Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln

thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1

(It's not a good 'stroy')

StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the mos.

(Cats don't know what Jazz is)

"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr.

(Where have I seen that eye colour before?)

"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked.

(You need permission to do that)

"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp.

But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11

"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of.

(He never even attacked you)

"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!"

(Firebutt she is still in the clan)

StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant.

(I wonder.... NOT.)

thnkx and ples no more flams

(They'll keep on comin')