Chpater oen prouloge

The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the surface. A blue she cat looked up. Her eyes were bright.

(I'm impressed.)

"There is a prophecy!" She said. "out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."

(that prophecy is a bit revealing)

"Its about StarKit!" A white tom said. "Shes going to save the forest," He looked at a gold tom by BlueStar. "she has powers nobody dreamed of." Said the gold tom. "Should we tell JayFeather?" He asked. "Yes." Said BlueStar. "he needs to know."

(Shouldn't they consider before BLURTING OUT THAT IT'S STARKIT?)

She walked away from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy.

(poor Jaybae...)

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