WHEN A FANFIC IS CONSTANTLY FLIPPING BETWEEN POINT OF VIEWS IT MAKES ME WANT TO RIP MY FUCKING HAIR OUT LIKE PLS JUST STICK WITH ONE POV AND CHANGE IT FOR A SMALL WHILE IF IT'S EXTREMELY IMPORTANT TO THE PLOT. IF NOT, LEAVE IT IN ONE PERSPECTIVE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD

a character should be showing what they're thinking or feeling by how their acting, not just by you switching into their pov only to say that they have a crush on someone then flipping back to the other person

it's awkward and confusing to be constantly changing povs when you're reading something and i personally can't stand it