I've decided to add really bad drawings to each chapter. This drawing is titled "Butter Mom"
Chapter 2 the Rose of a Heroin
DONT DO DRUGS GUYS!!!!
ok jazzie-kun pleas dont get mad at me cause your not in it yet. You'l apear soon dont worry.
Uh huh...

StarKit wock up and sunlit was in the branches. She closed her eyes againstill tired. Butter mom wouldn't let her sleep not today.
BUTTER MOM?!?!? Excuse me while I go laugh for a second. HAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! Ok I'm good. Oh and she wock up. That sounds painful for some reason.

"Sweety its time to get up" said Dawnsparkle; her eys shinning. "Today is important today."
Yup because my eyes shin every day!

"What is it Mom" said StarKit awake right away. Then the she cat rememembered what today was.

"Ohmigosh its my serimony today!' she squelled excercisedly. Today was the day she was an apprentice!
Misspellings, words not used by Warrior cats, and she is excercisedly.

She flicked outside not even waiting for her Mom. But her Mom cot up to her quick.
SHES A COT NOW GUYS!!!! A MADE OF BUTTER COT!!!!

"Sweety you know the clans don't except cat slike use sometimes." She said.
Wait. I thought this was Thunderclan. The clan for loners and kittypets. Oh wait. I've been hanging out with Blackstar for too long.

StarKit glared. She didn't lake beig told that. Just because her Mom was a usedto be Shadowclan cat and her dad was jayFeather the medicine Cat didn"t mean she ws different!
Very realistic. I can just hear Hollyleaf yelling about how Jayfeather broke the warrior code.

"StarPaw come here." Said FireStar from the leg. He jumped down.
SHES ALREADY A APPRENTICE!!!!

"StarKit it s tome for you to become an apentice: he said. "Your a strong brave cat and because of that I will mentor with you."
Oh no wait nevermind. Oh. I feel really bad for Firestar. No cat should have to go through that!

Ever body gasped. StarKit did too. Se herd hear mother say "Wow!".

Firehert liked her shoulder. He whispered in her ear "youll be the best their ever was StarPaw I know ti."
Firestar was demoted guys. Make way for Starstar!

Surpised she walked away when they were done howling for her./ Then she went ofer to JayFeathern and DawnSparkle who were very prod.
They turned into wolves guys.

"Daughetr where very happy but he have to say something said Jayfeather his chest puffed ouit. "You see there is this prophcy Starcaln gave me it said that out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."
So tell the kit um I mean apprentice a prophecy before your leader. Everycat give it up for Jayfeather!

StarPaw gasped. What does it mean?
You know being the Mary Sue that she is I would have thought that she would have known it meant her. But I guess even Mary Sues have tiny flaws. Starpaw's being stupidity.

lol I update fast dont i. REVEIW or ill hit over the head with a frying pan! XDD jk
I am reviewing and no amounts of pounding my head on a frying pan is gonna help with this book.