Book name: The game played by destiny (OS) 

Author: Nandi1103

Reviewer: Charmedone22

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 Amplify (Cover) 

The cover is really beautiful, I love the colours mixed with the grey. The font of Destiny is a bit difficult to read as the colour is red (I have that problem with the red font on white since the problems with my eyesight have started) and not black like the rest of the title but it can be ignored. There are no changes needed on the cover. 

 Accent (Title) 

The title suits the story perfectly, even though I feel that the word game feels very common and you could use synonymous for it. 

 Crescendo (Blurb) 

The blurb already awakened my interest so I'm easily ready to tap on the read button. I saw one small mistake and it was, "How will be their meet??" and it sounds better if it would have been, "How will their meet be?" 

 Hook (Prologue) 

The prologue was short and crisp. You don't know what's going to happen so it builds up the excitement and it's a story about Manan, so the excitement levels double up:p Well done:)

Ballad (Plot)

At first, it seemed like a common plot, but boy I was wrong. It had everything from hatred to a new beginning in the afterlife marking their love as eternal. You described it very well and as a reader I enjoyed reading it. 

 Ensemble (Characters) 

I loved the way Manik changed throughout the story because the first step of change is realizing their own mistakes and not repeating them. He became the version of him, that Nandini saw and loved in him. Nandini's character was amazing as always and she hadn't done anything that she was accused of, that saddened me as Manik trusted someone else rather than the love of his life. 

Avant Grad (Storyline) 

The storyline was just perfect, not too rushed and not too slow. I loved the way you had written a bit of their life without each other and then the most awaited part, their meet after three years of pain yet loving each other unconditionally. Him finding out that she never betrayed him but his friend cooked up some story to get to his money, then finding out that she's dying through a letter and the change of his after that. Him awaiting his death after visiting her grave and their love being marked as eternal left some tears in my eyes. Hat's off to you dear author 

 Cantabile (Grammar) 

I found some small mistakes, I mentioned one above in the blurb and now I'm coming to the others. "I didn't did anything," is wrong as "do" has to be in the present form with I instead of the past form, so it should be, "I didn't do anything, get..." Nandini left having some tears in her eyes. It seemed that their destiny doesn't want the to meet for one last time. (Same issues as with didn't do). I'd suggest you to reread the story and to edit it.

Dolce (Reviewer's Opinion) 

Overall the story is amazing, there's only some editing left to make it readable for those who see every little mistake. I'd suggest you use the app Grammarly (it's accurate the most of the time and sometimes it goes over the top with weird sentences which you then have to correct then). All the best, I hope I didn't sound rude. 

 Thank you, Charms (Reviewer, FMC)

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