SORRY.. SORRY.. KAAN PAKAD KE SORRY.. I KNOW I VANISHED WITHOUT ANY NOTE AND NOT AT ALL GIVING REGULAR UPDATES THESE DAYS.. FROM PAST 4 DAYS, I WAS NOT FEELING WELL.. IN ADDITION TO THIS MESS, THE UPDATE WHICH I'VE WRITTEN 2 HOURS AGO GOT DELETED DUE TO WATTPAD ERROR... UFF...!!

SO ON COMPENSATION, HERE YOU GO WITH A LONG UPDATE OF GOA TRIP..

BEFORE GOING INTO THE UPDATE, LET ME CLEAR SOMETHING.. AFTER THIS GOA TRIP, THERE WILL BE LOT OF TWISTS AND TURNS.. I HOPE YOU ALL WILL BE OKAY WITH THAT..!!

AND ONE MORE THING, THE VIEWS ARE MUCH MORE THAN THE VOTES & COMMENTS.. THIS IS NOT AT ALL DONE READERS..

THIS IS A REQUEST TO MY SILENT READERS, PLEASE DO VOTE AND COMMENT.. SUPPORT ME...

HAPPY READING...!!

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Nandu(gritting her teeth)- I said delete it now..

Manik- and I said I don't..

She tried to snatch his phone but his grip on the phone is stronger.. So she didn't succeed..

She made a grumpy face and did nothing more..

He was enjoying her cute expressions..

After a little long journey, they reached Goa..

Manik already arranged their stay at "The Zuri White Sand Goa Resort & Casino"..

The Zuri Suit is the most luxurious room at The Zuri white sand, Goa of 195 sq.mts with a private bar, a living and dining area and luxury bathroom with state-of-the-art-fitting..

The gang went aww looking at the resort..

Navya is the first one to react..

Navya- Nandu..! dekho.. kitna sundhar hai ye resort..

Nandu looked in her direction and amazed..

Nandu- omg..! This was really amazing..!

Cabir stopped the car infront of the resort.. All of them hopped down the car but navya was still inside the car with shocked expression..

Cabir noticed her and started his teasing session..

Cabir- Navya ji.. ab car se bahar aogi ya andhar se hi Goa ka shikar kar logi..???

Navya(glared)- aa rahi hu..

Mukthi- Manik..! this was superb..

Manik- Thanks Mukthi..! aur bhi surprises hai.. 

Alya- surprises....????

Manik nodded and smiled.. 

all the girls were so much excited..

Meanwhile the manager of the resort comes along with some girls and greets them..

The boys were welcomed with garlands and girls with tiaras made of flowers...

(CABIR MANIK & DHRUV FLOWER GARLANDS)

                                                                                (Navya's tiara)

                                                                       (Alya's tiara)

                                                                           (Mukthi's tiara)

The girls felt so special and thanked manik except Nandu..

But she was more than impressed and happy.. 

they followed the manager and went inside..

while moving, without being noticed by others, Manik slid the flower wrist band in nandu's hand and went away without waiting for her reaction..

she blushed and smiled caressing her wrist band..

                                                      (Nandu's tiara & wrist band)

Cabir- wow..! what a welcome..!

Cabir took the opportunity to flirt with those girls and pecked on a girl's hand..

Cabir- hey beautiful..

The girl blushes and smiles..

Cabir- wow.. you look too good while blushing.. May i know your name please..??

Mukthi- chup bey..

Cabir(surprised)- hey.. you can speak hindi too ha..??

the girl pointed towards mukthi..

Cabir(irritated)- kya hai..??

Mukthi- tera ho gaya hai toh andhar chale...!

Cabir- okay baby.. lets meet again.. stick around..

he winked at her..

Mukthi dragged him by holding his collar...

Cabir- mukthi..! chodna yaar.. arghh..

He shouted...

Mukthi left his collar and joined the girls..

and he joined the boys..

Alya- wow..!! cool pool..!!

she shouted in excitement looking at the swimming pool..

Dhruv- Buddy..! i think these girls keep on saying this "wow" word this complete day..

Alya glared at him.. while others giggled..

Dhruv(scared)- ha buddy.. aa raha hu..

Navya- ishe kaun bhulaya tha..?

Alya smiled..

Nandu- Mukthi..! come here...

Mukthi- kya hai nandu..?

NAndu- wo dekh..!!

she pointed towards a valley in between the pool..

Mukthi- Manik..! you're awesome man.. I must say its a superb place..

Navya- ha mukthi..!!! such me..

Cabir- oye.. ye sab mera plan tha..!

Manik(surprised)- acha bachu..!! You planned all this ha..

Cabir(proudly)- of course..

Dhruv- oh shut up cabir.. you didnt even help too..

Navya muttered- ye ladka na kabhi nahi sudherega..!

Alya- guys... lets see the complete resort na.. I'm so excited..

all agreed and went inside the resort to have a perfect look of the resort..

Mukthi- guys.. I'm so tired.. lets call it off for today..

navya- phir khana...??

Cabir- dekha manik..! tum bhukkad mujhe bhulathe ho.. wo dekh.. asli bhukkad toh ye madhubala hai..!!

Navya- hey.. mind your tongue..

Nandu- shh.. tum dhono mauka dekthe hi ladthe rehthe ho..

they both stopped their unreasonable fight..

Manik- dont worry girls.. aap sab apne apne kamre me jayiye.. I'll send the food to your respective rooms..

Alya- fine.. but what about the rooms..

Manik- we've 3 rooms.. you girls take two rooms.. we 3 will adjust in one..

everyone nodded..

Navya- me & mukthi in one room..

Cabir- bichari mukthi..

Mukthi giggled while navya stamped her foot on cabir foot..

he shouted in pain..

Dhruv- you deserve that...

all of them shared a laugh while cabir just stared at them..

Alya- me and nandu in one room..

Manik- okay girls.. as you wish..

Navya- par rooms hai kaha..??

Manik- navya.. take left and go straight.. you'll find two rooms next to each other..

Mukthi- cool.. goodnight boys..

Boys together- goodnight...

                                                                   (Nandu & Alya's room)

                                                                      (attached bathroom)

                                                                    (Mukthi & navya's room)

                                                           (Cabir MAnik & dhruv's room)

After freshening themselves, they completed their dinner..

ALYA & NANDU ROOM

Alya found the flowered wrist band on the table and questioned nandu..

Alya- Nandu.. when did you get this..???

Nandu(stammering)- wo.. wo..

Alya(shouted)- manikkkkkkk....!!!

NAndu hung her head down in embarrasment..

Alya- hai na..???

Nandu nods positively....

Alya- aww... he's so cute... khash dhruv bhi aisa hotha...

Nandu sensed her sadness and changed the topic..

Nandu- Alya.. the resort is superb na..

Alya- yeah.. i toh totally loved it..

Nandu- mein bhi..

Alya- Manik kitna care kartha hai na..

nandu just smiled..

Alya- Nandu.. ek bath puchu..??

NAndu- hmm..

Alya- tum such me manik se naraaz ho..??

Nandu- such kahoon..??

Alya- thats what i asked babes..

Nandu- I was never angry on him alya.. i toh love him so much..

Alya- wow.. thats great.. agar manik ye bath sunega na.. toh definitely khushi se paagal ho jayega..

NAndu blushes..

alya- why dont you confess then..???

Nandu- nooo... not so easily alya..

Alya- aur kitna tarpaoge bichare ko...

NAndu- I'm gonna surprise him yaar..

Alya- wow... surprise...??

NAndu- hmm..

Alya- what's the surprise you have planned nandu...??

Nandu- well.. its a surprise..

ALya- mujhe bhi nahi bathaogi..??

NAndu- nahi.. and you promise me that you'll not share my feelings with any one..

Alya- Navya mukthi ko bhi nahi..

Nandu- bhilkul bhi nahi..

alya- what are you going to do girl...???

Nandu- wait and watch nandini murthy style of confession...

Alya- you're gonna propose him..??

NAndu- yep.. itna toh Mr.M deserve kartha hai na...

both of them chuckled.. and alya hugged nandu shouting..

Alya- best of luck...

Nandu hugged her back and whispered- thanks... 

just then their room door knob got twisted and someone entered the room..

both alya & nandu got shocked to look at the person..

because he was none other than manik about whom they were discussing a minute ago...

MAnik- tum dhono mujhe dekh ke itna shock kyu ho rahe ho..??

Nandu(Yelled)- kuch nai..

Alya- did you hear aur talks..???

she asked doubtfully...

MAnik(casually)- no..

both of them sighed in relief which felt suspicious by manik..

MAnik- kyu..??? tum dhono mere bare me bath kar rahe the kya..??

Alya & Nandu- noooooooooo...

they almost shouted on top of their voice..

Manik- fine.. chilla kyu rahe ho...

he said cupping his ears as if his ear drums may burst..

Nandu- tum humare kamare me kya kar rahe ho..??

MAnik- mujhe koi sauk nahi hai tumhare kamare me aane ka..

NAndu(anger)- toh phir aaya kyu..??

she asked crossing her hands towards her chest..

Manik- I just came to remind you guys that we'll be leaving at 9am tomorrow for sight seeing.. so dont be late..

Alya- wow.. mein abhi navya aur mukthi ko batha kar athi hu...

without waiting for nandu.. she rushed to mukthi & navya's room which is just next to theirs..

NAndu- what..???

asked raising her eye brows..

Manik- what what..??

Nandu- your work is done na.. now you can leave..

Manik- ja raha hu..

he went a little distance and turned towards her..

NAndu- ab kya..??

MAnik- mera phone mil nahi raha hai..

he stated her and started searching all over her bed..

Nandu- tumhara phone yaha kyu hogi.. go and search in your room na..

MAnik- oye madam.. jab mein tumhare room me aaya tha.. tab phone mere pas hi thi..

Nandu- fine.. go and search..

he kept on searching.. after a while, he turned to her and spoke...

Manik- aise dekthe rahoge ya mera help karne ka iradha hai..??

she didnt replied to him and took her phone from the desk...

Manik- i asked to help me.. what are you doing with your phone..??

She didnt respond to him and dialed some number..

Manik- kise phone kar rahe ho.. Dont say me Ab tum mera phone ka police se complaint karoge ..???

He spoke non stop..

Nandu(irritated)- will you just shut up..??

He stood silent..

Nandu- FYI.. For your information, I'm dialing to your number so that we can trace that..

Manik- wow Einstein.. Go on.. That's what I wanted..

He said the last sentence in a low voice.. She didn't hear him..

She dialed his number... He was compressing his smile... When his phone rang, it started playing the song "matargasthi"... he burst into laughter...

His phone is in his pocket only... He wanted her to dial his number so that he can tease her again with that song.. She fumed in anger and yelled..

Nandu- Manikkkkkk.....

Manik- haha.. Look at your face.. You look so funny.. Haha...

Nandu- funny haa... Let me show you the real fun..

She chased him and to save himself he was running all over the room...

She thrown whatever she gets on her way on him.. but she missed every shot.. He was smiling all the time.. It ignited her anger...

At last she caught him...

Due to the mat on the floor, he tripped on the bed with her on top..

Both were huffing hard as they were tired with that long chasing session...

Nandu- I caught you..

She said still lying on top of him holding his collar.. His hands were wrapped around her waist protectively...

He was lost in her doe eyes and just staring at her..

She clicked his finger in front of him.. He came back to his senses..

Nandu- where are you lost..???

Manik- in you...

She realized her position and tried to get separate herself from him.. But he hold her back tightly..

Nandu(shy)- manik.. Leave me..

Manik- what leave.,,?? Abhi toh you said that you'll catch me.. And after all you caught me, you're asking me to leave you..???

Nandu blushed..

Manik- aahhh...

He suddenly hissed in pain..

Nandu(worriedly)- kya hua..??

Manik- that blush.. Makes me crazy..

She blushed and gets up from him..

He too left her this time and sat on bed adjusting himself..

Cabir comes at the Same time..

Cabir- OH.. MY.. GOD...

Manik pov- ab ye nahi chodega..

Nandu got embarrassed..

Cabir- ye kya ho raha hai.??? Aur ye room ka aisa haal kisne banaya tha..??

Both manan pointed to each other...

Cabir- you or manik...??? Or togeeeeeether...???

He smirked and winked..

Manik- shut up Cabir..

Cabir- tikhe.. Par aise kya kar rahe the tum dhono..???

Nandu- kuch nahi..

Cabir- nai nai.. Kuch toh hoga..

Before manik could bark on him.. Nandu spatted on him..

Nandu- its none of your concern..

Cabir- hmm.. Mein kaun hu... Ab tu kiska wait kar raha hai.. Tu bhi bol dhe..

He dramatically said to manik..

Manik- Cabir.. Chal..

He dragged Cabir from there to avoid further interrogation..

Nandu pov- ayyappa.... Aap ko Cabir ko hi bejna tha.. Uff.. Agar ye sabko batha diya toh..

Her phone beeped with a message..

Its a message from manik..

Manik message- don't worry.. I'll handle him.. Goodnight.. :)

She smiled...

Later alya too starts with the interrogation for the mess created in the room.. Nandu made some bahana and cooked a story because she don't wanna share her private moments with anyone...

PRECAP- GOA SIGHT SEEING WITH LOTS OF FUN & MASTHI..

#PLEASE AVOID MISTAKES.. I DIDNT RECHECK.. AND DONT FORGET TO VOTE & COMMENT..

IN THE PREVIOUS UPDATE OF SHOUTINGS, I FORGOT TO MENTION ONE MORE BOOK... THE BOOK NAME IS "BURNING WITH DESIRES" BY Neha_Nav .. THE BOOK WAS REALLY GOOD.. PLEASE GIVE IT A READ AND PROVIDE YOUR SUPPORT TO HER...

MY WORKS:

manan- a cute love story

Manan- It hurts to hurt you

Manan- Connected through hearts

Loads of love..

Sru..