kya karu kuch arge6kaam tha ..war na me kaha ap ko bina batake kahi jati hu.

Neela: ha ha tum to masum bacha ho ..

Girl: are bus karo na app ki itni beautiful face pe ye gussa acha nahi lagrahi hai😚

Neela: Avni apna ye battering band karo..sab samajti hu me

Avni: ap hai hi meri samajhdar ma😘

Aman was enjoying their cute fight

Aman: chalo di breakfast karte hai aj ma ne app ka favourite poha banaya hai..
Avni: kya poha🤩🤩 abhi ati hu..🏃‍♀️🏃‍♀️
Neela: are aram se

Then teeno bethkar breakfast karne lagte hai

Neela: Avni tumne kuch socha?
Avni: ha ma .. me wahi kehne wali thi .. hume aj hi Mumbai ke liye jana hoga.
Aman: ajj!! par di hum to 3 din bad jane wale the na..
Neela: sab thek hai na bacha..
Avni: ha ma sab thik hai ..bus mujhe lagta hai ki hume or time west nahi karni chahiye ..ap janti hai na Dayawanti ko.
Neela: lagta hai tum sahi keh rahi ho wo bohot chalak aurat hai. Hume or time west na karni chahi ye.. hum aj hi Mumbai jayenge.
Aman: leken hum waha rahenge kaha?
Neela: mene waha ek neya ghar liya hai. tum packing shuru karo.
Avni: ha..or mene waha ki ek college me Aman ki admission kardi hai..me nahi chati ki in sab ka koi bhi asar teri study pe pare.
Aman: me janta hu di ki ap hamesha mere liye best sochenge ..

Phir teeno ready hoke Mumbai ke liye nikan jate hai.

Mumbai ye wahi sheher hai jaha 15 saal pehle Avni ne apna sab kuch khoye thi.. aj phir wo waha wapas jarahi hai.. puri hisab chukta karne..
Ab dekhna ye ki isbar barsoo purani wo adhuri kahai puri hogi .... ya phir koi nayi kahani ki shurwad hogi ..

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Hufff finally 🥵🥵🥵

Dekho ye na meri life ku first story hai ..to agar kisi ko bhi aisa lage ki kuch galat hai ya or bhi accha hosakta tha ya story line me kuch change...to plzzz mujhe bata dena me puri koshish karungi improve karne ke liye🙄🙄 leken plz kuch galat lage to bolna🙏🙏

To hope you like my first story..

Much Love
Sanjanna 😋😋😋