So... Angel has a job.

That I'm pretty sure is never mentioned again after this point.

It is literally just so Angel can have a "holy shit, it's my creepy stalker" moment.

Also, side note, Mason goes full on stalker later.

He also overslept.

Not important.

In fact, it's utterly useless to the story.

ALRIGHT SO WE ARE INTRODUCED TO BEST AND ONLY CHARACTER, TRAVIS.

...

Didn't I say that Travis was Angel's cousin?

Let me check...

Yep, Travis IS Angel's cousin.

And it's not even mentioned in Travis' first appearance.

Goddamnit, why does this story have so many continuity errors?

Remember people:

ALWAYS PLAN YOUR STORY OUT BEFORE WRITING IT.

Seriously, we have a person with three names, we have a person who is Angel's friend and ex abusive boyfriend and a character who is Angel's cousin and his co-worker.

I don't think Angel would know this many people with the same name.

These people also clearly weren't planned out, since they have different personalities. The author really needs to think about this a lot harder.

Also, Chad is Angel's boss.

No one cares about Chad.

He doesn't even show up in the story.

HOLY SHIT, ITS MY CREEPY STALKER - Angel Romero, 2k1k, The Wall Street Journal

This is literally the only reason Angel had a job just this one time.

Just so this can happen.

It's not even clever.

There are so many more interesting and creative ways that they could have met up.

For example, Travis - when reintroduced as Angel's cousin - says that he's taking Angel to see his favourite band. Wouldn't it be a lot more interesting if Mason liked that band as well, so they bumped into each other there? It would also imply to Angel that Mason is pretty much a total stalker and something could be done with that. Wouldn't that be a more interesting read than the cliche of "oh, I work here and he's shopping here"?

I have to give Angel props for going to hide in the bathroom. That was a good idea.

But Mason follows him like the creepy pervert he is.

Now it's time to switch perspectives~

To be honest, this should have been started in Mason's perspective. It would have been a lot more interesting and skipped over pointless details like Chad and avoided continuity errors like Travis.

So... didn't I mention and the story mention that Mason was a rich businessman?

He should already have nice clothes at home, like suits.

Jesus, this story had more plot holes and continuity errors than cheese.

B

asically, it recounts the events from Mason's perspective.

We also learn that Mason thinks Angel is his, even though Angel clearly doesn't want to be and is doing everything in his power to avoid Mason.

3...2...1...

Master Please...
This is Sexual Assault!

Once more, not actual sexual assault. Mason shouldn't have went after him, though.

Okay, Mason is extremely delusional about his relationship with Angel.

Also, Mason is a sadist.

He's a dominant in BDSM, so it's okay that he's a sadist in that sense... but...

"He froze up and I smirked, nice to see I have that effect on him."

I mean sadist in that awful sense that just enjoys seeing any pain or humiliation.

Mason is heavily boarding on being a sociopath.

Or psychopath.

It depends.

Also, yet again, we have Angel resenting having any kind of relation to Mason.

By the way, you know how I praised Angel from leaving the area to get away from Mason?

He forgot to close the door.

Bloody idiot.

At least he completely left the building after the encounter with Mason.

God, this book is a bunch of idiots being forced to bang eventually.