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Manik slides his hand around nandu's waist..

she gave an angry glare to him..

he immediately took off his hand..

this was witnessed by aryaman..

Arya pov - poor manik..!

Soon the elders asked abhi and mukthi to exchange their rings..

They happily exchanged their rings..

MUKTHI RING

ABHIMANYU RING

After the engagement.. abhi and mukthi were seated in a specially decorated chair..

everyone came to them and congratulated them..

they replied everyone with  a smile..

this wishing session continued..

The youngsters got bored..

Alya & Navya stood along with Mukthi..

Nandu went to sanju and Nyo..

They were talking and smiling..

But one person's gaze was stick at nandu only..

she knew it obviously the person was her monster himself.. but ignored..

Cabir comes to manik..

CAbir- Manik..! agar aise hi dekthe rahogi toh uska gussa santh ho jayeag kya...?

Manik- karu toh bhi kya karoon yaar..! abhi tak madam gusse me hai..!

Cabir- toh jaa.. jaakar ushe manalo..!

MAnik- agar wo phir se gussa kiya toh..!!

Cabir- wo sab badh me dekha jayega..! pehle tu jaa.. uske pass..

MAnik- hmm.. jaatha hu..

he still stood at his place.. didnt move an inch..

Cabir pushed him..

MAnik glared at him.. he too gave back an equal glare at manik..

so manik without arguing started moving towards nandu..

just then mohith comes to nandu..

Mohith- hey..!

Nandu- hai mohith..!

she smiled at him wantedly making manik angry..

Mohtih- namasthey aunty...!

Sanju- namasthe beta..!

Nyo- tumhara mom nahi aayi kya..?

Mohtih- no aunty..! mom and dad were out of station.. so mujhe akhele hi aana pada..!

NAndu(chuckled)- Mohith..! you arent a child..! 

Mohith (blushes)- Nandu..! tum bhi na..

both shared a laugh..

MAnik anger raised to peak..

so he immediately moved towards her..

MAnik- Hey Rohith..! you here..?

Mohith- Hai manik..! Abhi was my friend too..! and its Mohith..! not Rohith..!

Nandu giggled.. he glared at her..

Manik- oh..! whatever.. Engagement abhi ka hai..! toh phir tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..?

This time NAndu glared at manik.. but he didnt care.. 

Mohith- Excuse me..!! 

MAnik- pehle abhi ke pass jaa.. aur ushe wish karle..!!

Mohtih- ha.. jatha hu..

Manik- arey jatha hu kya.. jayiye..!

Mohith(irritated)- okay nandu..! stick around..! i'll be back..

Manik(sternly)- Excuse..! do i need to remind you again..? Its nandini for you..! 

Mohith got remember his first meet with manik and frightened..

Mohith (stammering)- sorry.. sorry.. i forgot..! aage se dhyaan rakhunga..!

MAnik- better you do..! anyways lets meet again in my engagement..!

Mohith- yeah.. ofcourse.. advance congratulation both of you..!

MAnik(shocked)- kya..? tumhe already patha tha that we both are getting engaged..

Mohith- ha jab hum pehli baar mila toh in that party.. tab  aunty ne mere mom ko bathaya tha.. so i got to know..!

Manik mutters- agar patha hai toh meri nandu se kyu chipakthe rehthe ho..?

Mohith- pardon..?

he didnt understood..

but nandu heard it and smiled herself..

MAnik- kuch nai.. go.. go and meet them.. and ha.. dont worry about my nandu.. she is safe and secure with her would be fiancee..!! 

Mohith- hmm...

he rushed as quickly as possible to protect himself from further complications..

Manik gave a smirking look..

Nandu(angrily)- mom..! aap log ushe rokthe kyu nahi ho..?

MAnik- because they knew i wasn't wrong..!

Nandu- mom..!!

Sanju- nyo..! chalo.. hum khane chalthe hai..

Nyo- ha ha chalo..

Nandu- Mom..!

MAnik- kya bacho ki tarah mom mom laga rakha hai...!

Nandu- i dont care to answer you..!

Manik- thank god..!

she looks at him surprisingly..

Manik- look kya dhe rahi ho.. jab se aaya hu.. mujhse bath bhi nahi kiya..! ab finally you spoke..!

she left in anger..

MAnik too followed her..

he immediately messaged the rest of the gang to meet them except mukthi and abhi..

so everyone came to him..

Dhruv- kya huwa manik..?

Alya- dont tell me that tum phirse nandu ko gussa kar diya..!

Manik- arey nahi baba..! mein ushe manana chahtha hu..

Cabir- happy realization manik baba..!

Mnaik glared at him..

Navya- stop glaring at him... and batha.. kya problem hai..

Manik explained his plan..

Arya- no way bro.. agar ushe patha chala that we helped you.. then its a danger for us..!

Manik- arey kuch nai hoga.. mein hu na..!

Cabir- nooo.. wo nahi maan jayegi.. so please dont waste our time..!

Dhruv- Cabir..! tu aishe kaise bol saktha hai..! he's our buddy..!

Alya- Nandu bhi humari friend hi hai Dhruv..!

Navya- Alya..! i think hume manik ka help karna chahiye..!!

MAnik- really madhubala...?

she galres at him..

Manik- sorry.. navya ji...!

CAbir- tikhe batha.. hum ye plan kaha execute karenge..?

MAnik- good.. as everyone is busy here.. lets do it in the upstairs..

Navya- par Nandu waha kaise aayegi..!

Arya- tum aur alya hai na.. kuch bhi batha kar ladho ushe chath pe..!

ALya- okay..!

they went to start their plan..

Meanwhile Manik cabir dhruv and aryaman made the required arrangements..

ALya- Nandu..! where are you till now..?

Nandu- arey tum log kaha the.. mein kabse dhund rahi hu..!

NAvya- wo hum na.. kuch plan karne gaye the..!

NAndu- plan...??? what plan..??

Alya- nandu..! tum bhi na.. aaj mukthi ka engagement hai.. so we should plan something big na..!

NAvya- ha... just like a surprise...

Nandu- offo..! mein toh ye bath bhuli gayi.. toh hum kya karenge..?

ALya- lets discuss with the boys and then decide..

 NAvya- mein cabir aur manik ko bhulake athi hu..!

Alya- aur mein dhruv aur aryaman ko..

NAndu- phir mein kya karroon..?

NAvya- ha.. tum tab tak chath pe humare wait karna.. hum sab logo ki wahi pe le athe hai..!

NAndu- okay..!

Nandu made her way to upstairs..

Alya and Navya high5's..

Navya messages cabir as work done..!

he informed to manik..

nandu already reached upstairs and settles herself on a chair over there..

all the boys hide from her..

just then a small boy of age 9 comes to her and gives her a card and three flowers..

she understood it was manik and kept the card and flowers aside..

after 1 minute.. another girl of same age comes to her and gives her another card along with same flowers..

she ignored it too...

again a girl comes and gives her one more card along with a teddy..

she got much irritated and tried calling alya and navya..

they were not attending the calls..

NAndu pov- wth..! ye dhono kaha reh gaye ..?

she looks at all the cards and her heart starts melting..

but she brainwashed herself..

Nandu pov- no nandu.. not this time..

again a boy comes and gives her a card along with a balloon..

she tried to hold the boy... but the boy escaped from her..

Nandu pov- oh god..! kya karoon is monster ka..? 

this time a girl of 5 years comes to her and pecks on her cheek and gives her the card..

she smiles looking at the cute girl.. but her smile vanished when she look back at the card..

her anger has no limits now.. so she shouted..

NAndu- stop it manik..! i know you're here.. so come out...!!

he was hesitating to go near her.. actually afraid bichara..!

but the boys push him..

so he unexpectedly came near her..

he glares at them..

she turns and looks at him..

he gave a forced smile and whispered..

MAnik- hai..!

NAndu(angrily)- what's all this..?

MAnik(innocently)- kya..?

NAndu- dont act okay..! ye sorry cards bhejke kya karna chahthe ho..?

MAnik- dont you know what i'm trying to do..?

Nandu- but you do know.. i wont forgive you that easily..!

MAnik- come on nandu.. aur kitna gussa karogi..! sorry bola na baba..

she made a sad pout and turned to the other side..

NAndu- tumhe patha hai.. jab tum mujhe chodke chale gaye the.. mujhe kaise feel huwa tha..!

i thought i lost you..!

she was sobbing now..

he comes near her and wipes off her tears..

MAnik- sorry jaan..!

she was still sobbing..

so an idea stuck him and he started singing..

I am a fool, I am a fool
I am a fool fool fool!
You big heart, you big heart
You got very big heart!

she turns to look at him...

when he tried to come near her.. she pushed him and went away from him..

I come near, I come near
I come near near near
You go far, you go far
You go very very far

she still didnt look at him..

he kneels down infront of her..

Arey thanda rakh kaleja

Thoda baraf pe ghis le bheja
Sorry le ja, maafi de ja humko free

One, two, three!
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Pakde hum dono kaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry!
Bache ki loge jaan kya
Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Bache ki loge jaan kya

she didnt respond but cries again..

I know you love me and You know I love ya

Hai apne understanding to phir locha-lafda kya
I want a big big smile and
I want it only only now
Are! andar se tu okay hai upar se khaye bhav

Aise kaai ko atka
Tere ghar ka jhadu katka
Tu jo bole kar denge daily free!

One, two, three!
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Pakde hum dono kaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry!
Bachche ki loge jaan kya
Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Bachche ki loge jaan kya?

she stopped crying now but didnt look at him..

Final warning, final warning,

Don't you break my heart
Automatic guilty feeling
One time over smart

See, see, see can't you see see see
Kitne deep deep deep mere dil ke jazbaat
Hai kaai ko naaraaz
Karle maandavli maharaj
Hum sab aaj ye teri khaaj khuja de free

this time all the gang members join him and sings along..

One, two, three!

Sorry Sorry Sorry
Pakde hum dono kaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry!
Bache ki loge jaan kya
Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Bache ki loge jaan kya?

manik again sat on his knees and made a puppy face where the others surrounded him.. she melted and finally smiles...

Everyone(shouts)- Eureka...!!!

Manik(surprised)- tum log kyu excite ho rahe ho..? wo toh mera kaam hai..!

Arya- manik..! whoever get excited.. the reason is same na..

she smiles even wider..

he immediately stood up and hugs her with lot of love..

she too hugs him back with same passion of love..

MAnik- I missed this smile so much jaan..

she breaks the hug..

Nandu- sab kuch tumhare wajah se huwa hai..

she complained as a child..

MAnik- okay... leave that topic..

he hugged her again..

Cabir- oye.. hello.. koi live mms dhekne ka saukh nahi hai hume..

MAnik- then close your eyes saale..!

Cabir- kabhi toh sharma karo manik baba..!

Nandu- mere hone wale fiancee hai.. wo jo bhi kare.. tujhe kya problem hai..?

Navya- wow nandu..! fiancee and all ha...

she blushes..

MAnik- just leave us alone..

Dhruv- ha buddy..! ab humare kya jaroorat hai tumhe..!

Arya- jab help chahiye hotha hai toh bhag ke aa jatha hai..!

NAndu- friends hothe kisliye..!

Cabir- ye humari nandu hi hai na..! mujhe kyu wo aaj kuch alag hi dhik rahi hai..!

Alya- sirf tumhe nahi cabir..! hum sab ko bhi..!

she blushes even harder this time..

Arya- see..! our shy Nandu is back again..

she hides her face in manik's chest while hugging..

he too smiles looking at her..

before her cheeks turns into complete red.. he faked an angry glare at everyone..

CAbir- kya..?

MAnik- niche mukthi abhi akhele honge.. chalo na tum sab..

NAvya- ha nandu.. chalo.. niche chalthe hai..

she tried to pull her from manik..

but he tightens his grip on her..

MAnik- i asked you people to go..

Arya- hum sab niche chale jayenge toh tum log yaha kya kaenge.. 

Manik- kuh bhi kare..! tujhe kya..?

Dhruv- guys..! i think buddy no more need our help..

Nandu smiles..

Cabir- ha.. ha.. ab woh humara shakal bhi kyu dekhna chahega..! kyu manik..!

MAnik- so smart ha..

CAbir- i know i'm.. wait.. what..?

NAvya- abhi bhi nahi samjhe kya..! 

Alya- cabir..! manik indirectly asking us to leave..!

Cabir- tujhe toh hum badh me bathayenge..!

saying this they left manan alone..

Manik(still hugging)- we are no more fighting right..?

she nods..

he smiles at her and kisses on her forehead...

she closes her eyes in response..

Nandu- I'm sorry too..!

MAnik- Its okay..!

Nandu- I missed you monster...!

MAnik- your monster also missed his jaan..!

Nandu- never ever leave me again..!

MAnik- never..!

she breaks the hug and kisses on his cheek..

MAnik- bas.. itna hi..!

she moves closer to his lips..

he closes his eyes..

she looks at him eyes closed and kisses on his mole just above his lips..

he opens his eyes..

MAnik- ye cheating hai...!

Nandu- no..!

MAnik- yes..!

Nandu- no..!

Manik- yes..!

NAndu- yes..!

MAnik- No..!

Nandu- i told you... i never cheat..

MAnik- ha ha.. you cheated again..

she smiles at his cute antics..

NAndu- Acha MAnik..! niche chale.. sab log kya sohenge..!

MAnik- i dont care..

NAndu- manik..! mummy papa bhi hai..!

MAnik- meri jaan..! tum bhul chuki ho kya..? they already given us the green signal for our marriage...!

Nandu- hmm.. par..

MAnik- ek minute..! i wanna ask you something..

NAndu- what..?

MAnik- how come you confess before me..?

Nandu- wo.. jab tum gussa hoke chale gaye the na.. tab mujhe realize huwa ki i shouldnt loose you.. aur mujhe kisi aur ladke se bhi nahi milna hai..! thats it.. jab aunty ne puch liya toh maine sab kuch batha diya..!!

Manik- became bold ha..!!

Nandu- anything for my love..

he hugs her again..

Manik- Love you jaan..

Nandu- Love you too manik..!!

MAnik- so agli baar mujhe kuch chahiye hotha toh mein gussa ho jatha hu.. tab mera kaam easily pura ho jayega..! what say..?

she breaks the hug..

NAndu- oh really..? agar tum agli baar gussa kiya toh.. mein tumse sadhi bhi nahi karungi..!

MAnik- arey baba.. mazaak kiya tha..!

NAndu- pakka na..!

MAnik- aur nai toh kya..? mujhe phir se tumhe manane ka mauka nahi chahiye..!

NAndu- hmm.. good monster..!

MAnik- kabhi toh mera naam liya karo yaar..!

NAndu- monster hi cute hai..!

MAnik- your wish..

Nandu- now chalo..

MAnik- ha..

Nandu- wait..

MAnik- ab kya huwa.. yahi pe rukh jathe hai..?

NAndu- cards..? i forgot them..

she rushed to the chair she was sitting before and collected all the cards, flowers, balloon and teddy

Nandu- now lets go..

he wrapped his hand around her shoulder and moved to the dinner section..

Mukthi- NAndu...! patch up ho gaya kya..?

she smiles..

Abhi- congrats bro..

MAnik tightens his grip on her shoulder possessively and smiles..

Sanju- Manik..! Nandu maan gayi kya..?

NAvya- nandu..! dekha..! kitne log pareshaan hai tumhari wajah se..!

Nandu lowered her head and whispered- sorry..!

MAnik- Navya..! chodo na wo sab bathe.. 

Nyonika hugs manan and sanju smiles at them..

Sanju- tum sab ne khana kha liya..?

Alya- ha aunty..! hum sab ka ho gaya hai..! sirf manik nandu nahi khaya hai ab tak..!

Nyo- Nandu..! go and get something for yourselves..

Nandu- ji aunty..!

she moves to the dinner counter and served for both of them in a single plate..

MAnik and Nandu were sitting next to each other.. where she was sitting in front of him and he was wrapping his hand around her neck..

she was eating herself and making him eat too at the same time..

Mukthi- tu bacha hai kya..! khudh nahi kha sakthe..?

MAnik- tum nahi khila rahe ho na..! chup bet..

Abhi- meri behen sweet and soft hai.. isliye itni jaldi maan gayi..!

MAnik- ye tumhe jaldi lag raha hai..!

everyone chuckles..

she feed him more food.. so he stopped talking..

soon the dinner finished..

everyone dispersed to their places..

MURTHY MANSION

Nandu made her way to her room and locked it.. 

when she turned towards her bed.. she found manik was laying on the bed..

Nandu- tum..? tum andhar kasie aaye ho..?

Manik- mein chor thodi na hu.. obviously main door se aaya hu..!

NAndu- agar mom dad ne dhekliya toh..

Manik- yaar nandu..! please stop all this na.. i cant stay away from you any more..!

NAndu- phir kaun chale gaye the akhela chod ke..

Manik- now dont start it again.. come here..

Nandu- wait..! i'll change my clothes and come..

she sat infront of the mirror and removing all her jewellery..

Manik comes to her and was hesitating to hold her waist or not..

she observed this from the mirror view..

she turned towards him and raised her eye brows questioningly..

he nodded as nothing..

she immediately took his hand and wrapped it around her waist..

he smiles at her..

she too smiles back and continues removing her jewellery,..

now he comfortably back hugs her by holding her waist even tighter..

Manik- you know what..? you're looking beautiful today..!

NAndu- thanks..!

MAnik- ye half sarees na tum often pehenthe rehna.. it looks really good on you..!

Nandu- but i cant manage na..

MAnik- koi bath nahi.. aadhath ho jayega..!

NAndu- okay..! now leave me.. i'll change and come..

Manik- do you need my help..? agar chahiye toh..

she pushed him on the bed..

Nandu- no thanks...!!

he smiles and she blushes..

she freshened herself and came back to him..

she laid next to him keeping her head on his chest..

he took her into his embrace and both continued speaking for few hours..

unknowingly they drifted into sleep in each other arms..!!

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