The 7th, 8th, 9th, 10th, 11th, 12th Chapter
I can't be arsed to review this shit show chapter by chapter anymore
I'm changing the format.
I will review multiple chapters per part, only discussing key points and summarising anything else.
Chapter 7
What the actual fuck indeed.
It's extremely bad you want to do it again.
That one paragraph makes me so mad.
Listen, author.
If you want chapter six to be a good chapter, you need to do one of two things:
- Have Angel call the police in chapter seven
AND/OR
- Have Mason feeling extremely remorseful for his actions and wanting to make it up to Angel
Okay so best and only character notices the hickey.
And is obviously pretty bothered by it, since Travis would never think Angel would get one at a club.
Also, Mason starts harassing Angel again and is touching him without permission.
Master Please...
This is Sexual Assault!
Also, Angel shouldn't give into Mason like that. Travis was there with Angel, so it wouldn't be hard to get away. Mason can't do crap in front of people in a public place.
Ultimately, Angel goes to Mason's house.
Idiot.
Chapter 8
Master Please...
This is Sexual Assault!
Mason should not have undressed Angel like that.
Mason should have not shared a bed with Angel.
Anyways, Angel needs to get to school and Mason is being lazy.
This situation could have been made much funnier with Mason's laziness, but it isn't.
It just serves as pointless filler instead of people development or furthering the plot.
Mason teases Angel and eventually Angel gets Sheila to get Mason up.
MASON GIVES ANGEL A FUCKING TRACKER COLLAR DISGUISED AS A PRETTY TRINKET.
Mason is a fucking stalker.
Master Please...
This is Sexual Assault!
C
hapter 9
Mason is day dreaming about Angel at work.
Simple.
Not the worst thing he has done and a lot of people day dream about their crush.
I'll let it slide.
Angel calls Mason and he's crying.
OH WAIT WAIT
I figured out what Mason did to Angel's phone.
Mason added his phone number to it.
Just one problem...
We should be told this.
We should have a moment where Angel is like "oh shit, Mason's on my phone now."
This literally took me ages to figure out because Mason did something to Angel's ago forever ago in the story.
Mason comes over and falls onto his knees at what he sees.
Dun, dun, dun!
There could have been more build up to make it more interesting, but whatever.
Chapter 10
Angel is all bloodied up.
That it.
Mason concerned.
Nothing to criticise here.
Angel doesn't want to be taken to the hospital, but Mason was originally going to take him there.
Good on Mason for his first thoughts not being to take advantage of the situation.
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