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Nandini went to terrace and saw Manik was standing there looking at the sky. Nandini went towards him and hug him from back. Manik became surprise. He look back and saw Nandini was hugging him.

Nandini gave him a sweet smile. But Manik turn his face. He didn't talk to Nandini. Didn't even removed her hand around him. Nandini was little bit surprise. She broke the hug and came his side.

Nandini:- Still angry?

Manik didn't answer her question. He was quietly standing there looking at the sky. Nandini place her hand on Manik's which is on railing.

Nandini:- I'm sorry. I shouldn't have go with Harsad.

Manik about to left from there. But Nandini hold his hand to stop him.

Nandini:- I'm sorry Manik. Please don't be mad at me. I will not repeat my mistake again. Please forgive me.

Manik didn't even look at Nandini.

Manik:- It's late. Go to sleep.

Manik left from there. Nandini was standing there looking at the way Manik left.

Nandini:- He will not forgive me easily.

Nandini pull her hair with both hand.

Nandini:- Argh!! Why you are so stupid Nandini. Kya jarurat thi Harsad ke sath jane ki. Ab pata nahi Manik mujhe maaf karga bhi nahi.

Nandini join her hand and look up.

Nandini:- Ayyiappa please meri problem slove kar do. Mai na kisko paresan nahi karuggi. Achi bacci banke rahuggi. Please meri help kar do.

She then come downstairs went to her room and fall sleep.

Next morning Nandini woke up late. She went downstairs and saw eagle's were having breakfast.

Nandini:- Good morning everyone.

Arya made bad face.

Arya:- What so good about this morning.

Nandini glare at him. Cabir slap Arya's back of head.

Cabir:- Forget him Nandini. Good morning.

Nandini pass Cabir a sweet smile. She pull the chair beside Manik.

Nandini (with a sweet smile):- Good morning Manik.

Manik didn't answer her. He was busy eating his breakfast. Nandini took Manik's coffee mug and ship from it.

Nandini:- So what's the plan today guys?

Dhruv:- Nothing much. Same plan we have to visit site and keep eye on everything.

Nandini:- But today is Sunday. I thought we will roam around the village today.

Listening this Manik fist his hand around the spoon.

Arya:- Kyu!? Harsad sath village gumke man nahi vara.

Everyone's eyes snap towards Arya.

Arya:- What Maine kuch gakat kaha kya?

Nandini was gritting her teeth in anger.

Abhi:- Arya behave yourself.

Arya:- Why are you scolding me. I'm saying the truth only.

Manik place his glass on table with loud sound. He push the chair and get up.

Manik:- I'm done. I'm going to site.

Manik left from there. Everyone expect Arya share a helpless look. Others also left after finishing their breakfast. Nandini was alone in house.

Nandini:- Yeh Arya samajta hai kya khudko. Iska kuch karna parega. Meri gum pe usko bohot maja araha hai na. Dekh luggi usse.

Nandini was talking with herself when the main door blust open.

Girls:- Nandini!!!

Nandini look behind and saw her friends were here.

Nandini:- My lovies.

Nandini went running towards them and hug them.

Nandini:- Finally you guys here. I missed you guys so much.

Girls:- We missed you too.

They went to Nandini's room. They were sitting on bed. Mukti came from washroom. She was whipping her face with towel.

Alia:- Did you talked to bhai?

Nandini place a pillow on her lap.

Nandini:- I tried but he is not ready to accept my apology.

Navya:- I think Manik is really very very angry with you.

Alia:- Haan. I think you should give bhai his own space.

Mukti:- I agree with Alia.

Nandini:- Agar space dene ki chakar mai woh Soha mere Manik ko legayi tho.

Navya:- Manik kya chota bacha hai Jo kisi ke bhi batomai aajayega.

Nandini:- I don't know anything you guys have to help me to manofy Manik.

Alia:- Isliye hi tho hum yeha aye hai. Tu chinta mat kar sab tik hoga.

Alia hug Nandini others two also join them.

Eagles came home at evening. They entered inside the house. They hard laughing and giggles sound coming from living room. They were curious about what going on there. They went to living room and saw all girls were chilling and talking. Boys were shocked seeing other girls there.

Manik(shout):- What the hell is happening here?

Listening Manik's shout girls stop. They look behind and saw all boys shocked faces. Girls stood up from their place.

Manik:- Alia what are you doing here?

Alia:- Woh bhai I came to see you.

Alia look down.

Manik:- See me!! Unbelievable!! You never come to see me. Then why this time. And you don't have that much guts to come here without asking me. Now tell me quickly who told you to come there.

Girls were looking at each other faces. They were afraid of Manik.

Alia:- None bhai. I came here with my own will.

Alia was trying to save Nandini from Manik. Manik gave Alia angry glare.

Manik:- Stop lying Alia. Don't you dare lie to me. Otherwise I will call dad. Did he know you came here?

Alia gulp up her saliva.

Alia:- Bhai why are you dragging dad in between.

Abhi came forward to rescue Alia.

Abhi:- Manik rehne de. Kyu usse dara raha hai. Agayi tho kya huya. Let it be na.

Manik:- No Abhi. How can she came here without informing me. Even I can guess she lied to mom and dad. Didn't you Alia?

Alia look down. She have nothing to say. Nandini was feeling bad for Alia. Because of her Manik was scolding Alia.

Alia:- Bhai mai...

Manik:- I don't want to heard any excuse Alia. Just tell me the name.

Nandini came forward.

Nandini:- I called her here Manik.

Manik looked at her angrily. Abhi close his eyes and shake his head in negative.

That's for today. Girls gang was in village. Manik is now hell angry with Nandini more than before. Will Nandini able to manofy Manik? Which is your favourite part? Do share your view by comments.

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Asha