Opinions are much needed for this limerick. There is a bit of a dispute about which one to put in the self-published copy. Please pick your favorite of the two or give your thoughts below. 

Version 1:

Everyone he encountered made him bored.

Only his own skills, he adored.

Until she came along

Instantly proved him wrong.

She knew how to grip a sword.

Version 2:

The blade was all he adored

His skills unparalleled with a sword

Then she came along,

With a melodious song.

Which drove him quite out of his gourd.