hello everyone..! too much eager to know about the person right..!

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we beame friends through this wattpad only..!

Many of you already know her if you read an os of happy birthday parth in this ff..!!!

we both worked together for that os..

Now she started writng an ff on her own that too on our favorite MANAN.. 

TITLE OF HER FF: MANAN- JAANE TU YA JAANE NA..!!!

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ALL THE VERY BEST ShifuNayyar dhi...!!

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I know i'm too much late..! as usual please forgive me..!! So... Manik revealed his secret.. Now who is that Person behind the door..

as i promised, for my delay.. here comes the biggest update as a compensation..!!

Happy reading....!!!!!

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Listening to the banging door thud.. Everyone got alerted...

Manik rushed towards the door and found nandu running from there.

Manik- oh Shit..!! Nandu ne sun liya..

Cabir- what...?? Ab kya hoga..?

Mukthi- manik..!! Don't worry.. Go and explain her..

Navya- ha manik.. Jao. WO maan jayegi..

Dhruv- buddy jaldi karo..

Manik followed her..

Till the time manik reach her. She was already left..

Manik- where did she go man..? Hope she's fine..

Nandu drove her car aimlessly and stopped at a lonely place...

She stepped out of the car and started jumping in excitement..

Nandu pov- ayyappa..!! Aap ne suna hai.. Manik hi Mr.M hai...! I can't believe it... Thank you.. Thank you.. Thank you soooo much ayyappa..

Manik was getting tensed thinking of nandu reaction..

here nandu happily returns back to her home..

NANDU PLACE

She went inside running..

Chachi- arey nandu..! aaram se.. 

Nandu- chachi..! aaj mein bahuth khush hu..!

saying this, she twirled chachi by hugging her..

Chachi- itna khush.. kya bath hai...!

Nandu- wo.. kuch nai..! 

Chachi- Arey aise kaise kuch nai..! 

NAndu- chachi...! aap ye sab chodiyena..! aap ye bathayiye..! smurfy kaha hai..!

Chachi- wo toh lawn me hoga..!

nandu quickly went to smurfy..

she found smurfy playing in the lawn..

nandu rushed towards him and picked him in her arms..

Nandu- smurfy..!! i love you so so so much..!!! tum itne dhin manik ki help kar raha tha..

you are the best smurfy..!! thank you so much..!!!

she took him along with her to her room..

meanwhile in college..

mukthi- ab nandu ko kaun samjhayega..?

Cabir- you 3..!

navya alya mukthi together- hum...??

Dhruv- yes girls..! aap log nandini ke ache dosth ho na...!

Alya- arey nahi baba..! nandu gussa karegi..!

MAnik- please girls..!

he requested them...

Mukthi- manik..! tum itna pyaar karthe ho nandu se...?

Manik(smiles)- khudh se bhi jyaadha..!

NAvya- guys..! i've an idea..!

Dhruv- what is that..?

Navya- kal jab nandu college ayegi na.. tab hum sab milke ushe samjhayenge..!

Cabir- you mean to say ki we should wait till tomorrow..!

Mukthi- what a big deal cabir..!! bas ek hi dhin ka bath hai..!

Cabir- agar hum aise hi time waste kiya toh halaath aur bhi bhigad jayega..!

ALya- then what should we do now..!

MAnik- yep..! cabir is right..! i'll go right now and apologize to her..!

NAvya- agar wo nahi maani toh..!

Manik- kuch bhi karke manaloonga..!

ALya- par tumhe nandu ko manane ke liye uskhe ghar jaana padega..!

Manik- dont worry guys..! i've my own ways..!

Cabir- bro..! dont say that you're again going to take chocolate help..!!

MAnik- no cabir..! nandu ki chachi hai na..!

NAvya- wo hi toh..! chachi tumhe andhar bhi nahi aane dhegi..!

MAnik- arey meri bath toh suno..!!

Navya- tum nahi samaj rahe ho manik..!

Cabir- navya ji..! agar aap thodi dher chup rahe tho.. bichara kuch bol payega na..!

Mukthi- cabir navya..!! please yaar..!! stop fighting..

everyone giggles.. navya glares at cabir..

Alya- you say manik..! what are you upto..?

Manik- actually i had a good bonding with chachi..! so its easy for me to get into her house..!

Mukthi- what..?

navya- when..?

Alya- how..??

Dhruv- which question should he answer first..??

all 3 glare at dhruv..

Cabir- arey chota bacha hai..! maar daloge kya..!!

he said cupping dhruv face with his palms and caress his face like he is a small baby..

Mukthi- oh really..!

NAvya- chod dhe mukthi..!

Cabir- i know everyone is afraid of me..!

said sarcastically..

NAvya- fear my foot..!!

Alya- stop it navya..!

navya calmed herself but didnt stop glaring at cabir.. same with cabir too..

Alya- how come you know chachi manik..?

Manik- wo mein badh me bathaoonga..!!

Dhruv- aur kitne secrets chupa hai hum se..!

Manik- hmmm...! patha nai..!

Cabir- what do you mean by patha nai..! abhi mujhe jaan na hai sare secrets..!

Manik- cabir..! not now..! i'll make you all clear the whole confusion soon.. first let me calm my love..!!

ALya- woooo....!! love and all ha..!!

he blushes..

Cabir- haye mera sher..! sharmana bhi sekh liya..! not bad.., not bad..

manik glares at him..

Mukthi- ushe chod na yaar manik..! wo har wakth apna bak bak kartha rahega,,! you tell us what are you going to do now manik..?

MAnik- wait and watch..!

saying this he left..

NANDU PLACE

Nandu was busy admiring manik's pic in her phone which she saved secretly from his whatsapp dp..

Nandu pov- kal manik se milke kya bath karoo.. ayyappa..! i'm sooooooo excited..!! but itni jaldi bhi maph kyu karoo..! thoda masthi toh bantha hai..!! what say smurfy..!!

in response to her, smurfy licks his tongue and smiles..

Nandu pov- manik malhotra..! get ready to face your very own drama queen..!

after a 40 min.. manik reached her house..

he rang the door bell..!

for his goodness.. chachi hi door open kiya..!

chachi- manik beta,.! tum..?

Manik- hai chachi..!!

Chachi- hello beta..! tum achanak yaha ghar pe..!

Manik- i just came to surprise you chachi..! kyu..! mera yaha aana acha nahi laga aap ko..?

Chachi- arey aise mein thodi na kaha..!

Manik- aur nahi toh kya..? mein kab se yahi pe khada hu.! aap andhar tak nahi bhulaya..!

he made a cute sad pout..

Chachi- haye rabba..! tumhe achanak dekh ke mein bhuli gayi..! andhar aaoo na..

he entered and settled himself in the sofa..

MAnik- so chachi..! ghar pe koi nahi hai kya..?

Chahi- rishu school gaya hai..! aur murthy ji office..!!

Manik- acha..!

chachi- hmm.. tum rukh..! mein tumhare liye kuch lekar athi hu..!

MAnik- no formalities chachi..!

Chachi- arey..! aise thodi na hotha hai..! tum pehli baar ghar aaye ho..!

MAnik- okay chachi..! just a glass of water..

she was about to go.. smurfy comes and hops on manik..

manik caress his head lovingly..

Chachi tried to move him from manik..

but he didnt leave manik..!

chachi got amazed.. because smurfy never gets close to any person so soon..

chachi- smurfy..! nihe utharo..!!

Manik- its okay chachi..! he's so lovely..!!

Chachi- wo toh hai beta..!

Nandu comes from stairs and didnt realise manik's presence..

NAndu- kis se bath kar rahe ho chachi..!

MAnik pov- manik beta..! ab toh tu gaya..! kaise face karoo ush se..!

Chachi- arey nandu..! aao.. mein tumhe kisi se milwathi hu..!

NAndu- kaun hai..?

she came to the hall and found manik and smurfy together..

Nandu pov- aww... my two babies together looking so cute..

but she composed herself and pretended to be angry..

and glared at manik..

Manik get hell scared now..

Chachi- nandu ye manik hai..! aur manik ye..

Manik completes- nandini..!

said lovingly..

she felt her name as a prayer from his mouth..

she blushed herself without letting others know..

Chachi- tum ushe pehle bhi jaanthe ho kya..?

Nandu pov- pakada gaya..!!

Manik(stammering)- arey nai chachi..! aap hi toh bulaya na uske naam se..!

Chachi- ha.. mein bhi na..!

Nandu(acting)- smurfy..! niche utharo..! maine kaha na ajnabhi ke sath math khela karo..!

Chachi- nandu beta..! look at him.. he is so comfortable with manik..! even i got amazed..

MAnik- why chachi..??

Chachi- manik beta,,!! ye smurfy hai na.. wo kisi ka nahi suntha.. sirf nandu ki bath hi suntha hai.. aur ajnabhi ke pass toh bhilkul bhi nahi jatha hai..!! par ye dekho.. scene reverse ho gaya hai..! he's so comfortable with you..!

Manik- thats because may be he likes me chachi..

he said this looking at nandu lovingly..

Nandu pov- aww ayyappa..! his that looks making me weak..! i cant act any more..

Chachi- nandu..! tum manik se bathe karo.. mein ush ke liye pani le athi hu..!

MAnik got happy..

but his happiness flew away when he heard nandu..

NAndu- chachi..! aap bath kijiye na..! aap hi ka guest hai..! pani mein le athi hu..

Chachi- chalo..! tikhe..!

MAnik pov- Please dont make it hard on me nandu..! IT HURTS TO SEE YOU HURT..!!

Nandu pov- thank you ayyappa...! aap ne aaj bacha liya mujhe..! nahi toh mein apna angry mode  me jyadha dher tak nahi reh saktha tha..!

she left into kitchen..

Chachi- manik..! tum kya karthe ho..?

MAnik- mein SPACE ACADEMY me padtha hu chachi..!

Chachi- kya..? humare nandu bhi wahi padthi hai..!

Manik pov- isliye toh mein yaha hu..

nandu comes with water..

he was about to take the glass from her.. but she kept the glass on the table in front of him..

he looked at her sadly..

Chachi then took the glass and give it to him..

he gives a faint smile and drinks it..

Chachi- nandu..! patha hai..! manik bhi tumhare college me hi padtha hai..!

Nandu- is it..? i dont know chachi..!

chachi- manik..! tum humari nandu ko college me kabhi dekha nahi kya..?

MAnik- ha chachi..! 2-3 baar dekha tha..! but i didnt know her then..!

Nandu gave him "oh really" look..

manik understood her expressions and avoided her gaze..

Nandu took smurfy along with her to her room..

his eyes got stuck at her room itself.. 

and here  Chachi was speaking non stop..

he was thinking of an excuse..

suddenly he got an idea..

Manik- chachi..! mein nikhaltha hu..! 

Chachi- itni jaldi,,! dinner toh karke jao beta..!

Manik- chachi..! dinner ka toh kaphi wakth hai..! i really have an important work..! phir kabhi jaroor aonga..!

Chachi- tikhe beta..! apna dhyaan rakhna..!!

Manik- okay chachi..! bye..!

he made his way to outside and left..

after few seconds, he again rang the bell and hide himself..

Chachi opens the door and finds no one's presence..

so she moves outside to checkout..

manik taking this as  a chance and sneaked into the house and as soon as possible left near nandu's room..

finiding no one at outside too.. chachi came back and locked the door..

manik was standing in front of nandu's room.. 

manik pov- andhar jao ya nahi jao..! manik.! you've to do this..! come on..

motivating himself he took some strength and entered her room..

she was reading some magazine and he was facing her back..

he slowly whisperd- nan.. nandu..

she didnt hear him.. he spoke very slowly in a stammering voice..

he again called her.. this time a bit louder..

Manik- nandu..!

Nandu mutters- manik..!!

and turns to look at the voice and found manik..

a smile automatically crept on her face but she hid it immediately..

she composing herself asked him..

Nandu- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..?

Manik- nandu..! i know tumhe sab kuch patha chal gaya hai..!

Nandu- good then go..!

Manik- nandu..! let me explain..!

Nandu- aur kya reh gaya explain karne ke liye..!

Manik- please dont talk in a serious tone.. IT REALLY HURTS..!

Nandu- then what about me manik..! AREN'T I HURT..???

Manik- i know you're hurt..! mujhe ye bath chupana hi nahi chahiye tha..! but i'm more hurt and guilt than you..! IT REALLY HURTS TO HURT YOU..!!  

Nandu pov- ayyappa..! mein kuch jyadha hi bol diya..! lagtha hai manik really feeling guilt..!

looking her lost in thoughts.. manik spoke..

Manik- nandu.. kuch toh bolo..!

Nandu pov- no problem nandu.. he deserve this..! bas ek hi dhin ka bath hai..!

Manik- nandu..! please bolo..! tum kuch bhi bolo..! mein karne ke liye tayaar hu..! please dont be mad at me..!

Nandu pov- awww ayyappa..! he's so cute.. feeling like eating him.. please stop him making those cute faces.. they are melting me..

MAnik- nandu..

getting no response from her.. he said a bit louder..

she coming out of her lala land spoke..

Nandu- kuch bhi karoge..??

Manik(excitedly)- yes..

Nandu- then please leave from here..

Manik- nandu..! ek baar meri..

Nandu- suna nahi maine kya kaha..!

MAnik- no.. i wont leave until you accept my apology..!!

he said like a child..

Nandu- then dont blame me for this..!

MAnik- for what..?

Nandu(shouts)- chachi..!!

he quickly closes her mouth with his left palm and holds her by waist with his right hand..

she was lost in his touch..

they were so lose to each other..

PRECAP- NANDU PUNISH MANIK.. MANIK TO GET ILL.. NANDU SPECIAL TREATMENT..!!

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#uff...!! finally a 1st longest chapter of this ff..!! 2188 words..!!! longest chapter ever in this ff..!! hope you enjoyed..!!

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sru..