Author: rashi_cutie

Reviewer: angel_champ

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Amplify (cover) 

The font of the title, your name, shade of cover is nice. But the cover is not related to the title. Revenge for love-this can be depicted with two pictures.

Accent (Title)

The title is nothing new or unheard. But then it didn't suit the story. The only time you portrayed revenge is the first chapter. That will also be termed as hatred or anger. So I suggest a better title would do good like a journey with a crush.

Crescendo (Blurb)

Blurb is nice but I feel still something can be added maybe point of view of Nandini, also there were too much emoji's used which shouldn't be the case.

Hook (Prologue) 

It is nice and exciting.

But this isnt what we call as prologue, it was just ine sided conversation of Manik with his Mom, a prologue should have a little description of the characters or the story with some future enthralling scenes from the story to make it more interesting and attractive.

Ballad (Plot) 

I didn't find anything new in the plot. But a twist of Abhi's entry is nice. Hope further chapters are interesting.

Assemble (Characters) 

I think you should work on them. If possible do show others POV.

Cantablie (Grammar)

You should avoid using an ellipsis. Everything is perfect.

Dolce (Reviewer's Opinion) 

Do add twists and pov it will make ur story better.
Quit using message languages for writing a story and try quitting the use of emoji's and describe the emotions through words.

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