Deewane Do
Do listen to the song... It touched my heart, batana aapke bhi dil ko chua kya??
Chapter bada hai so... no proof-read!
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*Shiva was sitting under the moon and watch stars, on the terrace. Looking at the sky, Shiva smiles. A boy comes running towards Shiva and hugs him*
Deewane do
Boy: Pappa, mujhe school se project mila hai! Aur usme aapki help chahiye...
Shiva: Kya bata??
Rudra: Mujhe aapke 'the most memorable moments with me' ke bare mai likhna hai! Will you help?
Shiva: Haa, beith batata hu... Jab tu das mahine ka tha, aur mujhe pehle baar papa bolo tha...!
Deewane do
*Flashback*
Shiva: Baby please na papa ko tang mat karo, mujhe dukan bhi jaana hai jaldi se dhudu peelo... Rudra, aayo papa ke paas aaja mera baby!!
Baby Rudra: *Gesturing his hand as bye and shaking his head in negetive* dhu no...
Shiva: Thik hai, toh mai jaraha hu... Tume bhook lagega toh bhabhi ko bol dena... Bye!! *Disappointed*
Rudra: *Runs towards Shiva, clinging to his trousers* Paaaa...Paa, no bhap... Godiii *Smiles widely looking towards Shiva upward, gesturing to pick him up*
Shiva: Baby aapne papa bola... *Elated by Rudra's words, Shiva picks him up and twirls all around in the angan*
Rudra: *Laughs opening his mouth, oshowing his tiny front teeth and a soft tiny tongue* Paaaa...paa.
Rishitha: *Comes running, listening to the commotion* Kya hua, dono baap bete itne khush kyu hai??
Shiva: Papa bola issne mujhe... Bhabhi can you imagine!!
*Flashback ends*
Rudra: Hahaha, mai toh bohot smart tha chote mai... Proud of myself!! *Taps his own shoulder*
Shiva: Beta kiska hai!! *Proudly*
Ek trafa pyaar kare
Rudra: Raavi ka! Hehehe, Kya pappa?!!! Hahaha... Oh sorry mai rule bhul gya tha, please gussa mat hona it was just a slip of tongue!
Shiva: Hmm... Tu ja aur apna project finish kar, kal school bhi toh Jana hai na.
Rudra: *Heads towards the staircase* Bye papa good night, jaldi so jana!
Deewane do
Shiva: *Lies down on the cot he was sitting* Sacchi Rudra bohot smart hai! Hai naa Raavi...? *A tear rolls down from the side of his eyes*
Raavi: Haa toh, beta hai wo mera. Aur tu bhi toh itni mehnat kar raha hai uss ek accha insaan banane Mai!
Mai raat naa jaane du
Tum neend naa aane do
Shiva: *Turns to her side, but doesn't find anyone* Phir se chali gayi!! *Smiles sadly*
*Flashback*
In morning...
Shiva: *Screams from their room* Raavi mera shirt kidar rak diya hai? Jaldi de dukan jaane ko late ho raha hai...
Dhara: *Coming into the kitchen* Jaa raavi tu dekhle uss, mai idhar ka kaam sambhalti hu, jaa...
Raavi: *Quickly washes her hand and rushes towards the room* Thank you Dhara di!!
Shiva: *Sees raavi entering the room* Tu mere kapde ult palt kyu karti hai hamesha?
Ek trafa pyaar kare
Milkar deewane do
Raavi: *Instantly turns her back to Shiva, as he was not wearing anything, instead only in a towel warpped around his waist* Shiva kapde sab udar hi aapni jagah par, kam se kam vest aur trousers toh pehan leta!!
Shiva: Tu mujhe mat sikha, jaldi se kapde de, aur towel pehna hai... Nanga nahi hu!! *Turns her from her upper arm towards himself* Ab jaldi kar!!
Raavi: Hmm, deti hu hatt.
*Raavi leaves giving the dress, and goes back to the kitchen*
Shiva: Bhabhi mai chalta hu... *Screams from the anagan and rushes out*
In afternoon...
*In call*
Raavi: Hello, bol!
Shiva: Sun chipkali, tujhe acche se tyaar hona hai... Aaj shaam ko hum mere ek dost ki shaadi mai ja rahe hai!
Raavi: Hmm... Aur baki log pariwaar ke?
Shiva: Khali tu aur mai! Wo mera dost unn sab ko janta nahi hai aur same hai unlogo ke saath bhi!
Raavi: Mai bhi toh nahi jaanti hu!! Toh mai kyu chalu??
Shiva: Ayee dobi, tu saath nahi chalegi toh kya mai disha ko bhulau??
Raavi: Par hamara toh divorce hogya hai na!?
Kya duniya ki
Baato ka yeh
Baate jaane do
Shiva: *thinks* tabhi toh tum mere naam ka sindoor laga rahi ho naa!
Raavi: Hello?!! Tu hai bhootnath?
Shiva: Haa, Aree par mere dosto ko nahi pata hai naa, tu bas tyaar rehna!
Raavi: Thik hai! Chal Mai rakhti...
Shiva: Aur ek baat, wo Christian wedding hai toh uss hisab ke Kapde...
Raavi: Hai, tu tension mat le. Bas time se ghar aajana...
Shiva: Hmm, chal bye!
*Call ends*
In night. At the wedding venue...
Mai raat naa jaane du
Tum neend naa aane do
*Shiva and Raavi wishes the couple, and goes and sit on the circular table provide to all the couple's*
*Shiva leaves to spend some time with his friends after he introduces Raavi as his wife*
Raavi: Bohot pyaas lag rahi hai kya karu?? *Looks at the waiter coming towards her direction* Bhaiya ruko! Kya mai ek glass le sakti hu??
Waiter: Haa, lelijiye...
*On the other side, Shiva's friends forced him to have some drinks with them as it was the wedding of their school friends, both of them were dating each other since 10th std and these boys had helped them in shipping the love birds together*
*The wedding got over and all headed towards the home. Shiva and Raavi to went home by auto, since Shiva was drunk and not in the condition to drive*
Tera chehara dil mai thehara
Kuch bhi nahi teri aakh se gehra
*Both of the entered through the window as they did not want to distribute anyone's sleep*
(Drunken dialogues)
Shiva: Ayee chip...kali, theeekk see... nahi tohh tera muh bigar jayegaa...
Raavi: Shivaa, tu sahii se pakar naa... Iss gown mai tu expect karta hai ki mai khidki se aau wo bhi heels mai?? Bandar!
Shiva: Acchaa... tu ruk! *He jumps inside the window, pulls Raavi by her waist, pick her in bridal style and takes her inside their room*
Neend sookhn ki so jana tum
Mai rakh luga raat pe pehara
In their room...
Raavi: Shiva kya kar raha hai! Koi dekh lega niche uthar mujhe!!
Shiva: Hmm...
Raavi: Mai change kar ke aati hu!! Tu idhar karega toh karle...
*Shiva holds Raavi wrist and pulls her towards himself, caressing her cheeks, and her lips he place a peek on her forehead*
Raavi: Shi... Shiva... tu...tu yeh kyaa...
*Shiva places his finger on her lip, indicating not to speck now*
Rakne tere sar aane
Mujhe chand le aane do
Shiva: *Both look straight into eachother's eye, having an eyelock* Raaviii tu aaj bohot acchi lag rahi hai!!! *Huskily* Ekdam sexy...
(Shiva was wearing a black colour three piece suit and Raavi was wearing a black colour slim fit gown... Dono twining kar rahe the... So mujhe dress ke naam jayade nahi pata toh manage kar lo issi mai)
Raavi: *blushing* Shiva... Tu... Tu abhi hosh Mai nahi...
*Raavi couldn't finish because her lips were captured by Shiva's, they shared a cute lip peck*
Mai raat naa jaane du
Tum neend naa aane do
Shiva: Bohot acchi lag rahi thi tu, ekdam pari jesi!
Raavi: Ab Somnath ki sabse sundar ladki jo hu... Tu bhi aaj bohot handsome lag raha tha! *Blushes, looking down* Tu bhi Somnath ka sabse hot ladka...
Shiva: *Makes raavi look towards his eyes* Ab bol...
Raavi: *cutely confused* Kya??
Shiva: *pulls her towards himself by her waist* Kon hai hot?
Raavi: *thinking* nashe mai bhi tease kar raha hai yeh gadhera!!
Shiva: *Smirks* Kitneee acchiii... Jodii banaya hai Somnath ne! Tum Somnath ki sab se sundarr, *moves near her ear* nahiii sabse sexy ladki aur maaiiii... Sabse handsome, nahi... Tune kya bola? Haa... Sabse hot ladka... Kyu??!!!
Raavi: *Blushes and wiggle in his hold to get out* Shiva dekh please janede koi aajayega...
Ek trafa pyaar kare
Milkar deewane do
Shiva: koi nahi aayega gadheri, raat ka wakt hai aur darwaza bhi band hai!
*Raavi keeps wiggling, because of which both losses balance and fall on the bed*
*Shiva's glaze with intense desire and love makes raavi shy, they share an passionate liplock... And slowly the desire takes over them and they spend the night making love... And slowly the two bodies united into one soul*
Theher ke chal tu raat jara se
Kehni hai dil ko baat juba ki
Next morning...
*As Shiva woke up he was shocked to see Raavi sleeping cuddling him with his shirt on her, and his one hand on her waist, other arm Below her neck instead of a pillow. She had he one arm on his chest and was sleeping with her head in his crook of neck*
Shiva: *thinking* Yeh... Yeh mai ne kya kar diya... Yeh nahi hona chahiye tha!! *Shiva closes his eyes as soon as he sense her waking*
Raavi: *Looking at their position she blushes, thinking* Finally Shiva tu maan ya na maan par kal ki raat ne yeh to bata diya ki tu mujhse kitana pyaar karta hai, nashe ki halat mai bhi tujhse meri aankhon mai aansu bardasht nahi hote... *Blushes remembering previous night they shared. Slowly she untangled herself and ran to washroom*
Ishq se hum wakif hi kaha the
Teri sohabt mai jana ki
Shiva: Jaldi se tyaar ho kar dukhan chal jata hu... Pata nahi yeh kya sochegi mere baare mai!
*Raavi comes to the kitchen to prepare breakfast after getting ready*
Raavi: Dhara di, aapne Shiva ko dekha kya? *While preparing tea for everyone*
Dhara: Haa, wo toh dukhan gya!! Tujhe nahi bataya??
Raavi: Nahi! Accha mai chai bahar le kar jaati hu! *Sadly*
Dhara: Thik che...
*This ignoring session went on for about a month, in the starting Shiva would just ran away from Raavi, then came Raavi's semester exam which made her extremely busy along with household chores*
About a month later on one fine day...
*Today was Raavi's last exam... All her subjects went well. She had decided to talk to Shiva face to face and clear his misunderstanding, because the way he was behaving made clear that he was guilt ridden for that blissful night*
*After extreme efforts Raavi had Shiva sitting in front of him in their room*
Raavi: Shiva kya hua hai tujhe? Kyu ignore kar raha hai?
Shiva: Dekh... Mai tujhe kuch safai nahi de pauga... Bas sorry bol sakta hu!
Raavi: Par kyu? *Confused*
Shiva: I... I am... Sorry Raavi...
Raavi: Tu... Tune mujhe, i mean the Shiva Pandya ne Raavi Shiva Pandya ko sorry bola??!!!!
Shiva: Ab Raavi Narayan hai tu... Aur haa sorry bola kyu ki mere kand ke liye sorry bhi bohot chota shabd hai... *Embarrassed*
Bade pyaare lagte hai
Saath baegane do
Raavi: Hmm... *Sadly... She suddenly gets up and run to the washroom*
Shiva: Tu thik toh hai naa, Raavi? *Standing beside her in the washroom, caressing her back while she throw out all that she ate*
Raavi: *After cleaning the mess, haa mai thik hu* Chal beithe hai!
Dhara: *Screams from the anagan* Sabhi log aajao khana tyaar hai!
Raavi: Dhara di bula rahi hai... Accha Shiva meri baat sun bhina kaate tu... please mujhe ignore mat kar bura lagta hai, mujhe uss raat ka koi guilt nahi hai naahi tujhe hona chahiye!!
Shiva: Wo jo bhi hua, wo nahi hona chahiye tha Raavi... Wo sab pati patni ke beech... I am sorry to take away your... Your vri... Virginity. Mai... Mai maafi mangta hu... *With tears brimming his eyes*
Raavi: Aaj bol diya, ab mat bolna tu sirf aur sirf mera hai aur mai...
Dhara: Bula rahi hu kab se tum dono ko sunai nahi de raha chalo jaldi! *Standing at their room's window, she yells*
Raavi: Ji Dhara di *wiping Shiva's tears* chal Shiva khana kha lete hai...
*Everyone eats their food and proceed to sleep, Shiva again ignores Raavi and sleep in Suman's room*
After 3 day...
*In a hospital*
Raavi: Doctor sab thik toh hai naa, mai jo bhi khati hu sab bahar aajata hai... Kahi koi serious problem...
Doctor: Nahi nahi Raavi Ji, ulta ye toh khushi ki baat hai... Congratulations!! Aap maa bane wali hai. You are pregnant!!
Raavi: Sachi doctor!! Thank you... Itne aachi news di haina aapne ki mai kya batau... Finally mai bhi maa banugi!! Jaldi se Shiva ko batati hu... Doctor I will take my leave.
Doctor: Ya sure, take care...
In the evening...
Raavi: Ghar par nahi, wese bhi ghar mai yeh mujhse baat kaha karta hai. Shiva ko kahi bahar bulati hu, haa park aacha rahega... Thore romantic vibes bhi aayege, Haye!!
*Inbox message*
Raavi: Shiva, kuch bohot important batana hai jaldi se store ke piche Wale garden mai mil... Mai wait kar rahi hu
Mai raat naa jaane du
Tum neend naa aane do
Shiva: Ab kya pak raha hai iske dimag mai!! Gombi mai thore der mai aaya... *Shiva rushes out on his bike to the given location*
Raavi: Kitna time leta hai tu, wo bhi gaadi se aane mai!!
Shiva: Ayee gadheri, bike hai helicopter nahi jo udra kar lau... Tu baat itne jaldi mai bulaya koi??
Raavi: Tu dil tham kar beith kyuki Mai tujhe kise se milwana chahti hu!!
Shiva: Kis se? *An unknown fear surrounded him*
Raavi: Wait kar Shiva! *She reaches her hand bag and takes out a file*
Shiva: *Assuming it to be a guys photo, he get angry* Tu pagal hai, mujhe yaha ye dekhane ke liye lai hai??
Raavi: *Ignoring him totally, hand him the file* yeh le Mr. Pandya aur padh!
Shiva: *confused, he opens the file nad the first thing his eyes lands on was her name* Ms. Raavi Narayan!? *Softly, his heart hurts reading the name*
Raavi: Shiva tu naam chor aur kaam ki chiz padhr... Wo jo highlighted hai!!
Shiva: *He reads the highlighted part and his eyes goes wide* Tu... Tu...
Raavi: Kya tu tu kar raha hai? *Irritated* next page ka sonography scan dekh!! *Excitedly*
Shiva: *He turns the page and takes a long breath to clam himself* Tu pregnant hai??!!
Raavi: *nods happily and hugs him* Shiva hum parents bane wale hai!!
Shiva: *the file slips from his hand and he moves a step back, breaking the hug* Raavi yeh nahi ho sakta hai... Hum shaadi shudha nahi hai, yeh sahi nahi hai!!
Raavi: *Shocked* yeh tu kya bol raha hai Shiva!! Tu aur mai... Hum dono jante hai ki yeh tera khoon hai hum pregnant hai parents bane wale hai!! *Coolly* aur rahi baat shaadi ki toh phir se kr lege... Mai toh yeh shaadi ko kabhi toota manti hi nahi thi!
Shiva: Par log...
Raavi: Dekh Shiva log kya bolte hai isse mujhe koi fark nahi parta hai... Mai sirf teri aur tu sirf mera hai, aur ab yeh baccha hamara hai!!
Shiva: Hmm... *Again hugs her back tightly* I am sorry Raavi uss raat ke...
Raavi: Please Shiva aab baas bhi kar kitne baar bola hai ki mai uss raat se bohot khush hu nahi toh kya aaj mujhe yeh khushi milti? Kya aaj mai sahi maino mai teri hoti? Kya aaj mai puri hoti? Mai nahi chahti hu ki tu phaltu ka guilt paal kyuki aab teri godh mai tera bacch hoga jese tujhe paal naa hoga... *Keeping his palm on her tummy, and smiling brightly towards him*
Shiva: i love you Raavvviii... *Sobs slightly* i really love you, Thank you for his beautiful gift!!
Raavi: Chal iss khushi ko manate hai, aaj mere taraf se ice cream party! *Joyfully*
Shiva: Tu kyu ruk mai lata hu, tu aaram kar! Hmm...??
Raavi: Thik hai jaa... Mai idher hi hu!!
*Shiva goes get icecream from the vendor opposite the road side, mean while Raavi waited... She saw a small boy running towards the icecream vendor without looking for the vehicles. All of a sudden a truck came... Raavi ran to save the boy but instead got hit*
Shiva: *Hearing the noise he turns back*
Raaaaavvvviiii....!!!! *The icecream he was holding fell down and he ran to her... Holding her head on his lap* Raavvviii... Raavii uth naa, dekh yesa majak maat kar uth??!!! Koi... Koi please... Please ambulance ko bulao!!?
After 7 hours of surgery...
Doctor: These 24 hrs are going to be critical!! Please pray and be prepared...
Gombi: Thank you doctor... Meri bacchi ki jaan bachane ke liye!!!
Doctor: Wo hamara farz tha, abhi kuch sure nahi hai so I would say... Please hope for the best but be prepared for the worst!! I will take my leave.
After three months...
Shiva: Pata hai Raavi agar uss din pata hata ki tera mere saath aakhari baate hogi, aakhari saath hoga toh sayad mai tujhe kabhi ignore nhi karta, naahi tujhe wese raaste par chor kar icecream kharidne jara, toh aaj tu yaha inn badi badi machines ke sahare mere baache ko paal nhi rahi hoti... Tu aaj pure char mahine pregnant hogyi *holds her hand and place it on her small baby bump* Tujhe pata hai mai teri baate bohot miss karta hu, par... *Wipes his tears and stands up as the doctors enter to check her*
Doctor: Mr. Pandya hame aapse kuch jaruri baat karni hai toh aap cabin mai aajayege!
Shiva: ji, chaliye...
Ek trafa pyaar kare
Milkar deewane do
Doctor: Hamne puri koshish ki hai par Mrs. Pandya ki brain injury serious thi jiske wajah se woh coma mai chali gyi but it's a miracle ki unki condition deteriorate nahi kar rahi hai, but she won't wake up again! So aapka decision jaana tha ki do you want the baby ya... *Shiva looks shockingly at the doctor* Dekhiye mai ye nahi kehra ki bacche ko maar dejiye par aab raavi ke uthne ke chances nahi hai aur aagar baccha chahiye toh atleast char mahine aaye pregnancy continue karni hogi but as the development occurs aapka hospital bill bhi badta jayega, because raavi ko sare nutrients through medicine hi diya jaraha hai taaki baby healthy rahe... *Shiva starts getting tensed* Mai aapka family doctor hone ke naate aapko suggest kar raha hu! Baaki aapki marzi... Aap family se discuss kar ke agle do din mai baata dijiyega...
At pandya niwas...
Suman: Shiva tu chinta mat kar hum paiso ka intezaam kardege, ye baccha girane ki jarurat nhi hai! Yeh tera khoon hai...
Dhara: Shiva yeh teri aur raavi ki aakhiri nishani hai hum sab milkar isse iss duniya mai layege aur iska khayal rakhe!
Gombi: Haa Shiva, paiso ki tension tu maat le...
Dev: Haa, hum sab madat karege tera, akhir raavi hamara bhi parivaar hai, issi parivaar ka hissa hai!!
Rishitha: Maine company mai Raavi ke naam ka health insurance apply Kiya hai, agar approve hogya toh help hojayegi, tu stress mat le Shiva...
Krish: *Clamly* Haa bhai... Aur agar kam pade toh mere hisse ki jaameen hai naa... Tum sab ko jarurat hogi aapne jaameen ki... Dhara bhabhi ko Tara ka future aur Rishita bhabhi ko Rishab ke future ke liye, tujhe aapna hissa rakhna hoga aanewale baby ke liye lekin mujhe koi jarurat nahi hai toh tu le sakta hai!! *Sternly* Meri shaadi ko time hai, tab tak hamara financial condition bhi thik ho jayega aur toh aur mai aapni bestie ke liye itna toh kar hi sakta hu...
*Shiva was sobbing continuously, thanked everyone for their support and headed to the hospital to inform the doctor to continue with the pregnancy*
After four months...
*Today Raavi gave birth to a cute little baby boy, a carbon copy of herself for shiva*
Doctor: Firstly, congratulations Mr. Pandya, it's a boy!
Shiva: *having happy tears in his eyes* thank you doctor... Thank you so much!! *Hugs gombi* Gombi aap bade papa ban gye!! Bhabhi... *Hugs her and crys*
Dhara: Tujhe bhi congratulations naye baby ke papa!! *Strokes his head softly*
Shiva: *breaks the hug and turn towards the doctor* Doctor raavi kaisi hai??
Doctor: i am sorry Shiva, but raavi left us as soon as the procedure was over...
Shiva: *stumbles backwards and sits on the floor, crying heavily* Raaviii... Tune sach mai mujhe chor diya?? Raaavvvvvvvviiiiiiiiii... Please mujhe maat chor wapas aaja mere paas... Hamare baache ke liye... Please mat Jaa
Raavi: comeon Shiva, tu chattan pandya hai... Itna kyu ro Raha hai!! Hamare baby ke liye hi eight months uss bed par lete lete nikale hai maine!!
*Hearing her voice Shiva stops crying and looks up to see her, she gives a bright smile and walks into the room, Shiva to gets up wipes his tears and enters the room*
*There was lying a lifeless Raavi covered with the sheet, as he removed the sheet he witnessed a pale Raavi fully covered in sweat*
Shiva: Toh aakhir mai tujhe bachpan se buri tarah treat karne ki saza de hi diya tune mujhe *smiles sadly* Ab mai aakhela hu, tu hamesha kehati thi na ki mai tujhe kabhi na choru, par tera kya?? Tune toh chor diya mujhe ek nanhi si jaan ke saath jise aabhi aapne maa ki jarurat sabse jayada hai... Mera chor iss baache ka hi soch leti... *Tears flow from his eyes*
Deewane do
Raavi: Nahi chora hai tujhe, na kabhi chorugi. Koi saza nahi mili hai tujhe. *Hugs him and pats his back to calm him down* Jaha mai jaa rahi hu naa waha se hamesha tumara aur hamare baby ka dhyan rakhigi... Baas... Tu uss kabhi ye mahsus mat hone dena ki isaki mummy uske saath nahi hai! *breaks the hug and forward her hand looking straight in his eyes* Promise kar mujhe ki tu mere baby ka mamma aur papa dono ban kar dekhayega!! Hmm??
Shiva: *keeps his hand on her's* Mai puri koshish karunga... Par... *Someone knocks the door, as Shiva turns raavi disappear into this air*
*Flashback ends*
Deewane do
Shiva: Ab toh aadat hogyi hai... Tere yaado ke saath rehane ki... Yeh jo rules the wo toh baas rudra ke liye banaye the. *Looking into the sky* pata hai raavi wo din jab maine iss ghar mai tera naam lene se mana kiya tha! Rudra ke liye... *Pointing towards his heart* yaha dard mehasus hua tha, par tere alawa koi nahi tha mera tere baad jo mera dard samjhta...
*Flashback*
Three years after raavi's death...
Shiva: Bhabhi aap please maa se baat kariye naa, mujhe nahi karni hai disha se shaadi!! Please bhabhi, mai Raavi ki jagah kisi ko nahi de sakta... *Cries keeping his head on Dhara's lap*
Rudra: Papa, *tensed* aap ro rahe ho? Kisi ne daata kya? Bata mujhe! Rudra bhi usse daatega!!
Shiva: *stretch his arm, and rudra rans to his father's embrace* nahi baby wo na baas papa ko aapki mumma ki yaad aagyi!!
Rudra: Aapko pata hai mumma mere dreams mai hamesha aati mai par mere paas nahi khelti, mere saath school bhi nahi aati... *Gets teary*
After a few days...
Shiva: Maa, naa mai koi dusri shaadi karuga, na hi aaj se koi bhi raavi ke baare mai bolega iss ghar mai, atleast Rudra ke presence mai ekdam nahi!!
Krish: Yesa kya hua hai jo tu itna gussa hai??
Shiva: Aaj rudra ke school mai meeting thi uski mummy nahi gyi isliye... *Broken* Uske dost uski ragging kar rahe the aur upar se disha ne uske jakham par namk dhaldiyan yeh kehkar ki vo uski mummy banane wali hai! *Tear escapes his eyes* mai nahi chahta hu ki usse raavi ki baar baar na hone ka gham ho, uski Kami mehasus ho toh please maa...
*Flashback ends*
Ek trafa pyaar kare
Shiva: Maine puri koshish ki hai rudra ko tere kami mehasus na ho par mujhe pata hai jab maa ya baap mai se koi ek naa ho toh uski kaami jindegi baar khalti hai... *Smiles tearfully* Raavi tere baad bhi rudra ko do do maa ka pyaar mil raha hai, bhabhiyon ne koi kaami nahi chori aur keerti ki toh baat hi chor do, ek essi dost mili hai rudra ko ussmai ki tera beta jab aapne baap se ruthta hai aapni dadi ya kisi ke pas na ja kar teri devrani ke paas baag jata hai, janta kai ki keerti ke paas rahega toh mai kuch bol nahi paunga naa... Khair beta bhi toh nautanki mas ka hai toh kuch ghun toh milenge hi naa *smiles*
Raavi: Haww Shiva... Tu kitna bura hai, badmashi kare toh mera beta nahi toh Tera?? Yeh toh galat hai...
Deewane do
Shiva: Accha ji...
*Similarly Shiva continues talking to raavi imaging her and eventually fall asleep on the terrace*
~The End~
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