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Manik, Nandini, and Dadi reached Mahlotra's Mansion. Dadi remained silent throughout the journey.

Nyonika said, "Oh, you all arrived so quickly. I thought it would take you more time."

No one replied; they all stood there in silence.

Ayaan asked, "What happened, Manik? Nyonika is asking something, right?"

Dadi replied, "What are you asking her? Ask her why I was humiliated there because of your daughter-in-law."

Manik said, "Dadi, do you still think Nandini was at fault?"

Nandini was silently crying without uttering a word.

Dadi shouted, "Yes, what else, Mannu? Look, today you're raising your voice because of her."

Manik said, "Dadi, I am absolutely right. Nandini did nothing wrong. Did you not hear what your so-called friends were saying about her? You should have taken a stand before I or Nandini said anything."

Dadi shouted and cried, "Now, this day was left, my grandson is shouting at me."

Ayaan approached his mother and said, "Maa, please calm down. Nyonika, bring some water and let her rest. What happened there?"

Nyonika said, "Maa, here is some water for you. Now, Manik, tell us what happened there. Maa is crying, and Nandini too."

Manik explained everything to them. "Now, what fault did Nandini have? Whenever someone questions her character, she doesn't even respond."

Nyonika said, "No, she did the right thing. My Nandu did the right thing." She went towards Nandini and hugged her. "Why are you crying, dear? You did nothing wrong. You stood up for yourself."

Ayaan added, "Maa, Nandini did the right thing. She answered them, so why are you so angry?"

Dadi said, "I don't care about what she said. But every time we go to someone's house or attend a party, they all ask the same question: when will the daughter-in-law give good news? It has been five years since her marriage, and none of my friends' grandchildren have given us good news. I wonder when I will see that day. Will I ever get this happiness in my lifetime, or will I have to wait until the afterlife?" (crying)

Dadi continued, "And Mannu, what did you they say wrong? It has been five years since your marriage... There will always be talks. If you want to put an end to all this, then give me good news, otherwise Ayaan, leave the me to ashram,I can't stay here with all these taunts." She then left for her room.

Ayaan said, "I have never said anything about this matter, but Maa is not entirely wrong. She also desires what she sees in her friends, holding their grandchildren in their hands. That's why she says all these things. However, her heart is pure. Now, you both understand." He also went to his room.

Nyonika approached Nandini and said, "Nandu, don't take Mother's words to heart. She is elder than us, and you know she is not entirely wrong. But don't worry, tomorrow let's go and get a check-up done with the doctor."

Manik asked, "Mom, what are you saying?"

Nyonika replied, "I am just suggesting that we get a check-up done. It won't hurt to find out if there is any problem. If there is, we will know the cure."

Nandini agreed, "Yes, Maa, you are right. We will definitely go to the doctor tomorrow."

Nyonika kissed Nandini's forehead and left. Manik and Nandini also went to their room.

Manan room

Manik asked, "Nandini, are you sure about what you said earlier?"

Nandini replied, "Yes, Manik, I'm sure. We've been trying, but it's not happening. So consulting a doctor won't be a big deal."

Manik smiled and kissed her forehead, saying, "All is fine. Why these tears? You can tell me anything, my love."

Nandini hugged him tightly and started crying. Manik consoled her.

Manik said, "Bachha, you said they are no one, so why are their words affecting you?"

Nandini responded, "Manik, I'm not crying because of them or what they said. It doesn't matter to me."

Manik asked, "Then what happened?"

Nandini explained, "Manik, when I held the baby in my hands, it was such a blissful feeling. And the way the baby stopped crying when embraced by their mother... I also want to experience all of that. Manik, why isn't it happening for us? I want to become a mother."

Manik comforted her, saying, "Shhh, I know. I felt the same way when I held the baby. The way Rajveer described his feelings... But you know what? I have a feeling that everything will be fine."

Nandini asked, "Do you really think so?"

Manik assured her, "Yes, bachha, I truly believe it. We will go to the doctor tomorrow, and you'll see, everything will be good."

Nandini replied, "Yes."

Manik said, "Okay, now stop crying. Get changed. I have something for you."

Nandini excitedly asked, "What is it, Mani? Show me."

Manik teased, "Oh, it's a surprise. First, get changed, and then I'll show you."

Nandini hurriedly ran towards the bedroom to change, while Manik himself got changed near the balcony.

Nandini came out wearing a cute night suit and ran towards Manik, who was standing at the balcony.

Nandini (excitedly) - Mani, see I've changed. Now, tell me what you got for me.

Manik - Oh ho, so much excitement for a surprise. (Teasingly) Sometimes, get excited just by seeing your husband too.

Nandini - Mani... Please.

Manik - Okay, close your eyes.

Nandini closes her eyes as Manik places a small box in her hand and tells her to open her eyes.

Nandini - What's inside this?

Manik - Open it and see for yourself.

Nandini opens the box and finds a beautiful star-shaped earring. She exclaims, "Manik, it's so pretty! I love it. Thank you so much! And the star... oh, I love it. It's so beautiful."

Manik - Not more than you, my jaan.

Nandini - Thank you.

Manik - If you want to thank me, then thank me properly. What is that pheeka pheeka thank you?

Nandini - What do you want, Mani? blushingly

Manik - You know what I want.

Nandini understood what he was saying, so she put the box aside and smiled. She stood on her toes to reach his height and kissed his cheek.

Manik (sexily) - Bas, intna sa hi? I want more, you know what I'm saying.

Nandini - Okay, close your eyes.

Manik - I am closing, but don't cheat or else I won't let you go easily.

Nandini - giggles Close them properly, baba.

Manik closes her eyes while nandini tiptoed and kisses his mole above his lips and gives a long kiss on his mole as she was leaving but manik grabs her from waist and fuses his lips with her and started to kisss her passinotely and nandini was taking equal participation both were chewing each other lips after short of breadth both stops

Both were looking each other eyes passionately seeing so much passion IN MANIK eyes  nandini just lower her eyes..... while manik again takes her lips for soulful kiss this time he was playing with her tounge after a while he stops and moves to her neck and give her a hickey and nandini moans while Manik gives wet kisses all over her neck and takes her to the bed

Manik - Nandini I need u

Nandini  - U dont have to ask I m all urs

And than that  night witnesses one more passionate night of them with full of moans and groans.

Morning 6:00

Nandini woke up at her usual time and saw that they were both sleeping cuddled up, devoid of clothes. She blushed, remembering the night. After watching Manik for a while, she kissed his forehead and then his eyes, followed by his cheek. Her eyes went to his mole, which she loved so much. She kissed his mole above his lips and gave a love bite to his neck, smiling as she knew Manik would definitely tease her now.

She got up from bed, covering Manik properly with the blanket, and went to the washroom for freshening up. She got herself ready, wearing a saree, putting on vermillion, and wearing her mangalsutra. She then went down to the kitchen to help Nyonika. As she was going to Dadi's room, she heard Manik shouting for her.

Nyonika - Tu ja dekh Manik ko kya chahiye. Main jaa ke Maaji ko medicine de aati hoon.

Nandini - Oh, okay.

Nandini entered their room and asked, "Manik, why are you shouting?"

Manik - Tum apne sote hue pati ka fayda uthati ho.

Nandini - What, Manik? What are you saying?

Manik showed her the love bite that Nandini had given him while he was asleep.

Nandini blushed and said, "Manik..."

Manik interrupted her and grabbed her waist, saying, "This is how you take advantage of your sleeping husband."

Nandini blushed even more.

Manik, in a seductive tone, continued, "You should have given me all this when I was awake, not when I'm asleep. Now, give it to me."

Nandini widened her eyes and asked, "Do you seriously want a love bite, Manik?"

Manik replied, "No, baby, I want a love bite like this."

Nandini pleaded, "Manik, please..."

Manik hugged her tightly and said, "Oh, my baby, you're so cute. I love you so much, my darling."

Nandini responded cutely, "I love you too, Mani."

Precap - Meeting to doctor and a bad news

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