Hello again! I'm sorry for not updating. I've been busy and I... Forgot
Oops :/

*Warning*
I HATE THIS CHAPTER you'll see why at the end

Cahpter 13 The Metang wit Sartcaln
"Omigish what happnd! shrekd StarPaw. She looked arung. "am I in Starclan?" she eskes when she say the cats that she new.
No your alive and totally fine! HA she said the cats THAT SHE KNEW SH SHOULD KNOW IF SHES IN STARCLAN

"No of cours not your in the Daek Forest!" gagged a gray he-cat. StarGlame locked around windly for TiggerStar but she culd;nt sea him. "Yes your in SatrCaln! said the she-ca. It was YellowFang. "Wher else wood you be?"
I bet he gagged at the sight of a Mary Sue. XD and I can't believe she fell for that

"Yuo dont need to be so red! said StarGlame she was mad."
Hahaha she's YELLOWfang
And she's 'red' X3 I'm sorry

sorry said YelllowFang but that made me made."

"its ok" said StarGleam. "but i was in the sark forest so...HOW DID I DYE?
You can die in the Dark Forest...

"TigerStra killed you" said BlueeStar cumin over to her. "he can send cats to starcaln even from the drk Foret"
Tigerstar: What? I wasn't going to let that Mary Sue stay with me *shrugs*

"Wait so then I'm died?" StarGlame. "What do i do no? I cant safve the frost like this!"
Exactly cause you aren't meant to save the forest

"That why we aer gong to send you bak to Thnduer clan!" saud WhitStrip. "But we also have somsing very imptent to tell you first."
DONT SEND HER BACK
POOR THUNDERCLAN

"Omg what is it" lauged StarPaw she stinted to jump up and down with joe." "I wnat to knew"

"wel their are ten thigs we ned to give you before you goe" said LeafPool and she gave StarGlame 2 rocks with writting on them. "their the ten commons!"
... Did they just
No
No
This is literally insulting religion *facepaw*

"OMG THE TEN COMMONDENTS" squelled StarGleam and she was so exited. "I GET TO HAVE TEN COMMNDMENTS?"
NO

"Ya" said BleuStar "we need to give them to the calns but they wont liten. Thats why we nedd you to do it four us!"
When she comes back are they going to be worshipping golden cow statues?

"Okay" said StarGlame and she left Starclan talking the rocks with her.
I. Hate. This. Chapter.