Chapter Five Untidles
UR OLL JUST SAINTS y cant u just except jEsuss it wold mae ur life so much mor engoyable u would never haf to worr/ again
I do believe in Jesus. He died on the cross for us and bled for our sins. He and our Heavenly Father put us on Earth. And dear author of this trash book. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion. Wether you agree or not. 

StarPaw sad "I..i....." she was so foncusded! Thes to cats hard asked her to b there mates an wht was she supops to do? They we beoth handsome and althing, but bot had matss! Nhd she luvved them both! FirstAr wus so kind and he oviusly likked her allot. GayStirpe was so funny and col.
They both have mates? That's easy don't be mates with either of them!

"!" said StarPaw ass she ruan in to the forest. It wus to muck# she culdnt choss!
LANGUAGE!!!! Also you can't say ! Unless you say exclamation mark.

She run and ran and run til ur paws her hurtinged. Hen she rrellized she corsed the broader. Oih no she thugh Shadowclan will get me. "wut are you ding here?" sd BalkStar s he waked up.
Because Firestar and Graystripe wouldn't look up to see her run away. That AND Blackstar would totally be out in the forest alone.

"I'm sorry!" mewoed StarKit I didn't men too!'

That's ok" sed blackStar. "no wons perfeck.""no that's not true." Said StarPaw, offed. "StarClan is.""Waht do you mena?" wemed BlackStar.
Blackstar, leader of ShadowClan (the most hostile clan), just let Starpaw off the hook for crossing the border. Also StarClan ain't perfect either.

"well the give us all this halpand stuff" said Starpaw. "without them we wold be lust." She said.
Yeah but that doesn't make them perfect.

"I gess that's ter " balkcStar said, "besid I didn't relly mean that neway.
Blackstar always means what he says.

"o really why?" said starpaw. "becus yo are."
He's what? Oh wait. He said that she's perfect! *Facepaw*

'WHAT' YOWLED sTarpaw jumping away BlackkStarTried to nugle her. "WHAT ARE O TRIG TO DO MOLE STRAEP ME?1?"
OH NO HES TRYING TO MOLE STRAEP HER!!!! What ever that means.

"e—" BlakStar started too expaln, but, StarPw wass to quick

"no" she Sid "I don't doned another tom after me!" "I got enog porbelms arigt now anywy!

"but yor pahfect." Said Blackstar. "you betted me in badle you HAVE TO BE "
Blackstar just admitted that she was a a Mary Sue.

"NO!" shitted SarPaw Again runnin into the forst. Ters ralled down her checks she was cyring. 'its too much" sahe though. "Starcalnb help me....!"
Again LANGUAGE!!!
Starpaw: OH STARCLAN HELP ME CHOOSE A MATE. EVEN THOUGH TWO OF THEM ALREADY HAVE MATES AND ONE ISNT IN MY CLAN!!!!!