Alright, one more thing before I tear this apart. We will discuss the genre as told by Wattpad and the author. I will also tell you what I mean by some terms I use in my review.

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So, it's a gay BDSM story.

I don't know a lot about BDSM, but I can tell you some bits I know for reference.

BDSM is about causing pleasure by using pain to get to the pleasure.

Dominants do not try and force people to become their submissive (this is important for later, keep it in mind).

It is not a cult type thing you have to be indoctrinated into. It's a kink.

Also I'm using TheDom's review of Fifty Shades of Grey for reference on this.

He doesn't know a lot either, but he shared what he gathered from people who like BDSM and I'm sharing what I gathered from that.

It's also a romantic story by what had been selected for Wattpad

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So, first I'm not calling anybody - except Travis - a character.

In my notes for this, I often used the word 'banter'. If I say banter, if basically means filler or writing that does not develop the people and is not important to the plot.

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Also, some things to note:

Angel says that he will not submit to Mason ever and does not like BDSM.

Do well to remember that throughout this entire review, since I will often refer to it.

Also, I asked my friends what they thought of the story by the title and description.

They all pretty much agreed there's going to be rape.

Now finally...

The Review.