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Jess walked in and stood out of the way, so everyone could help Olivia, who now had a trail of blood behind her from her foot wound. Nothing was said, the people in the beach hut just stared at them, which made both girls feel so uncomfortable. Olivia was ushered to a chair by the boy that let them in, but still nothing was said.

Eventually, the boy who let them in decided to say something.

"I guess you need some help?" he said in a very anxious and apprehensive. "Hi.. I'm Brenton! Australian Mum before you ask about name. I think I can help you with cut on foot. But I need to be quick because...ummm...umm... this beach isn't the place you want to be right now." he explained but in the most awkward and unsure way possible.

Jess who was still leaning against the rustic wall of the villa and had slightly excluded herself from the group, had finally decided to join in. "Why is unsafe to be beach at the moment?" inquired Jess in a restless and afraid way. All the group on the small chairs, who hadn't yet introduced themselves, looked at each other in a rather odd way. Jess shivered in the awkwardness of the glances, she knew that probably wasn't the best question to ask. Silence overcome the stares and everyone looked at each other waiting for any form of conversation to break out.

"I don't think you need to know that." finally answered the only girl sat in the group circle of nursery chairs. "Once Brenton has patched your friend up, I think its time you better get going!" Brenton nodded his head, whilst frantically searching through cupboards to try to find things to bandage Olivia's still bleeding cut. Olivia didn't really know to respond and thought it was a little rude chucking them out when they had only just arrived, but she knew something wasn't quite right and that it was for the best.

"Well I guess as Brenton is still looking we have time to introduce ourselves..." chirped the girl again, but with a lot more sass in her voice. "I'm Brooke, I'm a bitchy little ginger midget, I have boundaries. Don't cross them." She ranted with a sassy smirk on her face. This attitude which had appeared out of nowhere startled the girls a little. "Yeah, so that's me! Don't look so surprised. This is Jonah, otherwise known as Jonesy to us" Brooke announced, whilst pointing at a tall, masculine looking guy sitting rather strangly on one of the small chairs. Ol Jonah had medium length blonde hair which was slightly curly, bright green eyes and a very slight crooked nose. His body shape suggested he was a rugby player, Olivia thought this might be why his nose was like that. A white Supreme t-shirt loosly clung to his chest; covering his legs were a pair of black swimming trunks. Both girls thought this was very confusing, it was definitley to cold to go swimming, but they just assume he braved the cold and ignored it. Next Brooke pointed to another boy with blonde hair, but his hair was much shorter than Jonah's and his build was a lot skinner. His mouth shuddered in the silence that followed, it was obvious he wanted to say something, but he didn't.

"A Ha! I've the old first aid kit, knew we had it somewhere" Shouted Brenton in a proud manner, whilst jumping from the chair he was procariously standing on. In his hand was a little green bag with stains on and a giant red cross on the front. The colour had clearly faded and the material had fraid. The apperance of the bag didn't give Olivia the most confidence, of fixing her foot. Brenton spilled the kit's contents on the sandy wooden floor, scissors flung across the floor, rolls of bandage unraveled themself whilst rolling across the floor, plasters flew everywhere. "Geez!" Olivia thought to herself, now this made her really worried, she was stuck in weird feeling place, with mysterious people and an extremely painful foot, it really wasn't her day.

Scampering everywhere, Brenton picked up everything and attempted to shove the things back into the dirty old bag. Olivia slowly edged towards an empty chair and gently sat down, whincing in pain she said "Brenton, Brenton...Please say you've found something subitable to help, I swear I'm going to bleed out and die any second!" Brenton smiled to himself and grabbed some bandages and a pair of scissors of the floor. "Hey, lets face your not going to die!" he chuckled. He lifted the wounded foot up used a alcohol wipe to wipe the blood away. Underneath the tissue and dried blood was a 2cm cut, brenton cleaned up and began wrapping the bandage around Olivia's foot and ankle. Jess had nothing else to do, so rather than awkwardly staring at the medical fiasco, she decided to put all their belongings into her bag so they were ready to go. Into a plasticy material superdry bag, she put their phones, purses, tissues and some more bandages, which had rolled to her feet during Brenton flap. By the time Jess had packed up, Olivia was finished and ready to go. "Thank you ever so much guys!" Olivia thanked everyone, as the girls headed for the wooden beach hut door. "Bye guys!" Jess grabbed the door handle and began to open the door, but all of a sudden there was a giant

BANNGGGG!!!

"What the hell was that!" Jess shouted in terror, whilst slaming the door closed and turning to the group still sat on chairs for answer. Sirens were going, people were shouting, both girls were absoutley terrified. Brooke looked at Brenton with wide eyes and whisper something that the girls couldn't hear. Everyone jumped up and started to gather belongings and clear up.

"We have to go now!" Shouted Brenton in quite a calm manner to the girls.

"What the hell is happening, someone please explain!" Olivia shrieked, whilst tears ran flew down her rosy red cheeks. "Where are we going?"

"No time for questions guys, stay calm and just follow me, Oh! and by the way you guys gotta be good at swimming or you may struggle to escape!" Brenton exclaimed with a mix of terror and a sort of cheeky grin on his face.

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