*sharp inhale*
I hate my life

Yes, you are creepy.
Yes, you are a pervert.

You can't say you're not when you've been watching something creepily with most certainly perverted thoughts in your mind, demonstrated by how you told Angel to call you 'master'.

Say it with me...

Master Please...
This is Sexual Assault!

Again, not actual sexual assault.

Mason just shouldn't have been displaying creepy behaviour by watching and eavesdropping on Angel. He also shouldn't have claimed for it to not be creepy behaviour, since it really is.

Quick question:
Isn't Angel supposed to be your completely average Joe that looks completely average?

Why does he have a figure that puts any guy or girl to shame?

If anything, these should be Angel's thoughts about Mason and they should ONLY be Angel's thoughts when they get together.

Mason should be thinking more along the lines of "huh, he's a cutie."

I also doubt that Mason would be that infatuated with Angel on sight.

This is actually a similar concept in Fifty Shades of Grey, except gayer.

There's the handsome, powerful business man who can do pretty much anything.

And they fall for a completely average Joe for LITERALLY NO REASON.

This is a pretty unrealistic concept, unless Mason has a reason for already knowing Angel.

To be fair, Mason's brother is the Mafia leader and Angel's ex is in the mafia. It is plausible Mason heard from Matt about Angel.

However... one problem...

There's no mention of already knowing Angel and his behaviour shows that he doesn't know of Angel already.

That and the fact that this whole plot with David and Matt hadn't been planned out, as seen by the continuity error in the previous chapter.

I would have given you points for this convoluted method of Mason knowing Angel, but... you didn't plan it out, author.

Ops~ Here comes Sheila.

She starts off as pretty meh.

Then she gets worse.

So much worse.

People only like her because they can relate to her, but only if they're a fujoshi.

Fujoshi (rotten girl)

Someone of the female gender fetishing gay sex and gay things, but only with the male gender.
Can often be taken to horrible extremes, with things like paedophilia and shipping their real life friends that aren't gay/aren't dating.

Also they couldn't even be bothered to write "and".

They just put "&".

Seriously, could you be more lazy?

I put all of this together because it's basically just filler.

But I'm alright with this filler, since it shows the dynamic between Sheila and Mason.

It's good to show character dynamics like that... as long as it's consistent.

Remember this:

Sheila is like a mother to Mason and is very mature.

She is MATURE in her speech, although her actions are immature.

She's also supposedly beats Mason with kitchen utensils sometimes.

Yeah, that's a thing because Mason comments on the fact that they hurt after Sheila's threat.

We also learn that Mason is stupidly lazy in his own home, despite him not seeming like that type.

In my opinion, it's an interesting character to quirk.

Ah, if only Mason was a character and had consistent behaviour.

If only.

"Y'all don't need to know, you perverts." Says the pervert.

Also, this fourth wall break isn't clever.

It's really not.

Since this story frequently changes who's perspective it's written in, it's obvious that the people in the story didn't write the book. If it was written from one perspective, it would be more clever to use a fourth wall break. Since the perspective flip flops, meaning the people in the story didn't write the story, it isn't interesting or clever. It's just dumb and makes you wonder if the universes of the book and real life are colliding or not.

It also mentions Mason's wet boxers.

HA. HA. HA.

Whenever you see the name Troy/Tony/Toby, just remember they're the same person. The author frequently changes the name of this one person, including in the exact same chapter their name is written in.

Did I mention the continuity errors in this story, since the author didn't plan it out? They just wanted some boyxboy BDSM  (although it's more just sexual assault until Angel becomes so mentally weak and horny he gives into Mason), but didn't even care for the plot or characters.

The lack of effort and care for the plot becomes more evident at the end of the story.

Anyways, Troy/Tony/Toby is just dragging Mason out to go shopping for a party.

I'm positive that Mason would already have good clothes, since he is a superbly rich businessman.

God, kill me. Somebody please fix the continuity in this story.