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Ok so if your confused about the title I'm just going by what she put and on this one she put "Catter 1" so I put Chapter 1 sorry if I confused you!
Catter 1 The Fiht Aganst the Sitters 1
"Oh nose!" yellded StarPaw she wus so horrorifed. "LakePaool is buck and seh is NUT OKA!"
Wait I thought Hollyleaf changed into Lakepaw.

"Of coarse im not okay!" LakeFall screchemd loadly she issed at StarGlame. "I'm being posesd by HolyLeaf wut do you THINK!" she yelddl and hulrd hesselv at StarPaw. StarGlme was so surpissed she culdn;t mofe
Ok. So she's possessed. Makes nooooo sense.

Then... "OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" It was...
XD I can almost imagine a cat making a face so they can say that!

REDPAW! Redpaw runnth over to StarPaw and jumped in font of herr and LakePolawm hit her insta.
OH MY GOSH LOOK!!! I'm pretty sure this is the one paragraph where she actually spelt a lot of things right! CONGRATULATIONS!!!!

"Nuu Redpaw!" chked StarGlamea and she locked at RedPaw. "RedOaw are yu okayo?" she esked upsed. RedPaw cughed. "No im not but at leaat I sawed yuour lif! she sed and then he did. StarFlame locked at RedPaw she wus so buttifly then StarGleam shock her hud. "No Im STRREET!" she taught madly. "but now what do we dao agant LakePaw!" she lucked up. LakePaw was runnen toward Loinblzx and she was WIDESPED!
So what I gathered from this paragraph was that Redpaw is dead. And Stargleam is "STRREET!" So what does that mean?

"NOWWWWWWW LIonHEAR!" wisprd StarGalem and she ran towed LionBlaze and she hit LakePaw, who did to.
WOAH WOAH WOAH!!! She WHISPERED that? THEN WHY WAS IT IN CAPS!!!

"StarGlame I will get u for thiss11 sed LakePaw as SatinClaw drag away to hellClan. He waswerng oink naie Polish. then StarGlame stinted to crry as she realed that her sitter ass ded.
Yeah no. First off. Satinclaw? H*llClan? NO! And once again LANGUAGE!

"you killd my Subjt!" HolyLeaf rared turng back in a bare. "Ilus get you for thi!" she saud and then she rudhed at StarPlame. "Oh o!" yelld every1 "tarPaw got our of the Way!"
Their not going to try to help just yell at her to move?

Tim semd to slow danw as StarPawlem run awy from the bare. But she ran left into... TIGGERSTAR!"
The wonderful thing about Tiggers is Tiggers are wonderfully sweet. Their tops are made of rubber their bottoms are made of springs! Their bouncy, flouncy, and trouncy fun fun fun fun fun! But the most wonderful thing about Tiggers is I'm the only one! I'm the only one!
~Tiggers song. Anyone ever heard it?

"Fuhrstar! yellded a TiggerStraw. "You ar gong to did now!" And he held out... SOME JEW!
OH NO NOT A JEW!!! PROTECT IT!!! TIGERSTAR IS THE NEW HITLER!!! (I didn't mean to offend anyone. Sorry if I did!)

"Omg jyew!" elld FamePaw she locked at the yew. "But it wooden work becas thers a lizded on it." They all locked at the lizard. It wus a newt. The nwt ran away.
How is yew dangerous? And a lizard what?!?! This paragraph is just confusing!

"... NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" yelled FamePaw. "Now the yew is gunna wkr!

"Ete the yew!" sadi TiggerStar he thirst it at StarGlame StarGleam baked away. "You're never get moi to ete it!" she esked and then she held "YOUE NEVER TOOK ME ALIV!"
Yeah pretty sure thrusting yew at Stargleam is going to totally convince her that's she should eat it.

"are you so sur?" aksed TigerClar and then he lung at StarGlema and grabed her and ran away. "Youl never cathg me!1111 he laght meanly. "Im gong to Shadowcaln!" And then he luf.
Ok so Stargleams gone. THIS CALLS FOR A CELEBRATION!!!! *throws confetti everywhere*

Guyx I ben working relly hard on this wile I was gon. im sor'ry for the wait. Revew betetr and ill updat mor quick
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