Chapter Ten The Recluse
"EVERONE FALLOW ME" meowled StarPleam as see charred for th3 entranse to eh camp. Tares stremmed down her face1 she wuss so sad her fahter had deid her leader was gunn. "FLAMEPAW LAKEPAW DUSTPELT MOM LOINBLAZE FALLOW ME." She said. "I NEDD A PAROL."
Why do you need a patrol? Pretty sure you just told the WHOLE Clan to follow you.

The run into the frost their pass working fastly. She wood kill HolyLeaf and TigerSar for what thed don!
You already killed Tigerstar

She batlecried using his nose to tar down the evill cats. Her heat burneded!

Sune they had funded them. They were hidnig bwhind a bolder. "HAHAHAH" LAUGHED HOLylesf putting er claw on FiresTarS thort. "IVE GOT YOU KNOW!"
Best bad guys ever. "Because if we hide behind a bolder they'll never find us!"

StarGleam gasped. "noooooo Fireheat!" she scemmed "FalmePawgo!" she said.
Stargleams reasoning: I'll send all the other cats at Hollyleaf and then when THEY die I'll come and help.

Flamepaw hurled at HolyLeaf. Hollyleaf laked at her in suprise. "What how could they have fallowd me." She dogged at Flamepaw her blue eys fallshig.

"NO FLAMEPAW" whaled LakePaw seing her sisters about too die. "I LOVE YOU FALMEPAW." She yowled jumping herself in front of HOlyLeaf.

HollyLaffs paw cutt into hir throt blood came out LakePaw felt down.
Anyone else see that coming?

"NOOOO!1!11" StarPaw screamed. "FLAMEAPWWW!" She ran for HoltLeaf but it wass no us. LakPaw was dyeing. "I lofe you StarGleam." She wisperd before er blue I's cosed.
Why you yelling Flamepaws name? Lakepaw is the one dying.

"NO WAKE UP LAKEPOOL" shoited Stargleam-she was so sad and depersed she was cyring!
LAKEPOOL!!! I thought it was Lakepaw?

"hahaha" laughed HollyLeaf evil. "u just dunt gedot d o you Im one of teh Tree! I have pows beyound ur emaginating!" nd then.... She turned in.... A BARE!
I'm only on the Outcast. Please tell me that actually isn't her power?

"Gasped" gasped everyone. It was a bare!

"IM A SHAPSHITTER!" siad Hollylea joyly.
LANGUAGE!!!!!

"stargleam." Said FalmePaw cryingly. "I nedd to go back 2 the damp. I goat bury laekpaw. Ive neverbeen out of camp before how do you get back!"
You sit on a throne of lies...

"U ju wak to te the est. said StarPaw."
She says calmly.

Thaks said FlamePaw crying she piced up the LakePaw and putter on her back and run.
Bye Flamepaw! I never really liked you anyway! (In this book at least)

"nut so fast!" said Holyleaf! "Your not gunna get away that easly!" Wit a rar like an volcano erection she jumped at StarGlaem!

Everone! Gasped! "NOOOO." Yowled STarGleam as sumething lung and sarp pluned into her bk. "YOU CANT GET ME THAT EASLY."
Yes she can...

Everyone jumped at the HoBare! The bare rared in pane! Starepaw sent her teeth into its for. It rared.
The bear is "rared"

"oak oka" HolyLeafthe bare said. "i no know Your not guna be bettin that esliay." Suddenly she was a cat1 then her body dropped her eyes went drka she was on the grund. Suddly ther wass howl from the other side of the froste. It was LaFlamePaw!
Your a bear. They are cats.
Bear > cats ???

"LAKEPAW UR BACK!" SHE SAD
Oh that makes total sense

WHT SAID SPARGLAME. Thenshe locked. It was LakePool! She was runnin tord the forest starGleam was so appy. Then she sawyer eyes.

....

THEY WERE OLLYLEAFS!
Oh no!!!!! So Hollyleaf shifted to Lakepaw? I'm confused.

the next chatter wil coke soon! AND STUP FLAMMING YOU HAETRS. YOU JUST DONT BELVE IN GOOD.
WELL I DONT LIKE YOU EITHER!!!!!