Reviewer: 000_aamira

Author: _sagigirl_

Amplify(Cover)

The cover is nice, but I feel the title is not clearly visible as it is been mixed with background colour, the colour of the background is black and the title is also written in the black so it makes difficult to read and also the name of the author is not clearly visible.

Accent(Title)

The title of the story is nice I feel you really worked hard while selecting the title as it was something new and uncommon also as the story proceeded I feel the title was totally apt for the story, but there was one mistake you have used the apostrophe 's in the God which is wrong your title is "The Universe of four God's " instead of this it should be " The Universe of Four Gods" because we use an apostrophe to show that one person owns something or it is the member of something, so I think you should correct it immediately. 

Crescendo( Blurb)

Blurb is something which readers are gonna read first and it will give them a slight idea about how the story is gonna proceed further. Here the blurb of your story is good and eye-catching and also it is giving us a slight idea of the plot.

Hook(Prologue)

The prologue was interesting it gave the inside view of the story as what is gonna happen in the story, also it was nice that how you added the blank scene of a future story, as a reader it definitely makes me curious to read the story further.

Ballad ( Plot)

The plot was very interesting and something new as I haven't read any story having this plot especially in Manan Fanfiction. How a 17-year-old girl gonna trapped in the fictional world while searching for some books in the library, So overall I loved the plot.

Ensemble(Characters)

There was no character sketch but I feel you did the right thing for not adding the character sketch at the starting of the story, as your story is full of mystery and adventure so it will interesting to see the new characters coming in the as the story will proceed. Also, I feel the character of Nandini is very well explained in the story but the character of Aliya is not giving much importance and, I think Aliya is also the important character of the story.

Avant Gard ( Storyline)

The storyline is a good and interesting one. It keeps hooking the readers that what is going to happen further, So keep it up and keep going.

Cantabile(Grammar)

Your grammar is simple and pretty good and easy to understand, but you definitely need to edit the book as there are so many typos mistakes So, I will suggest you read your chapter once again after you complete the writing. 

Dolce( Reviewer Opinion)

In my opinion, you should give your book to review when the book has at least 10 or above chapters. As your story is just started there still so many things to unfold. But overall the story is amazing I am excited to read further. You have done a nice job. I hope this review helps you. All the best

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