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Manik came forward and move Cabir aside. What he saw in front of his eyes. It's rise the fire in it. Nandini and Harsad laughing with each other carefree. Arya smirked.

Arya:- Aren't they are looking cute together?

All of them look at him like he asked kidney from them. Abhi slapped his head from behind.

Abhi:- Akhe cheak karwa khudka nalayek. ( idiot go and cheak your eyes)

Cabir :- Kuch bhi bolta hai tu. Meri shipping duba mat. Nandini sirf Manik ki hai. ( you are saying anything. Don't drowned my shipping. Nandini is only Manik's)

Arya made bad faces. But Manik was not listening them at all. His brain stop working listening Arya's words. His hand was in a fist. He was going red in the anger.

Manik (shout) :- Nandini!!!

All the person who was present there jumped on their place listening Manik's shout. Nandini and Harsad turned their face to Manik's side. Nandini was shocked and scared seeing Manik there.

Nandini (in mind) :- Oh no Ayyappa!! What have I done, Manik ne tho Harsad sa dur rehne ke liya kaha tha. Nandini now you are gone. Manik tho tujha aj kaccha chaba jayaga. Waise I have a little question I will be testy or not? (Oh no god!! What have I done. Manik told me to stay away from Harsad. Nandini you are gone. Manik will eat you alive. But I have a little question I will be testy or not?)

Harsad care less about this. Abhi was by Manik's side in a second.

Abhi:- Manik come down.

Manik started walking towards Nandini and Harsad. Abhi  was right behind Manik. Others also went behind them. Manik pull Nandini towards him.  He trying to act as much as cool he can be in front of Harsad.

Manik:- Why aren't you home yet? Why are you talking to him in the middle of road?

Manik can act cool but his grip on Nandini's arms was tight.

Nandini :- Manik woh...

Harsad :- Unse  kya puch raha hai. Mainu puch. Or angregy na Mainu bhi atta hai college tak padhai kiya hai maine.

Harsad said rising his coller. Abhi was shocked.  Cabir and Arya was trying their best not to laugh loud.

Cabir( only available to Arya) :- Aree yeh chamatkar kab gaya. ( when this miracle happened)

Arya:- Shayed uske sapne mai. ( May be in his dream)

Both high five with each other.  Dhruv was Confused.

Dhruv :- Why you guys high five with each other?

Cabir and Arya gave him weird look.

Dhruv : - Forgot I ask. You both are useless. But do you guys know when Harsad went to college? I heard he never make it to class 10.

This time Cabir and Arya blust on laughing. Dhruv gave them weird look.  Harsad who was trying to  impress Nandini stop that hearing their laugh.
Manik glance at them. They stop laughing.  Manik leave Nandini's arm and came face to face.

Manik( only Harsad can hear) :- Dekh Harsad mujhe tujse koi lena dena nahi hai. Bass tu Nandini se dur reh.  ( look Harsad I don't have nothing to do with you. Just stay away from Nandini)

Harsad :- Agar nahi kiya tho. ( if I didn't)

Manik :- Tho pir tu mera woh cehra dekhega Jo aj tak kisine nahi dekh. ( then you will see the face of me who nobody saw yet)

Harsad :- Dekhegge... ( will see)

Harsad wear his goggle.

Harsad :- Bye Nandini jii.

Harsad left from there. Manik was gritting his teeth with anger.

Nandini :- Manik woh main...

Manik :- We are going home.

Manik hold Nandini's wrist and started walking. Abhi and Dhruv followed him.

Cabir :- Shit yaar. One more popcorn moment chala gaya aj.  Mai apni popcorn ko bohot miss kar raha hu. Ghar jake hi khayugga.
( shit yaar. One more popcorn moment goes. I am missing my popcorn very much. After reaching home will have)

Arya:- Tera tho bass khane ki hi padi hai. ( you only care about food)

Cabir looked at Arya.

Cabir:- or tujhe tho dugga hi nahi.  ( And I will not share with you)

Cabir started walking behind them.

Arya:- Aree par kyu? Maine kya kiya?
( But why? What I have done?)

He also run behind them.  They reached home. Manik left from there without saying anything. Nandini was upset.  Abhi side hug her.

Abhi:- It will be fine. Go fresh up.

Nandini nod her head and left from there.  Abhi took a deep breath.  He turned towards others.

Abhi:- What?? Mere muh kaha dekh rahe ho.  Go nalayeko fresh up. You guys stink. ( what?? Why you looking at my face. Go idiots fresh up. You guys stink)

Abhi made disgusting face and left from there. Cabir  smell himself.

Cabir :- I still smell like a fresh flower. May be he was taking about Arya.

Arya was smelling himself also.

Arya:- What the hell it's not me.

Dhruv :- He was taking about you both idiot.

Dhruv left from there. Cabir and Arya looked at each other.

Cabir and Arya:- Is he??

Nandini  after fresh up. She came out from the bathroom.  She sat on the bed. Other girls entered inside the room.

Navya :- What happened Nandini?

Nandini took a deep breath.

Nandini :- Manik again got angry on me.

Mukti :- What have you done now?

Nandini bite her lips.

Nandini :- I talked to Harsad again.

Mukti :- Then it's really common.

Alia was quite all the time. But now she decided to talk.

Alia:- Bhai will come around Nandini.

Nandini looked at her and nod her head.

Alia :- And Nandini I'm sorry. I didn't mean to hide my relationship from you. I was....

Nandini :- Alia please not now. I'm not in a proper mind to deal with all thing. Everything is so messed up. My bestie lying to me. My crush getting angry on my again and again. It's too much.

Navya :- Alia told us everything.

Nandini looked at her then at Alia. Alia looked down.

Navya :- And I think you should hear her for once.

Nandini :- You seriously forgive her so easily Navya. She hide this big thing from us. We are her best friend for fucking shake.  May be Mukti also forgive her.

Mukti :- No I didn't. I am with you.

Navya :- I did because I believe she seriously have some issues.

Nandini:- Do whatever you guys wanna do. I can't handle it anymore.

Nandini left from there. So did Mukti. Alia sat on the bed crying.  Suddenly they heard a knock on the door. Alia wiped her tears.

Navya :- Come in.

Dhruv pushed the door open.  Navya and Alia both looked at him. Dhruv looked at Alia and saw her bloodshot eyes. He immediately rush towards her and keen down in front of here.

Dhruv (worriedly) :- what happened Alia? Why are you crying?

More tears fall from Alia's eyes. Dhruv quickly wiped them. Navya left from there giving the couple some privacy.

Dhruv :- Alia.

Alia couldn't take it anymore just hug Dhruv and started crying more. Dhruv was caring her hair.

Dhruv :- You are scaring me Alia.

Alia broke the hug and wiped her tears.

Alia:- Nandini is still not talking to me. Mukti also got angry. I don't know how to deal with them. I am losing my friends. I don't want to let them go.

Dhruv wiped her tears.

Dhruv :- I am here with you Alia. We will do this together. Let me talk to Nandini. Everything will be fine.

Alia shake her head in negative.

Alia:- No I want to convince them myself. You just be with me.

Alia hold Dhruv's hand. Dhruv keep the hold tight.

Dhruv :- I always will.

It's dinner time now. Everyone was having dinner. Nandini as usual trying to get Manik's attention.

Nandini:- Manik toda dal du tumhe? ( Manik should I serve you some cooked peals)

Manik didn't even looked at Nandini.
It's far to talk. Nandini feel bad and looked at her plate. Abhi, Cabir and Dhruv feel bad for her. Arya was quite happy. Girls didn't even understand what is happening. Manik stood up.

Manik :- I'm done with dinner. Are you coming with me Abhi?

Abhi also stood up.

Abhi:- I'm also done. Let's go.

Manik without seeing Nandini left with Abhi. Nandini keep looking at Manik until he gone. Nandini left everything and went to living room. She sat on the couch. Others looked at each other face.

Cabir :- Mai dekha hu. ( I will see it)

Arya:- Mai bhi araha hu. (I am coming too)

Dhruv :- Me too.

They went to Nandini.

Alia :-  We should also be with her.

Navya nod.

Mukti :- No you both go to your room. Nandini was upset with both of you also. Seeing you both can upset her more. I will be with her.

Mukti didn't even wait for their answer and left from there. Alia got hurt. She wants to be with here friend and comfort her. But she was helpless here. Mukti was  right her presence can upset her more.

Navya :- Don't worry Alia. Nandini will be alright. You know your friend  she will make Manik talk to her anyhow and she will forgive you also.

Alia:- I hope what you are saying become true.

Navya:- Sure it will. Now let's go. You should sleep. Did you saw you hit dark circles around your eyes.

Alia's eyes got wide. She touched her under eyes.

Alia :-  Is that ture??

Navya made a sorry face and nod her head.

Alia:- Oh my god!! I need my beauty sleep now.

Alia hurrying left from there. Navya smiled.

Navya :- Thank god. I divide her mind. Otherwise she will be more upset.

Navya also left behind Alia.

Cabir sat beside Nandini and keep his hand around her shoulder.

Cabir :- What happened to our dabbag Nandini? Why she is upset?

Nandini looked at Cabir then shift her eyes on her lap.

Nandini :- I again upset Manik. I don't know that time will he forgive me or not.

Dhruv sat in front of Nandini on center table.

Dhruv :- Then you shouldn't do that things hel told you not to.

Nandini :- I know but...ho gayi hai naa. Ab kya Karu main. ( Its done. What should I do now)

Cabir :- You have your Nandini magic with you. Just move around you wand around Manik then he will be again on his keens in front of you.

Cabir said while moving his hand around.  Nandini smiled a little.

Arya:- You are saying like Manik was on his  keens infornt of her before.

Cabir :- Chup ho ja tu. ( you stop)

Mukti came there.

Mukti :- Don't be upset Nandini. Just cheer up. These boys are all the same. Boys are two type. They can be angry or stupid.

Arya:- And who the hell give you permission to insult boys. Give us some respect.

Mukti :- Look who is talking about respect. Jiske pass khuka self respect nahi hai.  ( Who doesn't have self respect)

Arya was going to say something but Dhruv stop him.

Dhruv :- Tum dono pir se suru ho gaye. ( You both started again)

Arya pointed towards Mukti.

Arya:- She started it.

Mukti was going to pull Arya's hair. But Dhruv stop them.

Dhruv :- Seriously guys. Nandini is upset here. But you guys busy in fighting.

Arya:-  Vese I have an idea to cheer up Nandini.

Nandini just looked at him. But didn't said anything.

Arya:- Nandini you wanna go.

Nandini get up from her place and nod her head in negative.

Nandini :- I don't feel like. You guys go.

Arya:- Aree Nandini don't be a spoil brat. It will be fun. Other will also go with us.  It is the best place to cheer up mood.

After coming here Mukti didn't got time to expore the place more. So she agree immediately.

Mukti:- Chal na Nandini. Arya keh raha hai tho Acha hi hoga. Chal na meri khatir. ( Let's go Nandini. If Arya is saying the place is good then it will be.  Let's go for me)

Cabir was not at all happy with idea.  He was finding it little fishy. Manik and Abhi were also not with them. It can be dangerous. If something will happened Manik will have their head.

Cabir ( rising his eyebrow) :- What place you are talking about?

Arya(smirked) :- That I have to know and you have to find out.

Dhruv also not feeling good about it. Its night now and its village. Taking girls out at night it's may be dangerous. Its not town.

Arya:- Then who is coming?

Mukti :- Nandini?

Nandini :- OK fine I am coming.

Arya looked at Cabir and Dhruv. They can't left them with Arya so they agreed. Then they left from there.

That’s for today. Arya is taking Nandini and Mukti somewhere. Any guesses where? What will happened when Manik got to know about this? Do share your opinion by comments.

I'm seriously disappointed with the response. Votes and comments both are decreasing. I'm really upset with it. Are you guys not liking my story anymore?

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Asha