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Nandini went behind Manik and untied the cloth around his eyes. Manik bink his eyes from few times then he went speechless looking at the arrangements.

Manik:- Nandini.

The tarace was decorating beautiful with lights. There place a mattress on middle. There was candals placed on floor.

(Kind of like this)

Manik :- Wow!!!

Manik was looking around.

Manik :- Nandini!

Manik turn around but Nandini was not there. He looked down and saw Nandini was sitting on her keens holding her ears. Manik was confused.

Manik :- Nandini.

Nandini :- I'm sorry Manik. I'm sorry for everything. I know mujhe tumhari bat manni chahiye thi. I shouldn't go out with Harsad. I shouldn't insult Soha. I shouldn't call Alia here without your permission. I know sab meri galti hai. I'm sorry for that. Please forgive me Manik.

Nandini said lowing her eyes. Manik fold his hand around his chest.

Manik :- Ho geya?

Nandini look up.

Nandini :- Nahi. I know mai utpatag harkate karti hu. Par you know na I really love you.

Manik look other side.

Nandini :- I don't like that Soha near you. That's why I insult. You are mine you should remember that.

Manik roll his eyes.

Nandini :- And about Harsad thing I was just angry on you. I know he could be dangerous. I will be careful next time.

Manik rise his eyebrow.

Nandini :- OK fine I will not go with him anywhere and you were angry tho I was not getting what to do. That's why I call my friends here.

Manik just looking at Nandini.

Nandini :- Will you say something my keens hurting.

Manik:- Get up.

Nandini :- No Jab tak tum mujhe maaf nahi karoge I will not get up.

Manik :- Nandini get up.

Nandini shake her head in negative.

Manik :- OK fine I forgive you. Now get up.

Nandini :- Pakka na?

Manik :- Haan baba.

Nandini get up and hug Manik.

Nandini :- Thank you Manik. I promise I will not repeat my mistake.

Manik just keep his hand around her. They broke the hug. Manik was about to left from there. But Nandini hold her hand.

Manik :- What? Tumhe jo bolna tha tumne bol diya na tho ab kya.

Nandini :- Manik tum kitna unromantic ho. Kitne din baad humme time mila hai ek dusre ke liye or tum ja rahe ho.

Manik:- Listen Nandini if you forgotten I have work at morning. So I need so sleep. Or rat bhi bohot huyi hai.

Nandini :- No you are not going. You have to spend some time with me.

Manik:- Nandini.....

Nandini made puppy face.

Nandini :- Please Manik please.

Manik groan.

Manik :- Fine.

Nandini jumped in happiness.

Cabir came back side of the house. He was continuously calling Navya. But she was not picking up the phone.

Cabir :- Where the hell is this girl? Mujhe yeha wait karne ko bolke kaha chali gayi. Aj moka tha tho choca tha kuch romantic bate karegge par nahi. Kaha reh gayi yeh ladki.

Cabir sat down on a log and continually calling Navya.

Manik removed his shoes and sat down on mattress.

Manik :- Now what?

Nandini :- I'm coming in a minute.

Manik just nod his head. Nandini left from there and came back with a box. She also removed her sandal and sat down on mattress facing Manik. Manik looked annoyed.

Manik :- Ab isme kya hai?

Nandini make a sad face.

Nandini :- Tum mere liye kuch bhi nahi karte. Ab jab mai kar rahi hu tumhe usmai bhi problem hai.

Manik :- Ahh... Fine.

Manik gave a give smile.

Manik :- What is in it Nandini?

He said Nandini 's name while gritting his teeth with a force smile. Nandini was happy with that only. She opened the box.

Nandini:- ta da... I baked a cake for you.

Manik raised his eyebrow.

Manik:- Cake! Kis khushi mai? Aj mera birthday tho nahi hai.

Nandini :- Birthday ke bina cake nahi kha sakte kya.

Manik (murmured) :- point.

Nandini opened the box and place the cake in front of Manik. The cake was beautiful. It has written I'm sorry on top with a smile.

Nandini :- l baked this cake for you.

Nandini took Manik's hand in her.

Nandini :- Manik let's eat this cake and forgive each other.

Manik rise his eyesbow.

Manik :- forgive each other? What do you mean by that. Isn't it only me. I am going to forgive you. Not you.

Nandini give him a angry glance.

Nandini :- Oh really then what about you talk rudly with me, argued with me and taking that stupid Soha poha's side. Shouldn't you ask for forgiveness for those acts?

Manik:- No I don't think so. I think I did right.

Nandini jerked his hand.

Nandini :- Fine... Get the hell out of here.

Manik was shocked listening Nandini's outblast. Nandini angrily get up with the cake in her hand.

Manik :- Where are you taking the cake?

Nandini :- My cake I will take wherever I want.

Manik :- But you baked it for me na?

Nandini :- You are not sorry for your behaviour na.

Nandini said mocking him.

Manik :- Fine. I'm sorry.

Nandini :- First say Nandini I'm sorry. I shouldn talked to you rudly. You are a very sweet girl.

Manik made bad face.

Manik:- Nandini I'm sorry. I shouldn talked to you rudly. You are a very sweet girl. Now happy?

Nandini smiled and sat infront of Manik.

Nandini :- Now say Nandini I love you.

Manik's eyes went wide.

Manik :- Bullshit I'm not going to say that.

Nandini :- Then I will not give you cake.

Manik :- I don't want also.

Manik was about to get up. But Nandini hold his hand.

Nandini :- OK don't get angry. Let's cut the cake.

Manik sat down. They both cut the cake together. Manik pick up a piece of cake and eat himself only. Nandini thought he was going to feed her. But get disappointed seeing Manik eating himself only. Nandini snatch the kinef from Manik. She cut herself a piece and ate it. Manik smiled hidden while licking his finger.

Cabir was looking frustrated. He was sitting there like half and hour.

Cabir :- God where is this girl? Today I got some time thought to spend with her but no. She is no where to seen. I'm calling and messaging her continuesly but she is not picking my call nor replying my massages. Should I go and see? Dekh ke atte hai.

He went inside the house. He climb up the stairs. He quietly went in front of girls room.

Cabir :- Should I go? Cabir itna kya soch raha hai chalte hai.

Cabir push the door and inside. Which he saw made him pull his own hair. Our Navya Naveli was sleeping peachfully. Mukti was sleep on the other side of bed.

Cabir :- God yeh ladki.

Cabir went beside Navya. Cabir shake Navya. Navya didn't woke up.

Cabir (Whisper):- Navya!! Navya!! Navya!!

Navya :- Su away. Let me sleep.

Cabir :- Navya get up. It's me Cabir.

Navya(in sleep):- Tho kya hum darte nahi sunse. I'm Navya Naveli. I know karat.

Navya swiped her hand in the air but unfortunately it hit Cabir 's nose. Cabir hold his nose and gulp up the pain. Cabir looked at Navya.

Cabir (in mind) :- It's impossible to wake this girl. Yeh tho kumbakaran ki nani nikli. Sotte Sotte karate karti hai kya dangerous ladki hai. Kisko Pata tha iss wole masum face ke pisse yeh hai. Kya dekh ke pyaar kiya tha tune Cabir.

Cabir holding his nose came out of the room.

Cabir :- Wohha Nandini Manik ke liye surprise plan kar rahi hai. Or meri girlfriend ghode bech ke so rahi hai. Kya kismat hai meri. Manik beta kya kismat pai hai tune. Mai ab kya Karu? Chalke so hi jata hu.

Cabir went to to room and slept.

Manik and Nandini sitting by side on mattress. Manik was looking at the sky. Nandini was observing Manik.

Manik:- These stars... Aren't they are beautiful.

Nandini looked at the sky.

Nandini :- Say they are.

Manik :- They are always twinkle all the time.

Nandini :- I always saw everyone admiring moon. But frist time seeing someone admiring stars. Any reasons?

Manik looked at Nandini. He chukled.

Manik :- Reasons tho hai. You wanna know?

Manik looked at Nandini. Nandini nod her head excitedly.

Manik:- My grandmother... Meri dadi when I was small. Whenever I cried at night she used to get me and terrace and tell me story about stars and sing me song. We almost every night came to terrace and spent time talking with stars.

Nandini :- You missed her. Don't you?

Manik :- Yes I do. But I believe she is no among in these stars and smiling at me.

Manik take a deep breath and laid down on mattress. He keep his both hand behind his head. His eyes were still admiring the stars. Nandini took out his one hand under his head and laid down placing her head on his hand. Manik looked at Nandini. Nandini also looked at Manik.

Nandini :- I'm not really very fond of stars. But as they are your favourite now they are mine favourite too.

Nandini came Manik a big smile. Manik was for the first time admiring Nandini.

Nandini :- Manik!!

Some hairs fall on Nandini 'a face. Manik brought her free and truck those hair behind her ear. He placed his hand on her cheek. He started rubbing his thumb on her cheek. There face was close. Seeing Manik' s admiring eyes on her Nandini blush and bit her lips. Seeing Nandini biting her lips. Manik 's eyes followed there.

Manik moved his finger on her lips and freed her lips from her teeth. He rubbed his thumb on her lips. Manik started moving close to Nandini. Nandini seeing him making a move closed her eyes. Soon she felt Manik's lips on her.

Nandini feel like time has stopped. He heartbeat also stopped. Manik moved his lips on her. Stucking her lips slowly. Nandini was numb to react. Manik bite her lips. Nandini came back to reality and started moving her lips following him. Soon the kiss turn into passionate one.

Manik came top of Nandini. He placed his hand on Nandini's neck and other hand was supporting his body on Nandini. Nandini's hands soon found Manik 'a hair and started pulling him more to her. The kiss turned into a wild on. Manik was kissing Nandini like a caveman. Nandini was following him gladly.

Arya was laying on bed closing his eyes. He was waiting for the time when Abhi will fall asleep. Arya really don't want to ruin Manan moments. But listening Nandini 'a warning definitely he was going to ruin their moment. Abhi was trying to make a conversation. So that Arya should forget about Nandini' s tant.

But Arya being Arya. He was act like he forgot what Nandini said. He was enjoying talking with Abhi. Then he told Abhi that he was sleepy and Abhi brought his lie and he fall asleep. Arya get up and went near Abhi's bed and saw him sound sleep.

Arya:- Now I can go. Nandini Murty here I come. Let's see how will you romance with Manik.

Arya smiled evily and left from there.

Arya was climbing the stairs. He was very much excited. He was laughing inside imagining Nandini 's Angry face. He push the door. He was mesmerising seeing the decoration.

Arya :Wow impressive.

He looked around and what he saw made him speechless. Manik was top of Nandini and kissing hell out her. Arya's eyes went wide. He just didn't think much just turn around and ran to his room.

Feeling out of breath Manik Nandini broke the kiss both was breathing heavily. Manik was looking at her eyes. Nandini removed her hand from his hair to his cheek. She rub his cheek with her thumb. This brought Manik in reality . He got up from Nandini. He sat down on mattress. Nandini followed him she also get up and sat on mattress.

Manik was quite. He run his hand in his hair. Nandini was feeling shy. She was looking at Manik under her eyelashes. Manik rubbed his face with his both hand. He looked at Nandini saw her looking at him only. Nandini low her eyes seeing Manik looking at her. Her cheeks turn red due to blush.

Manik look away. He took a deep breath and suddenly get up from mattress. Nandini was confused. She looked at Manik. But his face was blank. Manik wore his shoes and without looking at Nandini. He started walking towards terrace door. Nandini also get up.

Nandini :- Manik!! Manik!!

But Manik didn't listen to her. He left from there. Nandini was standing on terrace alone.

Nandini :- What happened to him?

Nandini was confused. But suddenly she remembered what happened few minutes back. Again red color rush in her cheeks. Nandini touch her lips with her hand. She can still feel his lips on her.

Nandini :- He kissed me back. Oh my God!!! Thank you so much Ayyappa. I'm now sure Manik has feelings for me. Now I will make sure he confessed to me soon.

Nandini smile whole heartily.

Arya just run to his room and sat on the bed breathing hard. He took a glass of water from side table of his bed and drunk it one go.

Arya:- What I just saw man!!!

He still can't believed his eyes.

Arya:- I shouldn't have gone there. Kisi ka private moments dekhna galat hai. Par I never thought Manik is so wild. He was kissing Nandini like a hungry animal. My god!!! What I am thinking! Arya shut up! Shut up! Manik is your best friend and Nandini...

Arya make face.

Arya:- Jo bhi ho. They shouldn't get to know that I saw them doing that.

He run his ran in his hair.

Arya:- Uff! I need some sleep.

Then he laid down on bed and fall asleep.

Nandini was happily comeing downstairs while humming a song. She came first floor. She was going to turn right. But she heard something fall and stop in her track. She turn to left.

Nandini (whisper to herself ) :- I feel like I heard something falling from that side.

Nandini was little bit scared.

Nandini (whisper to herself) :- Should I go? What if its some thief! I should go and cheak.

Nandini with slow step went towards the door. She saw the door was not locked.

Nandini(in mind) :- Door tho khula huya hai. Definitely koi andar gussa hai.

Nandini silently push the door. She just push her head and saw all the broken furniture and other useless things was there. Luckily light switch was on.

Nandini (in mind) :- Yeh tho store room hai. Shayed koi rat hogi. RAT!!! Oh my god! Bhagle Nandini.

Nandini was going to run from there. But she again heard something.

Nandini(whisper) :- Yeh kesi awaj hai.

She push the door fully and get inside the room. But what she saw next make her eyes came out from its socket.

Nandini (shout) :- WHAT THE HELL!!!

That's for today. What you guys think what must be Nandini saw? Did you liked Manan's moment? Do share your views by comments.

Sorry guys for late. I already told you I had exam that's why I didn't able to update. After exam I fall sick. I'm still not well. Hopefully this time I will be not late.

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