my first book might sound realy bad to you but the truth is story 1 Amy is an edited version of my Y5 writing assessment ( 2Yrs ago.)

For my assessment I had wrote up to when she found the files but I wrote down what it said.

in this version all of ???'s POV was added and all about Ben dying.

I hoped you enjoyed it

Setting
for our assessment our teacher was
'very' helpful

up on the board was a picture

somewhere in India some houses on one side a road and then a massive building to the right.

she whent up to the front and said
"here's your source go write a story"

a bit harsh don't u think...

Anyway pls comment if u have any ideas for storys as I have no idea what to do next this was my only idea

pls don't private message me ideas if u want them as a book as I cannot private message so will not be able to reply

hope you enjoyed

-boi (my way of saying bye)
bethie