Author: mahaenterprises

Reviewed by: _khusiyaan_

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Amplify (cover)

The cover is ok but there are too many pictures add which isn't needed only one individual picture is ok for them.
(As I myself made the cover but there are few mistakes in it)

Accent (title)

The title is common here as I myself read many books of the same title. Try something different.

Crescendo (blurb)

Blurb is clearly defined that Manik had mafia background which Nandini doesn't know but they love each other. So secret is itself out in blurb only so there in no interest to read further. You should have hid the information about Manik's background which Nandini don't know so that readers get attract to know what is stored inside but here it's none.

Hook (Prologue)

As here is no prologue because there is same thing written in prologue too which I read in blurb so I dont feel it's prologue. You can make adventurous here some secrets like manik talks in mafia style, Nandini Manik'sromantic conversation, Manik Nandini's separation because of manik secret.

Ballad (plot)

Plot is interesting one as starting there is college fun only so it's good to see how manan fell in love then Manik's secret but as you already mention manik secret in the blurb sonots okay, but plot is interesting to get to know how Manik will deal after Nandini know his secret.

Ensemble (character)

Character is same but here Manik secrets is shown as secret but in all starting it's all mention he is mafia so how can it be a secret now when you opened up here too.

Avant grad (storyline)

Storyline is good it's hooking too.

Cantabile (grammar )

I found many mistake here as example : panter

Which should be partner

Dolce (reviewer opinion)

Manik look should be mysterious here only that time it should be open when Nandini comes to know his secret. Ongoing story is ok it's slow how manan they met and all. Otherwise is ok.

~Neha

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