You guys wanted this to become a real story so here ya go : ) also jacks (31 year old ) brothers name in this story will be Garret (just a name off the top of my head :p).

Garret

'I'll be over in thirty minutes' I texted Jack as I hoped in the car. 'Ok see you soon' jack texted back. I turned off my phone and placed it on the center console. I was getting worried about Jack. He hasn't been himself lately. He's more sensitive, skinnier, shorter temper, and he's always wanting to get away from people.

I was so surprised when he called me over. 'Must be important' I thought as I pulled out of the driveway.

Thirty minute time skip

I arrived at the apartment complex, pulling into the parking space closest to Jack's place. Shutting the door I noticed that jacks car was extremely dirty. It looked like Jack haddnt used it in forever.

I finally got to Jack's door, room 29. There was a green post it note non the door. Garret, please come in I read. Opening the door I went to the kitchen, no one. I checked the living room and Jack's recording space but I couldn't find him. I looked in every room, starting at the first floor, making my way upstairs. I finally got to the bathroom upstairs, the only one in the house.

I placed my hand on the handle, ready to avert my eyes if needed. I slowly opened the door, gasping at what I saw. There was Jack, lying in the bathtub, a large cut in his leg spilling out blood. "Jack!" I screamed rushing over to him, tears streaming down my face.

Placing a hand behind his limp head, the other dialing an ambulance. "Nine-one-one, what's your emergency?" A woman spoke. "M-m-my little brother needs an ambulance! He-he-hes got a-a-a-a" I looked over to a bloody knife "he's attempted suicide" I said, checking his pulse, his wrists were scared with hundreds of long lines. It was barely there, but I felt it.

"Whats your addr"-"COURT STYLE APARTMENTS ROOM 29! NOW HURRY HES ALMOST DEAD!" I yelled into the phone, cutting her off. I heard mumbling from the other side of the line. "Ok sir we've sent an ambulance. stay calm. Now how did he attempt this?" She asked in an urgent voice. "He stabbed his thigh with a kitchen knife and it looks really deep" I said trying to calm down. "Apply pressure, use one hand to check the pulse" she instructed as I did exactly that. "The ambulance is almost there sir, you won't need me anymore but would you like me to say on the line?"

"Yes! I don't think I'll be able to do it alone" I answered as I heard the sirens going off In the distance. "My name is Marah by the way. How's his pulse?" Marah asked. "I can barely feel it." I responded. "How's his breathing?"

"Uhh" I tore off a piece of toilet paper with the hand that was checking his pulse, holding it up to his nose. I watched the bottom of the piece move. "He's still breathi"- I was interrupted by yelling. "PARAMEDICS! WHERE ARE YOU?!" said a male voice. "UPSTAIRS! IN THE BATHROOM!" I yelled back.

The medics ran into the bathroom seconds later, carrying all sorts of medical equipment. They pushed me aside and placed Jack onto a stretcher.
I was rushed to the ambulance, where I got in and sat on a bench, most likely for the people ( like me) who were with the one who encountered the incident.

The doctors were working on jack, tending to his wound, shocking his heart to keep him alive. Meanwhile I was just sitting on a bench, crying my eyes out, hoping that Jack would survive.

Small time skip

I was sitting in the waiting room with Ma and Pa, wondering if Jack had succeeded. "Mr. Garret McLoughlin? My associates and I would like to speak with you," Said a police man, he was standing with two other people. One was a short woman with a clipboard and the other was a broad man with a notepad.

Mark just hit 14 million! Yay!

"Umm *sniffle* yeah, sure" I responded, trying to look more professional. They took me outside into a large van. The officer motioned me to sit down on the ledge of the open trunk. "So" the officer continued "we understand that your brother had attempted suicide" I cringed "we would like to ask you some questions. Is that alright with you?" I nodded.

"good. This is detective Walsh and mrs. Kelly from the Pieta house suicide and self harm crisis Center." I smiled at them, as the waved to me.

There were lots of questions asked about Jack and his behavior. Detective Walsh was talking about the evidence when he mentioned a letters addressed to family and friends, one was addressed to Mark. 'That's strange' I thought to myself as detective Walsh kept speaking.

"may I see the letter? Address to family and friends." I asked wondering what Jack had written. "Oh... yes, of course" he handed me the letter. I read the whole thing in under a minute, tears building up as I went on. I handed the letter back to detective Walsh.

"Mr. Garret," Mrs. Kelly continued "I would like to speak with Jack if he heals. Here's my card" she said shoving a small, green card into my hand. 'Lauren Kelly, physical and mental therapist, pieta house suicide and self harm crisis center' the card read.

I was brought back inside, into the waiting room where my parents were approached by a doctor. The doctor was holding a clipboard and a pen, he motioned me over. I quickened my pace as I reached the doctor. A frown appeared on his face,"He's gone".

JUST KIDDING!!

I quickened my pace as I reached the doctor. "so? How is he?" My father demanded holding my mother in his arms. "He made it. He'll have to stay here for the next few weeks due to the severity of the wound, but other than that and therapy he'll be fine. He should wake up in a few hours." My mother and fathers mouths grew into huge smiles as did mine. "Can we see him?!" My mother questioned excitedly. "Room 302 on the second floor" the doctor said. I started walking immediately, deturmind to see my suicidal little brother. "Thank you" my father said as he started walking along with me.

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