Author: angel_champ

Reviewed by: sumani3456

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Amplify (Cover)

The cover is nice but I think as it is a Manan story ,there could be the addition of Manan pics between and on either side their Wolves will be great.

Accent (Title)

Coming to the accent of the Story. I think 'Story of the alpha' is common, so you can make little changes there, in my opinion.

Crescendo (Blurb)

This is the base of the story. It shows how the story is going to proceed and grabs the readers' attention first. The Blurb of the story is good and interesting.

Hook (Prologue)

It is yet another thing that grabs the readers' attention and gets them hooked to the story until the end. If the prologue is attractive it makes the reader enthusiastic to know what is going to happen next. The prologue of this story is good.

Ballad (Plot)

The plot of the story is different. This story revolves around the alpha couple who is going to give birth to a pup who possesses some powers different from others. How he is going to control the things before coming to this world and how he is going to be powerful when he grows. It is quite an interesting and mysterious plot.

Ensemble (Characters)

Here the main characters taken are Raj, Neyonika, Manik, Vikramaditya, Aradhya, Reyansh, Nandini, Viren, Jevika, Cabir, and Soha as they are important in the story for now. But I would recommend, you give a small introduction of these characters in the form of a character sketch. As you have not explained about the characters in the story and readers would be waiting to know how the characters would be proceeding further in the story.

Avant Grad (Storyline)

The storyline is good and enjoyable.It shows how powerful Manik is going to be. The bonding between Manik and Cabir and their families is nice. You can show how MaNan will get to know about each other as their families are friends. It is somewhat confusing who is Soha and how Manik is attached to her. So you can show it in further chapters.

Cantabile (Grammar)

The grammar of the story is good. Keep going like this.

Dolce(opinion)

I have read the entire 10 chapters of the story in one day and I have enjoyed reading it

-Sumani

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