Title: My Life as Blake Thomas

Author: New--Beginnings

Cover: 

Summary: 

Follow the story of reincarnation of lovers Blake and Quinn. Will the finally get it right? 

Cover: Similar/Improvement! 

This cover seeps of simplicity which is one of my favourite kind of covers! The cover does the job of showing that this book is a romance story, however, there is not much going on and therefore it doesn't sell the story. People will only read a certain book if the cover is eye-catching! You want your cover to link to your story as well as scream out at people! I would recommend finding someone on Wattpad to make a cover for you! There are many people who make fantastic covers! 

Title: Linked/Improvement! 

The title fits exactly right to the story and links them both together! The only slight thing I want to say is that the title is not as exciting as it could be! The title is a big part that plays with writing a book as this is one of the first things they will see! If the title isn't interesting, they won't read your book! Come up with something interesting and different that will pique people's interest! Also, it says 'My Life Has Blake Thomas' and I am not sure if that is supposed to be like that, but if not, you may want to change it! 

Blurb: Average/Improvement! 

I really like this blurb as it introduces the characters and also tells us a little about how the story will pan out (how they are reincarnated), but for me, I would like a little more information about the book itself and what is going to come our way when we begin to read! Grab the readers attention as this will be the first thing they read linked to your story! Also, I have said this before, a lot of beginner writers tend to use questions at the end of their blurbs and people don't like this because it's a 'Newbie Trick'. 

Grammar: Excellent! 

There were no problems with grammar at all, words were spelled correctly and punctuation was accurate! However, I would advise not to put words like "Yup" in your writing as it makes it sound too informal! 

Plot: Flow/Average! 

I love the idea of your plot! I have never come across an idea of reincarnation of lovers before and I CRAVE the story idea, it's so vastly different from the normal romance book! However, instead of telling people the story, show people it with descriptions and feelings of the character! This makes it a lot more exciting for the reader and keeps the book flowing instead of just stating what is happening! Allow us to learn things about the characters by using speech and flashbacks without putting '3 months later'! It's much better and fun to read this way! 

Interest: Interesting! 

As I said previously, I love your idea of the book! With a few tweaks and corrections, I believe with all my might this will be a brilliant book! You have the interesting ideas and uniqueness for your book and likable characters, you have a very good book upon your hands! 

Characters: Improvement! 

Although I can picture your characters, I want MORE from them! I want to know what they are feeling, what they think, how they are, EVERYTHING! You can do this by using descriptions to portray these emotions and features! Also, give me more character build up of their development in their relationship to show how they both are feeling! More character development, the more the reader will want to continue your book! Character development and descriptions are KEY! 

Overall: Good Book! 

Overall, this is indeed a very good book! By sorting a few minor things out, I would definitely give this a read! It has so much potential and when a few things are tweaked, I have no doubt this will be an amazing book to read, I can feel it!