*sharp inhale*

This is the chapter before the story becomes absolutely horrible.

Trash.

Everything was mediocre until the chapter after this point.

God, I still see myself last year... reading this book... thinking "hah, this story won't have actual sexual assault in it."

Boy, was I wrong.

This is the last chapter where I retained innocence.

Here's what I meant by the co-worker/cousin problem. At least Travis is still best and only character.

You see, this is why I appreciated Travis as a character.

He's one of those guys who try to get people to like what they like - not that harmful.

From what I read of Travis, I feel like he would be extremely open with his kinks to his cousin.

It makes sense that he would try to get Angel into BDSM, but notice how Travis doesn't force Angel to do BDSM. He's only encouraging it.

The fact that Travis likes BDSM is completely pointless to the plot, except for explaing how Angel knew exactly what Mason meant by call him "master".

Still, in this day in age, I feel like Angel would know that already just by casually roaming the internet.

Finds*

Quick question:
Did you even proof check this story?

Black, not blac.

You also struggle with homophones frequently, author.

Proof check.

Get a friend to grammar check or something.

Jesus.

Also, that's mostly back and forth between Travis and Angel about going to a party and Travis picking Angel's clothes. Gives us an insight onto their dynamic, fine. Mediocre.

More establishing their relationship and establishing how Angel doesn't like clubs.

Ah, innocent me. Not realising the next chapter is so horrid.

And here is the only appearance of bartender Axel.

Shame, he could have been a good character.

Probably not, the author most likely would have destroyed any potential he had.

So the bartender and Angel is making nice, but...

BOOM

Mason.

...

Master Please...
This is Sexual Assault!

Mason should not have gotten involved in Angel's business like that.

I'm pretty sure God is trying to kill you, Angel.

And I hope he does.

It'll end my suffering.